Writing Diary

Since a large number of readers who have "never watched Conan", "are familiar with the original characters" and "like the protagonist of this book very much" have opened their ears, I also have a suggestion. Ask the author to directly replace all the names of the original Conan characters with one click, replace the gin, Scotch Rye and Bourbon with A, B, C and D, and replace the black organization with the white organization. Completely move your story to your own original world. Anyway, readers don't read the original work and don't care about the original characters. I guess changing the story background won't affect your readership, right? When writing a derivative story, you have to consider the characters of the original work and create your own protagonist. It's too tiring to take care of both sides. If you write an original story directly, you don't have to be tired or troublesome. You can have completely free character settings and create a perfect protagonist that everyone loves. Even if the supporting character is devoted to the story and uses shi to persecute the supporting character in the article, no one will say anything. Everyone is happy. Please also ask the author's wife to consider this suggestion. I personally think it is more practical than locking comments, selling groups, changing accounts, and running away www

In fact, the main reason is that the minefields are not arranged properly, and the copywriting is deceptive. Even now, "Jingguang's resurrection" is changed to "Jingguang's resurrection from the dead." This is very misleading. It is obvious that the protagonist was shasied and coerced to work for the protagonist. The copywriter wrote that he will save Matsuda Jinpei and Hagiwara Kenji, and also specifically wrote that Kagemitsu's resurrection from the dead is obviously to suck the blood of the police academy team. If he wants to use Kagemitsu's s to achieve the highlight of his protagonist, he must be prepared for the backlash.

The author has indeed revised the article, but because there are always people who think that revising the article is enough, please understand that the author deleted the apology and pretended it never happened. Then I sorted out the content before the revision. It only represents personal demining. If you don't care, you can just pretend you haven't seen it. It's for those who care. (Only posted once, if deleted it will be reposted. The following is an excerpt from the comment area + part posted in August) On August 24, several readers expressed their dissatisfaction with the undercover police officer being tortured and killed by the protagonist, and believed that such treatment of a police officer was excessive. A reader said that online entertainment should have a certain scale... Although the person who was tortured and killed in the article was a fictional undercover police officer from abroad, it had an impact on the police profession, damaged the image of the people's police, and caused negative social impact. The author here understands that Japan's undercover agents are the People's Hero Police in our country. In his speech: The author's way of dealing with Zhu Fu Jingguang is to throw the other person's soul into a different world, and the body of this world will dissipate. When the reunion is in the finale, he will take Jingguang's soul back and reshape his body to prevent their reunion. I think this is a kind of death escape, and some of the author's tortures have been completely modified. I apologize to the little angel who felt uncomfortable. However, [some extreme] Jingguang fans did not think so. They believed that the protagonist killed Jingguang, and began to use a lot of negative insults in the comment area of ​​the article. They only dismissed the fact that the protagonist killed Jingguang, and did not mention that Jingguang's soul lived a well-taken care of life in another world. Some readers even said that Japan's undercover agents are the people's hero police in our country. Dear, I suggest that if you really like them, don't touch the third dimension. Do you know what the predecessor of the Japanese police is? I don't know. Baidu, in view of various considerations, the author chose to close the comment area. I also hope that everyone can calmly view Jingguang's death escape in Chapter 138. If the protagonist really killed Jingguang, then how could there be a "post with Jingguang Maomao" in the subsequent chapter summary. (Because your son has a cheating system) (Taken from other people's comments: Here the author describes this as using the second dimension to compare with the third dimension, and never mentions the premise that he is an undercover agent in a large international evil force. According to the author, we should always be entangled in the fact that the one who was brutally killed in this article was a former Japanese police officer who was a bad person, and he was rejected by one stroke as a frontline anti-terrorism fighter. / If you really hate Japan, go up It's a comic, so why are you writing Conan fan fiction? To take advantage of the popularity of Conan fan fiction, and finally take a stab at it? / I don't see any apology or sincerity in trying to solve the problem in these words. I only see that the author of this article forcibly labeled the person who wrote this article as an "excessive fan chef". Even before he died, he felt guilty and uncomfortable for deceiving a criminal. Are you kidding? This is no longer as simple as breaking away from the character setting. Can I think that all the creation of this book is based on the author's happiness and twisted pleasure rather than love? There is no so-called respect for the character of Zhu Fu Jingguang. You forcefully deprived him of all his family and friends, erased all his past, left him wandering alone in another world like a ghost, and even made him grovel to please the person who killed him. Is this really a good thing to take care of? And after doing so many unfair things to Zhu Fu Jingguang, the author's next book preview is even Zhu Fu Jingguang.) The above main body revolves around the plot processing of chapters 137-138. The author did not respond to the question about copywriting fraud and not clearing up mines. On August 24th, the author's copywriting + the first chapter's words were re-added to apologize, expressing that the previous plot was indeed inappropriate and very stupid. I only considered my own feelings and did not estimate the feelings of many fans of the original work. I apologize for the unreasonable plot settings and irrational remarks... 137 Added that Kahn did not have time to save Scotland. Scotland followed the original direction, and Kahn saved the soul. The addition of 138 words shows that the previously set plot is very stupid. They only care about their own feelings and do not estimate the feelings of many fans of the original work... During this period, several chapters were revised, including the chapters at the beginning of the text that abet and induce the rationalization of crime and the chapters inspired by the contradictions in 136-142. On the same day, the copy was revised and the original copy was [Not 100% real wine] [Cheerful and confident little sun, with a positive personality] [Small sweet article, neither knife nor knife! The bad guys will be punished in the end and will not do anything too extreme. Little angels who want to see real wine doing all the bad things to maintain the winery may be disappointedDelete. Among them, "Kicked away Tequila's bento, and grabbed a handful of red cubes" was changed to "Kicked Tequila's bento, grabbed a handful of Matsuda Hagiwara and the squad leader, and Kagemitsu came back to life." (Compared with the current tags here, we can better understand that the deleted tags can attract more red-side relief-oriented readers. However, there are a lot of ambiguous gay jokes in the article, all members are OOC, and the beginning is instigating the rationalization of crime, and then around chapter 137, the protagonist tortures and kills the original undercover. In the next chapter, the protagonist sees Jingguang crying all night, eating melon seeds while sitting in front of the hospital bed to admire the other person's appearance immersed in pain, and says that he feels much better now. In episode 140141, there is no interrogation prop inserted into the car, and the title is "Interrogation in Scotland." There is also the idea of joining the group to watch the car. Matsuda calls the vest "Omaki", and Sato also calls "Maki" in the Ferris wheel episode. Takagi raises reasonable questions about why the bomb did not explode. Sato curses Takagi and slaps him after being tortured and killed by the male protagonist. Not to be persecuted, but to please the protagonist. The author said that the male protagonist is not a pleasure criminal, but the protagonist took a picture of Judy trying to arrest him, and wanted to hack into the FBI and show the footage to the FBI. The protagonist asked Hiroki to invade the FBI and put up all the billboards in the FBI building about what Akai had done in the organization. Isn't this a pleasure crime? The protagonist has a Ley bird, and he learned to call me Ley, and Bourbon is the best one. The one who left a child in our family! And this bird would slide between the legs of passers-by. He also had a golden retriever named Bourbon, and he also liked to eat shit, which caused Ley to learn the sentence Bourbon, why are you eating shit again? . Near the end, I call the original protagonist a lustful high school student. To add to the text, Chapter 229, "Jungle Black Wolf and His Tsundere Little Wild Cat", the wedding video of Furigaya Akai spreads around the world:) You know, it's a persecution in one sentence. ) In the early morning of December 19th, the text came to an end. At the same time, the first chapter and copy were revised, and the apology was deleted. :) The above excerpt is not complete, there are more if you want to know more, you can read the comments. If you have not read the original work, don't care about the original work, think the author's writing is better than the original work, controls the protagonist, controls the main attack, pulls other articles into the water, etc., Please do not refute the copywriting, fraud, copywriting, fraud, copywriting fraud. It's okay to revise the text. Why did you delete the apology?

Come on, author, original works are more suitable for your wife! The heartthrob's quick-passing scumbag wife's writing is great! The original character wife can do whatever she wants! If you want to torture a shark, then torture it; if you want to resurrect, then resurrect it; if you are a shark, you can be a female! Nothing can beat the original protagonist of the wife! But the original character in the fanfic is not suitable for a wife. The copywriting scam deceived the relief readers into sharks. Today, the protagonist also tortured sharks and then resurrected in a different world as a kitten girl. She also asked the undercover "do you regret betraying me?" The pure black real wine protagonist of "whitewashed and landed as a righteous partner"! As for the issue of the black organization, there is no need to criticize people upstairs. "The protagonists in other novels are too holy, and they are whimsical and brainless novels." Hahahahahahahahahahahahahaha, if you brag about "truth" in a novel where the protagonist has a system and a golden finger, or a Conan World fanfic, Qingshan will praise you! What does "bloodshed and elite sacrifice" mean? Zhu Fu Jingguang was an undercover character who died in the original work. He has already sacrificed for this. Zero will carry his share forward until the black organization is wiped out. Instead of having your limbs broken and exploded into fireworks in front of Rei Fangtani because you betrayed your wife's OC protagonist, you also have to have your soul sent to another world to work and cook for the OC and kiss and hug you! In this way, the author still has to say, "Scotland must die, he lived a stable and good life in another world"! The author also had a CP from Zhu Fu Jingguang's Danmei pre-acquisition! In the original book, the black organization's strength was slowly forcibly increased because Conan became more popular. In the beginning, gin and vodka ride a roller coaster, and in the later chapters, they directly bomb with helicopters. They are all about Conan fanfics, so there is no need to step on other ones. Your wife can write about systems and golden fingers that can travel through different worlds. The protagonist is Little Sun, who tortures sharks and explodes people. It is not 100% real wine and tortures sharks and Red Fang. He has come ashore and has become a righteous friend. Why forcefully brag about the truth?

Putting the word "murder" on Jingguang, including anyone else, will only make me want to vomit. When it comes to Jingguang, it will only make me sicker and sadder. He is an undercover! What he is talking about is an undercover agent who works in darkness for the sake of the general public! ! ! He is a noble policeman worthy of praise and admiration, and an undercover agent who unfortunately died in the original work! ! ! ! You wrote that he was tortured and killed? ? ? ? ? I really want to ask the author, do you think it doesn't matter if you are separated by another dimension? Don't you know how much words play a role in shaping a person's personality? When you wrote this plot, wouldn't you have seen it from Jing Guang and thought of the undercover policeman in reality? Ha? I respect people's diversity, but do you have to stay within the scope of the law? I didn't read the article but read the comments section, but the protagonist came out clean? ? ? ? How did they get to the shore, stepping on the corpses of the policemen and the tortured Jingguang? Are you from the same school as the author of "The Style Does Not Shake"?

After watching the film "Life and Death", I just want to show respect. What about respect? This article is just for the sake of popularity. He keeps saying to save people, but in the end he just saves people like this? Respect life and respect undercover agents, they are the most worthy of our respect! ! Even Gin has never tortured or killed an undercover agent. What's wrong with this article?

How can I put it this way? I can accept the protagonist as Black finding out about the undercover agent and killing the traitor. But because I have a white moonlight filter for scenery, the killing process described by the author made me very uncomfortable. At the same time, I don't quite accept the author's so-called righteous partners. Even if the protagonist goes all the way to the dark side in the end and never comes clean, it will still be better than now. Just like for gin, after he discovered that Jing Guang was an undercover agent, he killed the undercover agent without hesitation. This is not surprising to readers. But the author describes the protagonist in a way that seems very humane, and the author himself said that there will be a redemption plot. Of course, readers cannot imagine such a plot. Totally misleading It would have been better to just write "the protagonist is purely black" instead of engaging in fraud for the sake of traffic.

After being reminded, I found that there were many discrepancies between my understanding and recommendations from QAQ. In order to prevent similar situations from occurring in subsequent productions, I will make an inaccurate collection here? ①The author stopped updating not because of being banned, but because the copywriting does not match the content and some of the plots are cruel, which is not 100% consistent with the setting of Sha Giaowen. ②Don't be fooled by the "Save Mexican Children" in the recommendation text. I went to find a sister who has read this book to find out more about the situation. The article about saving wild animals, banning d, and banning children's FM is not the whole article, but a small part, and most of them are gay jokes. ③ Regarding the plot of leaving Jingguang, he went to another world, but he did not use a stand-in doll or use the system. He went there after being blown up (and it was a bomb tied to his stomach, not that Jingguang was forced to commit suicide to prevent leakage of information) ④The so-called astringent if line is using family members to force Jingguang The above situation is only based on the recommended copy I have seen and the follow-up inquiries from sisters who have read this book. The reason for posting this comment is that the copy has misunderstood part of the content before, and I hope that no one else will continue to fall into the trap. Therefore, if there are inaccurate descriptions of this book, I hope you will bear with me (after all, I can't accept the plot of having a bomb tied to the stomach to death and the plot of forcing a cat to meow and find it sweet)

First of all, not everyone is a fan of Jingguang. How many zqsg chefs can he have in JJ? Then, the label "Conan" refers to the second creation of Detective Conan, and what is the fanfic of the second creation? It is a novel written with respect for the characters and environment of the original work. Secondly, do you want to take a look at what was written at the beginning of the copy? [Not 100% real wine] [Little Sun] [Small sweet text without sword] [Sha Giaowen persecution] [Whitewash. Go ashore and become a righteous partner] [Jingguang comes back to life]/[Resurrection Jingguang] Let's look at what the protagonist did. Driving an IF car in a non-CP text does not count. After all, the author's comments section has stamped the protagonist's approval and he was not tempted (he was still a character who had just finished abusing a shark). The protagonist broke the limbs of the original protagonist and exploded them into fireworks, and let him complete the work. After feeling the pain of being blown up into fireworks, you extract your soul and put it into a young body in another world, working for the protagonist (earning coupons) and cooking. In the other world, you have no relatives and no reason, so you can only wait for the protagonist to come over, kiss, hug and cuddle. Would you say this original behavior is low? Gin won't even abuse a shark and kiss and hug her. Why do two words have two meanings? Do you think there is any suspicion of copywriting fraud or misleading? You want to enjoy the bonus of real wine writing but also want the bonus of relief writing? Then, what did the author do? For the first time, the author knelt down and closed the comment area. In the first chapter, he apologized and threw the responsibility to extreme Jingguang fans, and declared, "If you know what the three-dimensional rb police/security does, why don't you be a fan of this kind of thing?" So, what kind of real wine article are you writing? The second time the copywriter apologized and frantically revised the article, during which the author's fans made comments such as "exploding into fireworks is not a shark abuse" and "at least it needs to be made into a thousand pieces" and other xfs comments. Then, the author sold the fan dress and claimed that "a dress for thousands of people can be a selling point." The author will stop updating later. Finally, if you want to take advantage of the popularity of relief, please provide a good relief or mark "relief", and don't treat the readers of the article as paramecium. If you really want to write an article about the protagonist Sai Gao, you can completely change the background setting and write your own OC article. Even if it is marked "refer to the background in Conan", it will not make people angry! Have you learned a lot?

Ke Tongzhong, of course the police can die, especially undercover agents. How can there be so many undercover agents as lucky as Zero? So it is understandable that the undercover agent failed and was killed, and it is barely acceptable to be tortured and killed by the organization. After all, the organization is not a kind person. But! The scene of the torture and murder of an undercover police officer must not be described so clearly and easily! A policeman who has given everything for the people should never be humiliated like this! Gin has never tortured or killed an undercover agent! Each character has a charismatic personality, but when he reaches a certain bottom line, he can no longer be considered "human." And it's okay for Black to do this, but he is the protagonist! Protagonist! And he is also a protagonist who will be cleared in the end! ! It's even more outrageous, isn't it? The plot of torturing and killing police officers would have made people uncomfortable, but in the end, he still didn't know how to restrain himself and deserved to be scolded.