After quitting his job, Gu Huai was trying to make ends meet at home when he got the news that his hometown was being demolished. He was overjoyed.
After finishing all the paperwork and waiting for the money to arrive, Gu Huai grew frantic with impatience.
When the notification came through, he looked at the zeroes in his bank account and felt short of breath.
Gu Huai decided to take off on a whim. But when he got out at his destination, he was left dumbstruck.
After cursing the unreliable travel ads, Gu Huai realized that he seemed to have arrived in another world?!!!
Don't ask how he figured it out. Right now, he just wants the mechanical voice in his head to shut up!!
Theme: Whether it's love or work, you have to put your heart into it.
Damn it, I feel so drained when I see it now
Although you say there is too much content, I think it's okay. It doesn't seem to be too lengthy, and it doesn't mean it's unreadable. At least the fun of the novel is still there.
"Net" caught the author a big bug ~ to
Where is the author? I don't know how to file a complaint. I just want to return but I don't know what to complain about. So how to undo. Never.
The first chapter is indeed too much and complicated. Just explain the protagonist's family background and the reason for the time travel. There is no need to write in too much detail. .
This chapter could definitely be more concise, otherwise it would be easy to persuade people to leave.