The Child of Fortune Escapes [Quick Transmigration]

[My next male-led story: After I Could Hear the Thoughts of Quick Transmigration Travelers] Story blurb: When Mu Huaixiao was on the verge of becoming an immortal, he glimpsed the truth: he was merely the chosen child of a world's fate, controlled by the Heavenly Dao all his life and never once allowed to choose for himself. So he fought against the Heavenly Dao, seized half the world's destiny, and fled into other worlds. He divided the destiny he had seized, along with himself, into countless fragments and sent them into small worlds on the verge of collapse because they had lost their share of destiny. There, he became people who had no control over their own fates. Mission-taker Ye Chengyi: Thanks for asking. I just don't understand why he likes taking these such overdone scripts. They're all fluffy little sweet stories. The plots are beyond clichéd. When Ye Chengyi first met Mu Huaixiao, his eyes held an unyielding determination, as if he himself were set on breaking free of his fate. Later, that same person lay softly across Ye Chengyi's lap, his eyes shining as he looked up at him with barely concealed anticipation. It just... feels like things are going a little off track? If you spot a typo, please tell me what percentage of the way through it is. Otherwise, this clueless author will never find it TAT Thank you to every lovely reader who clicked in! I'll take your suggestions seriously! If they're reasonable and friendly, and I feel they hit the mark, I'll send you a red packet as a thank-you! My next male-led story is After I Could Hear the Thoughts of Quick Transmigration Travelers. I don't know when I'll start it, but you can add it to your reading list in advance! Theme: You need sincerity to move others.