
The Plot Went Off the Rails
剧情被玩崩了
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 278k Words
- Genre
- Baihe (GL)
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
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Alas, monthly updates! To be honest, this is the first book I have read every month, and I still insist on keeping it on the bookshelf. What I am reading is no longer a book, what I am reading is chasing feelings! (Sad
Author, do you remember that this is a world where you are cultivating immortals? There are laws in the age of the end of the Dharma. I got the carrots. Why, before your people left, the immortals couldn't fly over, right? It's all your credit for the purity. People before were all fools.
You wrote about restoring the Central Plains, and then Qin Shihuang also said in the book that he wanted to establish a country like the Tang Dynasty. This is so typical, and the author must be a good historian.
Cos Mr. Sun, right [Joker], author, tell me honestly whether you were preparing for the modern history exam when you wrote this article.
Female protagonist = Immortal version of Hong Xiuquan
If you had ever seen the history of the Taiping Heavenly Kingdom, you would never act like this [clown][clown][clown], it's so classic
What are you writing about? The economic base determines the superstructure. Then you should learn how to boost productivity. How can you join the army? What on earth are you writing about? I want to write about the overall situation and group portraits, but inevitably make the protagonist into a single protagonist. Even the other heroine doesn't even have a role. What are you playing? Author, you have ruined the plot yourself. It is indeed to the point. [Joker] [Joker] [Joker] [Joker] [Joker] [Joker] We are having fun.
What kind of protagonist is this protagonist? He just wants to achieve heroism in a feudal society. On the surface, it is respect for great men. What are you actually doing? You just force him to do it by force. How can a small farmer jump right away? Just add a buff to my world of immortality, right? There is no limit on money and food, right? Is this right? There are two other protagonists doing what they are doing. Is it right to believe in red and do heroic things? I am here to see the cultivators, not to see you here to transform the feudal society. Where are the roles of the two heroines? You can at least write two or three worlds for me. What is the focus of your first world? Artificial gods, right?
You just copied it without considering the actual situation. On the surface, you admire the martyrs, but in fact, you are doing the opposite. You forgot the four words of seeking truth from facts.
What is the difference between this and Wang Mang? Can it be done? Can it be done?