When a Homebody Is Kept in a Golden Cage

To be honest, I originally wanted to give the author one star, but I let it go because the previous writing was good, but this one is really bad in my opinion. I had typed more than 10,000 words just now, but Jinjiang suddenly pulled me out of it... I suspect it was because the author was a senior in high school at the time and couldn't do two things at once, so it was unfinished. (This paragraph originally had more than 700 words. I analyzed the author's bad writing as a whole and expressed my anger, but Jinjiang kicked me out, so I am even more angry now and changed the 0 points to -2 points) First, let's talk about the details. You didn't fill in any of the foreshadowing you laid earlier! Let's not talk about those two things about wheat bran, but what about that rookie? Earlier, he wrote that he wanted to take revenge on the nanny afterwards, and that he had to be raped, and he also led people to beat him up, and gathered people to make trouble. The author just wrote that the first attack was not at the home, and there was no way to deal with it. Then he returned to the home, and why was there no solution? Aren't you pretending to be a loving wife? Can you tolerate this? Don't care at all? Just ignore it completely? Did the author forget? Combined with the author's previous description of Gong not being able to eat spicy food, and the later details such as F4's ability to eat spicy food, we can see that you have probably forgotten it. At the same time, you have also forgotten to explain why Gong suffers from such severe social phobia, and what happened to the poor boy named Wang (I originally typed more than 1,000 words for this paragraph and analyzed the details of at least 10 authors I found besides the above, but it just got stuck) Secondly, let's talk about the protagonist's father. I highly doubt that the author has ever experienced family affection and doesn't know how a normal family can get along with each other before he can write about a father and son who are like enemies. Do you have any misunderstandings about wealthy father and son? Doesn't this father really have a grudge against his son? And the author's writing is also very messy. One moment he is a history teacher who is being criticized and criticized, another moment he is a blind date, another moment the two families are family friends, and now this cheap dad is not sure of Shou's coping ability, so he has to hire his son's fiancée to suppress the other company? Are you okay? From the mother of the protagonist written by the author, we can know that this cheap father has accepted his daughter-in-law. Good guy, is this how you accept it? Continuing to suppress others, they were forced to go to social gatherings and drink until they vomited in the toilet. After thoroughly checking the family's background, they did not find out that the Cai family had suppressed them before. Of course, the author may have forgotten it. Moreover, this cheap dad is also merciless to his son. Regarding his son suffering from severe social phobia for unknown reasons (at least I don't know), his attitude is that if he can't survive it, he is not a man? With this attitude, I thought he had several illegitimate children, and this son was born to his disfavored ex-wife! It turns out that you and your beloved wife have worked hard together in poverty. It's true that parents love each other and their son is an accident. (I originally wrote more than 2,000 words for this paragraph, but my jj card ran out) Let's talk about Gong described by the author. I understand that you want to write about Gong who is passionately devoted, but in my opinion, I don't see how much he loves him at all. It's just a verbal talk. Isn't it really a joke? Do you want to see for yourself what you are writing? In the beginning, he was suppressed by a rookie, which caused various things to happen to Shou's company, resulting in a loss of more than 10 billion in funds. Well, under the influence of Gong, his close friends attracted more than 5 billion in sponsorship for Shou's company, so Shou solved the difficulties by himself. Very good, he is an author who has no concept of money, and he has not learned any financial knowledge at first glance. Let's talk about the pressure given by the so-called nominal fiancée later. Gong gave his response method. Let us take a look, what! He went home and pretended to be a duck kept by his father to refute his father's face, trying to get his father to help. Even at this moment, he didn't know that it was his father who had caused so much harm to his dear wife, and he could not give her any help. He could only grow up with the help of his wife and make his parents happy. His wife was very capable and escaped from the suppression of the vn company. Oh, I forgot, it turns out that Gong went to his own Wei Group to be responsible for several projects, and he all cooperated with his wife... Author, have you forgotten again? You haven't told us what the Wei Group does! If we guess, in Beijing, a company where the son of the boss can be called the prince will not be able to produce 5 projects and all of them can cooperate with design companies, right? And it's a major collaboration? Maybe I didn't say it clearly, but the general idea is this. Some of the projects may need a design company, but the company responsible for the connected project cannot be a design company. Oh, I understand, Wei Group is in the clothing industry, right? From the beginning to the end, it can only be seen that Gong is a hot-blooded and silly boy. Let alone suffer from it, I don't think the two of them can last long. (This paragraph originally had more than 3,000 words, but Jinjiang drew me out of it. Now I have forgotten many details, so I will briefly talk about it) Then the main event comes, what the hell is this eldest lady of the Bai family? This ancient character design came to my mind, and I immediately thought that this person was a villain, and I was going to have a heart attack. What I hate most all the time is the coddling young lady who bullies others. She also hates this old-fashioned way of publicizing who she is as the fiancée of so and so. She gets revenge after being rejected by her confession. It seems that the author likes this character very much and has given her superb skills and reasonable reasons. The reason is that the father of the protagonist arranged for her to do this? ? ? ? Good guy, he's still a positive character, right? Why do I think you are enjoying it? I see that you specially invited Shou to have tea. You are trying to offend Shou in your words, but you are not worthy of being offensive. You are talking about your status as a fiancée and a young lady. Are you okay? Didn't you say that you have a lover abroad? Don't really want to retaliate, right? In order to get revenge on Gong for rejecting his confession? Does such a person really exist in reality? Is there such a young lady? A few of my friends who have assets worth over 100 million don't have children like this? What exactly is this role arrangement used for? Just to make me feel disgusted, can you bear it? After all, it seems to me that I am the only one among the readers who is disgusted? Normally speaking, if you have a lover, shouldn't you want to avoid getting involved in this muddy water? To save your lover from being jealous? Why did you accept it so naturally? She still enjoys it, playing both the identity of the evil mother-in-law and the identity of the evil female supporting role, and as a positive female supporting role, it is impossible for her to be Jin Yu, right? I've read it from beginning to end and haven't seen this explanation? I think Shou is really miserable. This master should give a negative review. I don't think he has good luck when I meet him. His bad luck has completely outweighed his good luck. And is there any problem with such good luck? Doesn't it mean that Shou himself is already very capable? What you design is liked by so many netizens, and you have such a famous name, such a talent, and that kind of title. How can you succeed just by luck? If you are still unwilling to transfer capital for your mother's wish, then if the company collapses, it will be in line with your mother's wish? I found that the author really likes the phrase "original intention", but after reading the whole article, I really don't feel that there is any part of the original intention to follow. It just feels like Gong's love for his wife, which is just a verbal talk. For example, in order to gain traffic from the quarrel, the Samsara official hired Fu Shisheng as a spokesperson, and also held a vote for Gong to bring the two selling people. What a b. As a result, the fans voted for two bs for disgust. When I saw this plot, I felt as if I had eaten shit. I instantly thought of a certain big name such as a certain cow, a certain woman, and other big names who hired him as a spokesperson for YouKnowWho's black and red traffic. However, we fan fiction writers were stabbed in the back time and time again and were hurt by our own teammates. So in my opinion, the reincarnation official can be regarded as an example of not continuing with the original intention. (This paragraph was originally about 2,000 words, and it was all about analyzing how angry I was about the role of the eldest lady of the Bai family, but it was taken away by Jin Jiang and I forgot what I originally said, so I used my own free will later to complain about the original intention) All in all, if I hadn't read the rest, I would definitely give this article 5 stars, but unfortunately I did, so I only gave it three stars and gave it a negative score in the last chapter to express my anger. If I think of something again when I go to sleep tonight and it makes me more angry, I'll add it later. P. S. I typed the more than 10,000 words for more than an hour, and the more than 2,000 words for 40 minutes. I was reminiscing while typing, but I still didn't remember what I typed before. I will add more when I think about it.

"About a certain reader who stayed up late to read the extra chapter and read the entire text again"

Is it gone? Is it gone? Xiangxiang

I still want to see it! Madam, could you please do a side story?

No extras? ! ! It's really good to watch without thinking. Why is there no extra episode? (Resentment)

Is there anything missing between the previous chapter and this one? !

Are there any extras? I feel like there are still some things that haven't been explained clearly, such as...

Madam, where is my car? It's a year old! !

Finished reading it in one sitting! The setting is so interesting hahaha

Woo woo woo woo, so sweet, so sweet to me