The Powerhouses I Once Won Over Have Regained Their Memories

Finished spreading flowers! After reading it, it's actually very uncomfortable to be in such a setting. After each game, I will go back to the beginning. People I was familiar with will look at it with unfamiliar eyes. It is completely different from the world I originally lived in. For people who live alone, there is no one like a sister who can talk and listen. It really requires a big heart. In fact, this is just like how some people feel homesick after leaving home. If you have the experience of living and working abroad for a long time, you can understand the bitterness of lovesickness. I also remembered that I had seen a quick travel before. It was the first time I felt the discomfort of a quick travel. It was because Shou always had memories, but seeing Gong in one of the worlds who was so strange and indifferent to him made me feel tired and sad (if ky reminds me, I will delete it). I realized at that time that it was just a meeting for Gong. Shou has shouldered the love and loss of life after life. I really hope to see Shou give up in the future. I think what if she gives up. There are many times when Gong not only treats her indifferently, but also abuses her. If Shou was like this in the first world, I'm afraid he would have ignored Gong long ago. If he couldn't give me a sense of security, separation would be inevitable. I feel that the author's writing style is very similar to narrative, which is not suitable for writing plots with great emotional fluctuations. Instead, he likes to detail the logical motivations of the protagonist. The interesting thing about this kind of writing is that the reasonable logic leads to a strange ending. If you think about it carefully, it is expected, but if you guess the subsequent development of the story, it will feel monotonous and boring. I think the author's writing style is suitable for writing some wild and unconstrained ideas. I hope the author can write better articles!

For more completed articles of the column, please click~ Quickly read the article "The Bird in the Palm Doesn't Want to Fly", please collect it! Copywriting—— Luo Yunhuai once traveled to a world of immortals and became a weak white sparrow in the forest. By chance, he was adopted by an immortal king named Yu Fangchi. Luo Huaiyun successfully cultivated into a spiritual beast by sucking the spiritual energy from that man and took on a human form. But one day, Yu Fangchi suddenly disappeared without a trace, and no trace could be found between heaven and earth. Soon after, Luo Huaiyun, who already had time travel experience, realized that the world he was in now was just one of the worlds - and then he was bound to the system. Only then did Luo Huaiyun know that his immortal king had been excluded from this world by Heaven because he had awakened his consciousness. During the rejection process, Yu Fangchi's soul was dispersed by Heaven and fell into other small worlds, covering up the light of the children of destiny in those small worlds. … It's outrageous. Luo Huaiyun's mission is to take away the fragments of Yu Fangchi's soul in those small worlds.

If this were at the flower market... This is also good Finish spreading flowers

After reading it, I feel like I started writing well, but I feel a little out of hand later on. The overall feeling is good, but there are some places where the logic is not smooth. For example, it is a bit strange to accept the status quo easily after recalling it, so you can analyze the inner drama in depth. Otherwise, it will give people the feeling of being written in a hurry.

It's very interesting. Many of my wife's articles are very interesting.

It's nice to read, but it feels like there's something missing. It would be better if it was written more.

It's good-looking, but it's so short that I can't get enough of it.

Very thoughtful, thank you very much

The progress bar is so comfortable, 6

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