[The Outcast] Where Does the Dao Lie?

Now that the third chapter has come to an end, I couldn't help but take a chance to see if the author will come back to spread the soil one day, although I feel that the author may have fainted from the plot of the original work.

The writing style is really good, and the characterization of the protagonist is very heartwarming. Looking forward to a big update, come on!

Damn, is it going to be updated soon? [Poor] [Poor] [Empty bowl], I've been waiting for many years [Crying]

Damn, I felt a little relieved when I saw the comment section. I thought I forgot?

Come and send OC2! Added 233 elements of handsome brothers in the comment area. OC's name is Cheng Ruogu, a 26-year-old from Jiangxi. Their nicknames are Xiao Guzi (a term for seniors), Brother Guzi (a term for peers and juniors), and Chen Guzi (a term for jokes). At 178cm, he is the perfect candidate for the high jump event in the Southern Middle School Sports Games. Her shoulder-length hair was tied into a small braid at the nape of her neck. He learned craftsmanship in Jingdezhen and has superb fire control technology and weapon refining skills. Different from Huo Dezong's extensive use of flames, Gu Zige's flames are not combined with physical skills. Instead, the temperature, layout, and dosage of the flames are precisely adjusted and applied to formations or artifacts to achieve optimal results. As for his unique weapon-making skills, this can be seen from the fact that he made all the dishes and vases at Trinity Gate (bushi). Inspired by ice-cracked porcelain, Gu Zige refined his own fire-patterned porcelain, which has multiple functions. For example, there is no heating in the south, so this is used instead of the radiator (bushi). Another example is that it can be applied to weapons, armor and even concealed weapons. The reason why he became a disciple was because Zuo Changge went to Sanqing Mountain to talk about Taoism. He also went to Jingdezhen to buy souvenirs for the children in the disciples. He met a group of students from Jing Tao who came to look for broken porcelain pieces, and found a student who had only received a formal education but was trying to make weapons on his own. Zuo Changge was attracted by his non-arguing (not impatient or obsessive) character and potential attitude of "refining the heart with tools and entering the Tao with the heart". He thought that he might be able to take a further step in Taoism, so he started to study. By the way, Brother Guzi has a good way of studying. He was admitted to the Department of Chemistry of a capital university in Jiangxi, a province where college entrance examinations are popular. For unknown reasons, he was inspired to make pottery, so he went to Jingdezhen Ceramics Institute for "retreat" (which became a big topic of conversation among strangers at class reunions), and gradually came into contact with local craftsmen. Although he is a long-haired otaku who doesn't talk much, he surprisingly doesn't give off a gloomy impression, and his tolerant personality is quite popular among his teachers.

Then let me apply an OC I drew before to a one-person world view! My OC is a little girl named Wen Tanyi, 14 years old, whose nickname is Xiaotan. There is a short ponytail tied high. (In the original setting, she is ranked third, followed by her junior brother hh who is older than her) Most ranking authors can change the ww, probably to be in the middle. Xiao Tan is very energetic and attaches great importance to seniority. She will face her senior brothers and sisters with a correct attitude. (But when faced with less serious senior brothers and sisters, Xiao Tan will play with them regardless of age. If the joke is too big, Xiao Tan will be slapped on the head for being naughty haha). Xiao Tan's five senses are very sensitive, and he is better at physical techniques from punching to the flesh than other mysterious techniques. He practices a set of boxing techniques, which focus on the "energy" of the Arrancar. Wherever the fist hits, a continuous flow of energy will be generated like waves hitting rocks, causing three waves of superimposed damage along the meridians. Medium solid, not very strong but not weak either, after all, he is very young (if your wife wants to see it, you can send her a picture of the OC hh, it is a black and white w). Xiaotan was spotted by other senior sisters who were traveling when she was about two or three years old. She was found squatting next to a tricycle watching ants on the edge of a paddy field in a small village. The grandma who originally adopted Xiaotan had a small building in an alley, and she would listen to operas while tapping her tea bowl with chopsticks. Grandma was in good health and died at a healthy age. She had no plans to set up a childhood misfortune. Finally, my daily confession to my wife, I am looking forward to the next update!

The Lujia line is almost finished, when will it be updated?

I haven't seen such a comfortable person in a long time. The writing is great! ! !

I'm really sorry for the delay. I'm really too busy. Mainly because I have a short winter vacation and heavy homework. I can only finish writing before writing. It's my first time to write an OC. It's very wordy. If I find the setting... If it conflicts with the plot to be written, it can be omitted. After a detailed study of one person's timeline, Laotianshi was born around 1900 when the Eight-Power Allied Forces invaded China (the guess is similar to Changge). Because I want to set the identity background due to historical conditions, I don't know if it has any impact on the plot QAQ Name: Bai Ben (four sounds of bi) Bai Wuran can also be used. It is also taken from the "Book of Changes" like Qing Ge. "Bai Ben, no blame." Bai Ben: untainted in life, returning to nature. In order to achieve coolness and ease, stability and ease, and freedom from the shackles of troubles. Gender: Male Ranking within the door: second in line? (Second senior brother? Because Lu Jin is the eldest junior brother below Chang Ge. He originally wanted to be the second senior brother (laughing and crying)) As long as he is older, it depends on the arrangements. Age: Born in 1902 (not sure? He is just younger than Changge) Life background: After the Eight-Power Allied Forces invaded China, people in Tianjin were affected by the disaster (Tianjin was the most severely affected after research). They were displaced. After being separated from their families at a young age, they were begging for a living. , Named him Bai Ben, hoping that he would not be stained in this world. It can be proved that reverse birth occurs. (Inner os: After that, the exhausted tired bird finally returned to the forest and could never leave again) Appearance: Shota Form: thin and pale, with a shrunken body but a pair of cold, transparent eyes Adult form: (prefers white clothes) pale and handsome, with black hair hanging down his shoulders, long and narrow eyes, cold eyebrows, black pupils shining like stars, looking straight at each other, transparent but indifferent (seems too Mary Sue? I'm just pinching my face) Personality: I think to describe it as a whole, it would be contradictory and complicated. I feel like I am always trying to break away but am bound; cold on the outside and hot on the inside (not good at expressing myself and not knowing what to say, so I am cold and clumsy when I am hot). I have studied the three levels of rebirth. If you want to be a human being and become an immortal at the same time, you need to use the method of reversal. I don't think I understand it very well. It's analogous to the way of practicing unfeeling in cultivation. You have to understand emotions first and then be unfeeling? Because after struggling in the world, he abandoned the world. Later, because of his teacher's expectations and desire to reach Bai Ben's state, he realized the third level of reverse rebirth. However, due to his childhood experiences, he realized that what his elders could not achieve, but he longed for emotion and warmth in his heart. The connection with the Trinity Clan family is very strong, so he can't break away from the seven emotions and six desires to achieve the state of reincarnation and tranquility without desires and desires. He can despise everything else but can never break away from the family relationship with the Trinity Clan senior brothers and sisters. So he is very conflicted. Then I feel that giving him this name has a sense of fate. This is a knot that will never be solved. In the end, he will definitely not be able to break free of the connection between the Trinity Gate and his life force, and will pay his life for it. Because it is his tired bird returning to the forest. I don't know if I have a different idea when reading the article. I always feel that Changge is in a state of "forced separation" because everyone who can touch her emotions has left (? Personal thoughts, if the article has this idea, I hope Bai Ben's departure or the passing of such an "unproven" fate can give Changge some inspiration and opportunity. And his coldness on the outside and hotness on the inside must be reflected in his treatment of people in the Trinity Sect. For example, he likes to quietly tease the cute junior brothers or junior sisters. He also wants to see those serious and old-fashioned, or honest seniors change their faces. Of course, it's because I want to see them show different sides because of their own achievements and because of their actions. It must be interesting to look serious when doing bad things, and he will secretly blush, and he is not good at expressing emotions. Very clumsy and cute feeling The technique that the third level of eliminating adverse health is good at: it is similar to the small phaseless technique! Because he was given the title of Zuomen Zhang not only because of his survival experience and "Qingqi Qi" in recruiting disciples, but also because his Qi has strong plasticity. At the same time, his imitation ability and visual capture and reproduction ability are also very strong! So it's an ability similar to the Small Phaseless Kung Fu! —— In this way, we can better understand the "ultimate re-engraving skills" of simplicity and simplicity, and then because Qi's plasticity is strong, we can create the effect of "disguise", hehe, this is fun. (For example, pretending to be senior sister Changge to train to fight against stupid young junior sisters. Or using other people's faces to do bad things?) This seems a bit bad taste and OOC? Then there are some interesting plots that I want to add: I set his identity as storyteller/feng shui master/fortune teller when he goes out, in order of time. As for the storyteller, it feels like it was around the time of the Republic of China. I wonder if the kind of storyteller who is like a fairy would be teased by a bold young lady or a young master? When I go out on a trip, I often like to bring some weird souvenirs and small gifts to my senior fellow students. And as for fortune tellers, I feel that they must keep up with the trend of the times, so in almost modern times, because fortune telling and divination are no longer popular, so they can only buy tarot cards and divination? ! ! Then I was surrounded by a group of JKs to divine their love fortune (? But I feel like I can't write it, woo woo, modern times must be dead) It seems like I wrote too much QAQ

Li Yueyi, a twelve or thirteen-year-old girl, ranked relatively low. She has long black hair and very light eye color. She is unforgettable like a lake under the moon. She is a bit greedy. She often extorts snacks from her fellow apprentices. She is also a little pervert. She likes to cling to whichever younger apprentice is more beautiful. She likes her older sister very much because she will tie her hair in particularly beautiful braids (actually other younger brothers). I am also willing to tie her hair in pigtails, but for a grown man, martial arts is fine, but tying hair is not. He almost made the little girl bald) In terms of personality, she is actually still a child, a little afraid of strangers. Although she is well-behaved most of the time, she sometimes has a willful and unreasonable side. If she doesn't like to practice, she always wants to sneak out to play with her brothers. As for the reason for joining the Trinity Sect, it has to do with the little girl's physical condition. Li Yueyi was born in a squire family. Although her father loved her, her mother died young. She was born in a coffin after her mother died. She was born with a ghostly spirit, more like a dead person than a living person, and easily provoked ghosts and ghosts. Her mother's soul also stayed by her side and refused to leave. Her father was worried that she would die young or be taken away by spirits. He also saw that the Sanyi sect members seemed to be gods, so he let Li Yueyi worship her as a third member. In order to save her life, I hope that the third level of reverse life can make the little girl return to her true nature, wash away a trace of ghost energy from her body, and become an ordinary person. However, the little girl is very open-minded and feels that if there is no trace of ghost energy in her body, she would not be able to see her mother when she was a child.