The Untouchable Floating Clouds

Has the author ever considered redoing this article? (Funny) I'm rubbing my hands in anticipation~

Don't move around here, I'll buy you some oranges... (Ahem, it's a joke)

The Villain's Path and Being in Cao's Camp and Being in Han's Heart are masterpieces! Novels where you can't guess what will happen next second are simply poisonous! It's addictive! ^_^ I strongly recommend you to write about comprehensive horror or science fiction. You are simply a genius in this area! I have seen the Gong Suo Xin Jade. Please note that it is the size of the Gong Suo Xin Jade, not the size of the Gong Suo Xin Jade! !

It's pretty good among 18bg articles, but because I've read another system article by the author Sang, when I look back at this article, I always feel like it's your dark history╮(╯▽╰)╭

In fact, I think it depends on the setting of the original work. It's only right that the tutoring story takes place in the same parallel world. Because I remember that when the battle was going on ten years later, there was a passage that mentioned it. All other worlds are shattered. Only the world they live in has not yet been shattered. And the ring of the Vongola family is vertical in time. Unlike Bailan's horizontal space. Prynne. Uni can also obtain information. But Vongola doesn't seem to have this function? ? And I feel like the author's settings are good. It seems that I have read the beginning of this article before? But I didn't finish it later. It's a pity that it was not written? That is. . . Well, there is no feeling of paving the way? So does jumping 10 years. The same goes for Hibari's emotional changes. Actually I think before the jump of 10 years. You can let the heroine transfer more souls to some people. Interact more with Skylark. Only then can Skylark's emotional changes be more natural. That is, think about the time when I was on Skylark at the beginning. It feels like I haven't stayed long yet. Not enough to integrate into Skylark's life. It's not enough to give Skylark the kind of emotional depth that the heroine would be unaccustomed to without. Even if there is an extra story explaining that Skylark slowly understood his feelings after 10 years of waiting, it still feels a little inadequate? ? (In other words, waiting for 10 years without emotional depth is really not about forgetting but finding love. Because I have always felt that Skylark's love must be a trickle of water, the kind that boils the frog in warm water until Skylark gets used to it. ╮(╯▽╰)╭What am I talking about?) But even so, I really like this article! There is no doubt about this. Compared to other Mary Sues, she is on a par with Hibari. All I can say is drunk. In addition, there is a similar article in Amway, but it is written by a fan of Net King Yukimura. It's called "Yukimura, come and use the toilet!" This article is also about the heroine's soul passing through the male protagonist's body, and the souls coexist. But the setting of soul coexistence is really well developed. Interested friends can go and take a look. O(∩_∩)O~

I just forgot to rate it. ╮(╯▽╰)╭

It's one of a kind after reading it. . . . ╮(╯▽╰)╭ Expression. . . . Cry, can't cry. But to say everything is perfect. . Again. . . . Anyway. . . I can only do ╮(╯▽╰)╭

I always feel like I want to cry but I can't.

Thank you to the author for making me waste napkins [QAQ]

I, I, I, I actually cried when I saw it at the end... Is it because I shed tears? [It is indeed] It is very touching and I like this article very much... But the heroine dressed in front of me made me... Faint [it's because you don't have the ability to understand it, okay?]