Welcome to the Real World

Fortunately, I bought half of it and felt that Shura Field was too funny. I wanted to read some sweet additions at the end, so I went straight to the ending, this ending. . . . . It's so strange 1. The "real world" has formed a new world of its own and has its own world rules. So after 1.3 Billion people log out, where does this "real world" go? 2. The "Real World" in the story at the beginning was created by a capital company, and Qi Yi was just consuming himself to maintain their lives. It can be said that "Qi Lingxi" and "Qi Yi" are completely correct. But in the real world, "Real World" is a game compiled by Qi Yi himself (for Qi Lingxi), and then Qi Lingxi himself turned the game into a parallel world - the two of them are guilty, because of their selfishness, they almost killed 1.3 Billion people, but in the end because Qi Lingxi sacrificed himself to maintain the existence of the parallel world, they were forcibly cleared? Moreover, according to the logical inference of the article, is he really sacrificing himself for 1.3 Billion people? If it was for 1.3 Billion people, then why didn't these 1.3 Billion people wake up and only Qi Yi woke up (which means that he could send people out, but the cost might be relatively high. And when he sent Qi Yi out and sacrificed himself at the same time, he didn't calculate that Qi Yi could save himself, that is, save the world.)? If he didn't sacrifice himself, would Qi Yi also die? So he sacrificed himself for Qi Yi, not for the 1.3 Billion people. Those people were just incidental. 3. In addition, the worldview of this article is very confusing. From the beginning, it has been emphasized that "strong AI" will inevitably appear. In the end, there is no strong AI on the Internet anymore. Qi Lingxi, the only strong AI, must leave the network and possess her own body in order to bring 1.3 Billion people back to life - does this mean that strong AI should not exist? Inconsistent 3. It took twenty years to build one body, and the second body still took twenty years without speeding up. This shows that this is a very difficult technology (even the calculation amount of strong AI cannot be accelerated) - such technology is destined to be mastered by only a few people and becomes a tool for capitalists and wealthy people. How can it benefit the world? On the contrary, it can only perpetuate capitalists and cause disaster. When the author wrote this paragraph, he did not consider logical issues at all. He just "wanted to explain such a setting, and then wrote it down, without considering other related settings and how to rationalize the setting." This section is the rubbishest in my opinion. In order to be with Qi Yi, Qi Lingxi turned the game into a parallel world and almost killed 1.3 Billion people. She almost died, and Qi Yi also wasted forty years. As a result, Qi Lingxi didn't learn her lesson at all. In order to continue to be with Qi Yi (in order to prevent Qi Yi from dying), she once again opened Pandora's box, artificial body, and once again opened the real world that should no longer exist. What about behind? After seventy years, the two of them plan to create another body and be reborn again? And then be reborn again seventy years later? I can only see one word: greed. He just wanted to be with Qi Yi all the time. Even though they had been together for thousands of years and countless worlds, he was still not satisfied, so he acted recklessly without considering the possible consequences of his actions. The character shown by Qi Lingxi here is completely that of a naughty child who has no sense of right and wrong, is greedy and selfish, but has mastered the world's top knowledge, and his parents are not aware of his problems and continue to pamper him. It is completely different from the character at the beginning who is "level one in mathematics, a cold-blooded male god, and willing to venture into the virtual world alone for the sake of 1.3 Billion people." This ending is really terrible. I condensed what could have been written into seventy chapters into seven chapters. It's terrible. (In order to prevent someone from messing with me, please follow my "first point" and "second point" in the comment area in an orderly manner when rebutting me. If you don't mark it, it means that you have not read the entire comment of mine, and you have not understood what I am talking about. You just started to complain when you saw something that is different from your own opinion.)

I'm not a fan of Long Qi, but it was many years ago when I first read my wife's articles, and I have read every one of them. Such a deep emotional foundation makes me reluctant to give a negative score, but for these last few chapters, I deserve one. ?? This article is just unfinished. There is nothing to argue about. You think it looks good, the reversal is reasonable, and the logic is self-consistent. I will never deny it, but sisters, online articles are also literary works. In many cases, its storytelling and look and feel are the most important criteria for judging it. If the requirements of novel readers are merely logical coincidences, then why don't we just read the synopsis? Do you still want to waste time reading tens of thousands of words and hundreds of thousands of words? Shouldn't the content crammed into the last few chapters of this article be described in at least half of the first seventy chapters? The writer chooses to use words like a running list to prevaricate the readers. Reading back and forth is like seeing an art candidate draw a portrait. The eyebrows are clear, but there is not enough time, and the mouth is directly drawn in a circle. It is angry and funny. ?? Let's talk about logic again. This story is indeed logical, but looking at the timeline, this is a reverse chronological article that conceals the beginning. This is a nicer way to call it, but in the case of this book I would like to call it a plot cheat that allows writers to be confident. Isn't it strange that everything is turned upside down? Shocked? There is not even any foreshadowing, and there is no hint anywhere in the article that what the author wants to say is what is hidden under the cloth. The revelation of the final truth was extremely harsh. Very disappointing. If it were written unfolding, it would have been entirely possible to make this ending rational and even fascinating through narration and progression, but my wife did not do this and ended it hastily and abruptly. This attitude is unacceptable. ?? The biggest problem with the character design is that the front and back offense and defense are completely different. The sisters in the long review made the problem very clear. I will tell you my feelings from the perspective of a reader's psychology. What everyone is attracted to read is the heart-warming Shou novel full of Shura fields. I guess most people's enjoyment is based on the uniqueness of Shou's perspective, and the thick single arrow between the attack and the sect in a bloody and contradictory plot. At the end, the identity of the attack and the sect suddenly changed. I don't know if others have. I lost a certain sense of security for a moment. The relationship between these two people that I thought I knew clearly after reading more than seventy chapters suddenly changed beyond recognition, haha, the dynamics of offense and defense are different. Really, it was outrageous. If everything was completely different from what I thought, what on earth was I enjoying before? Even the previous chapters, My Wife, are not as good as the old ones, Marshal, I Want to Ascend, and Seven Men, they are all much better than this. Sigh?? Generally speaking, this article gives the impression that my wife is in transition and doesn't want to write about a pure and bloody Shura field, but it failed. The Shura field part was also unattended. Many words and sentences are exactly the same as the old article, and the story I conceived has also collapsed. I hope that my wife will adjust to it soon. I will have to keep an eye on the future stories before reading them.

This reversal is really about me, huh??? Although the writing is quite good, I can't comment on the plot. But I was attracted by the character from the beginning. Suddenly the character was changed at the end, I really, ah??? Help, help, help It's too low-key to cut down

The unfinished work is self-evident. Every once in a while, the author writes a book of the same type to make money, and then each book is more confusing than the other.

The setting was good but the ending was hasty. The copy was too short and half-written to force the ending, and there was little foreshadowing. Too uncomfortable

Gong Shou's personality has changed... Damn it, whoever sees it feels uncomfortable. I originally came in to see the cold and paranoid Gong, but what happened?!

It's so weird, I can't explain it. It's like I wrote the outline and then forced the ending. It's a bit confusing.

If the reversal is just to bring a new character and world view, instead of bringing a high dynasty/turn/change to the readers, then what is the significance of the final reversal... In the last few chapters, Gong and Shou's speaking styles and characters have completely changed, friends have become Gong's friends, and Shou's life is all made up by virtual imagination ()

Although the ending is together, the ending is really perfunctory. Can't we live with a few more chapters? Are you short of money for those chapters? It's so sad. Even though we are together, it's still so sad. Sure enough, solo work is the best, but separation and death are so heart-wrenching. Suddenly I realized that I am so happy. I have lived alone for 24 years, with no separation of life and death, no joys and sorrows, and will continue to be so. My little heart cannot bear it. . . . Sad sad sad

The last few chapters feel so far-fetched. They are just describing things without any emotional development. It feels like a third of the plot has been crammed into a few chapters. The whole ending is very sloppy, anticlimactic, and a bit uncomfortable.