[The King's Avatar] The Character Cards Look All Wrong

Teacher, I really hope you can come back. I really like this article so much. Woohoo, if I leave you a long comment, will you have more desire to come back? I have a lot of rainbow farts that I want to blow to you. Woo hoo hoo, never mind, as long as you have a chance to see it and have a slight thought of wanting to come back, my rainbow fart will be meaningful, I will start blowing it right now! ! ! Although teacher, you have mentioned many times in your essay that you are not very satisfied with your writing, but I really think your writing is excellent! Next, I will explain why I think this article is well written from the following aspects! First, the character creation is excellent Teacher, you are really good at creating characters. As an old bookworm, I have read a lot of books (there must be thousands of them), but there are very few heroines as lovable as Bai Wu. She has extraordinary beauty. Generally, this kind of setting is easy to write into a disgusting love-at-first-sight story or a somewhat flat beauty-invincible story. This is not the case at all. Teacher, you designed a very wonderful flaw for Baiwu - pathological social fear, which turned her from a flat heartthrob to a beautiful and powerful woman with special style. This article fully portrays Bai Wu. She is beautiful, pure, fanatical, idealistic, reserved but tragic. Although Baiwu gained a lot of initial favorability from the male guests because of her beauty, her beauty never really made her journey to glory go smoothly (instead, it brought some minor setbacks), and the goodwill born of Baiwu's beauty did not turn into exaggerated special treatment or anything like that. Moreover, beauty is the least worth mentioning advantage of Bai Wu. Her stubborn protection of the people she cares about, her desperate pursuit of victory, and her perseverance in adversity... All of this makes Bai Wu's character extremely dazzling in the context of a full-time master. It can be said that Baiwu's style of painting is so well integrated with that of the Avatar, and she is almost like a native Avatar character. Her core is so similar to those pure players in the Avatar that the collision creates a particularly wonderful spark, which makes people want to stop watching! Speaking of which, I have to mention that this article really spent a lot of effort to figure out the character. Not only the heroine Bai Wu, but also the other original characters who interact with her are also wonderfully portrayed! Writing about Bai Wu's protection of Lin Jingyan corresponds to Lin Jingyan's escape and wavering after he wanted to repay this protection but was defeated; writing about Bai Wu and Ye Xiu being both idealists corresponds to writing about Ye Xiu's constant love for Bai Wu. The intolerance of hurting others after being frustrated and the silent care behind the mocking face; writing about Zhao Yuzhe, who hurt Bai Wu and was hidden by Bai Wu, not only writes about his guilt under the admiration of his youth, but also writes about his eagerness for attention; writing about Huang Shaotian, not only Not only does he write about him being enthusiastic and talkative, but he also writes about him being a sinister and cunning opportunist. When writing about Fang Rui, he not only writes about his kindness, but also about his loneliness and arrogance outside the team; Second, the relationship line and career line and growth line are particularly well balanced. In romance novels about The Master, it is actually very difficult to write about the heroine as a fan of the contestants, because as a contestant, you cannot only write about the emotional line, but also about the career line of the contestant. It would be okay if these two lines only focused on the emotional line, but for a bookworm with my taste, it would be almost uninteresting. This book is particularly good. It mainly writes about Bai Wu's career as a player, and other people's emotional changes towards Bai Wu as undercurrents as she grows up. The most important thing is that not only is it well balanced, but the career line competition is really wonderfully written! When describing game competitions, if you use game terminology too much, it will be dry, and if you describe the pictures too much, it will be draggy. This book combines the skill terms of the game with the pictures that create the effect very wonderfully, giving people the feeling of watching a cartoon! Especially the scene between Bai Wu and Zhou Zekai in the arena, it was tragic and beautiful, and it was so exciting just reading the text. If there is an animation, it will definitely be the return of God! I feel like, sir, if you write martial arts fan fiction or immortality novels, it will definitely be exciting. Your ability to depict fights is amazing! Baiwu's growth has not been smooth sailing, and her career path has been full of setbacks. But teacher, you have grasped it very well. At least I did not feel aggrieved. Instead, I was fascinated by this feeling of beauty, strength, and misery. Beauty, strength, and misery are right. There are no setbacks at all, and the excitement will drop when I wake up later! Woohoo, I just fell into a trap before I got to the cool place... Beauty and beauty are my permanent xp. I am also a lunar person. I really like all kinds of beauty in the moon (Artoria, Black Jeanne, Karna, Cave King...) In short, the beauty and beauty on Baiwu's body is really very lunar style. I like it so much. Teacher, please come back! I have reread this article many times. I haven't counted it specifically, but basically I come back to it every once in a while, maybe five or six times. Every time I read it, I am particularly touched. Thank you teacher for creating an article about fairy grass! (It would be better if you can come back to fill in the pits.) Teacher, the last time you updated was several years ago. At that time, your IP was still displayed abroad. I wonder if you are still doing well in the third dimension now. It is not peaceful abroad now. I hope everything is well with you, teacher! Teacher, a few years have passed. Maybe for you, you will face many problems when you come back to fill in the pits (such as not remembering the original setting, your love for full-time work has faded, writing articles requires rest time...), But I really want to say, teacher, you are a very, very talented and special person. Don't be a clever person, you are simply born to eat online articles. The articles you write are very exciting and attractive. Not only the characterization and career line I mentioned above, this novel also has many other special advantages. Even if there is only one in 10,000 chance, please consider coming back to fill in the gaps! Even if one chapter is updated a month, that's still great! Finally, come to life, my love! ! ! ! [Crying] [crying] [crying] [crying]

Bai Wu tried his best and couldn't pull up the whole team. What should Lin do? Can this story continue? Lan Yu hasn't written it yet. Come on, author, your writing is really good. We are all looking forward to their development trajectory in the parallel world.

I don't know how many times a desperate squatter has repainted the screen. How come he is so good at writing? Teacher, please come back soon. [Crying] (Dark crawling)

I was so excited when I saw the big reply from readers in the comment area [ burst into tears ]. It will be great if you come back and visit us. I read this book over and over again, it's so beautiful. I was so excited that I almost cried.

I have read a lot of full-time articles recently, and I have wandered back to this pit. Teacher, your writing is really good. Are you too busy in the third dimension? Woohoo, I really hope to see updates in my lifetime. I like Baiwu very much, and I also like this article. Woohoo, teacher, you are really good at writing. Sports, I love it every time I read this article. It's obviously Su Wen, but he writes such a beautiful, powerful, and miserable tragedy. It's really special. There's no meal replacement at all. Wow. [Crying] Teacher, please come back and update. If you come back and update, everyone is willing to do anything [crying] [crying]

Our Xiao Wu is so cute. I feel that our Xiao Wu and Samsara are very compatible. Soon we can connect with the airwaves of Qi Zhou. The two furries stick together and chatter about what they are saying. They kiss. After several rounds of luggage, they finally match up with the Xiao Wu whom I miss so much. So cute! So cute! No matter where he transfers to, he'll be super cute!

It turns out that my God, I feel so unwilling to watch this all the way... Although I know that I can't win from the front, I feel sad to be stuck here. The opponent is strong, your team is on the verge of collapse, many teams are eager to poach people... Worry about Bai's mentality, which team should you go to if your worries turn...

I've finished reviewing it again🥹Teacher, I miss you so much at the bottom of the pit

Madam... Please come back [crying]. I won't give up waiting for you!

Boss 🥺 come back quickly! Now you can charge full time, I am willing to pay for you [please] [please] [please]