Upcoming: Forced to Join a Dating Reality Show (Matriarchal Society). Blurb at the bottom.
Blurb:
In the year 4399 of the interstellar era, the ancient-style full-dive online game No Gods' Domain takes the world by storm with its gameplay that perfectly mirrors real life.
After suffering a string of misfortunes, including being kicked out of her guild and expelled from her sect, combat-class player Xia Xinyi earns the title of "Unluckiest Player Ever" and receives a [Fortune-Blessed Growth System] as a bonus from the game.
Her gameplay changes completely from then on.
The quests she used to do: forge weapons, fight monsters, battle other guilds, find a CP...
The quests she has to do now: gather wood and stone... build houses and grow crops...
At first, she refuses to accept this. She plays games for the excitement, not to retire in comfort!
Then she gets hooked. Exactly! What's the point of fighting all day? If she goes after another lousy CP, she might as well be a pig!
Isn't base-building more fun? The best part is that she can start a business and make a lot of pocket money!
And so...
Hillsides turn into fertile fields, thatched huts turn into estates, noob underlings become top players, and she makes her dream of getting rich come true!
Enough talk. Let's get to work!
The server's top pretty boy, who can trip and kill himself just by walking, comes to her: Want to be CPs? I can livestream and sell your stuff for you!
Xia Xinyi: Hoo... hoo...?
Reading Guide:
1. A laid-back heroine focused on building her career, plus a gorgeous male lead who's a gaming noob.
2. There are author-invented details. Don't overthink them.
3. A cheerful, everyday tale of farming and making money. The golden finger is powerful, but the heroine's skill points are limited, so she'll have to level up gradually.
Upcoming blurb: After Joining a Dating Reality Show (Matriarchal Society)
After several failed matchmaking attempts, Yin Qing decides that all the men who date her are after her money!
Then she's forcibly shoved into a dating show for ordinary people, financed by her own company.
Ha. Don't fall for me. It won't work out.
She gives herself the persona of a heartless playgirl!
When all the other female contestants introduce themselves as executives at this or that company, graduates of prestigious universities, or owners of personal studios,
Yin Qing says: I'm a freelancer. Five days a week at home, two days a week at the bar.
Her daily behavior can be summed up as: broke and heartless.
She soon becomes the show's "least popular" contestant, and when the program airs, the comments are full of criticism.
Netizens all say that this tacky, delusional playgirl should get off the show!
Until everyone discovers...
The chipped coffee cup she casually left in the living room was custom-made by a famous designer?
A wealthy big shot calls her for a late-night video chat?
The dance shoes she gives her date, Su Shang, are set with two diamonds!
The sentiment shifts both on the show and online: All hail the low-key big shot!
Yin Qing shrugs: What do I do now that my carefully crafted persona has fallen apart?
Su Shang feels a little down after twice failing to receive a note from any of the female contestants.
Netizens all say: Who would marry a man like Su Shang? He's always out in public and far too assertive. Wouldn't marrying him mean being henpecked at home?
He doesn't know when it started, but there's someone who steps in when he's left out, praises his dancing, remembers on rainy days that he once hurt his knee... and writes him fun, sweet little notes.
Yin Qing is sold.
Netizens are sold too: Aaaah, Qing-Shu CP, lock it down! If you dare tell me this is scripted, I'll send the production team a box cutter!
Reading Guide:
* Content warning: A relatively equal modern matriarchal society, with male pregnancy.
* A sweet romance!
* [A money-loving, domineering heroine whose confidence reaches the stratosphere x a powerful male lead who is more compelling than money, though he occasionally lets his guard down]
Theme: Even in games, feelings can be real.
She's Quite the Master of Pretending [GB]
The Villainess Goes Wild, Her Magic Knows No Bounds
Why Is the Madam Like That? [GB]
I Can Rewrite the Rules of the Strange Tales [Infinite]
He Wants Me to Take Responsibility
I Become the Scheming Agent of a Top-Tier Star Whose Career Is in Ruins
The Villainous Big Shot Was Bullied to Tears Again [GB]
The Heroine Doesn't Have to Be Normal [Goofy]
After the Original Heroine Awakens in a Supporting Female Character Story
The CEO Pretends to Be an Alpha, and I Pretend to Be an Omega
The Underworld's Troublemaker Is on Top
Forced to Become a Green Tea Boy [Matriarchy]
3. I feel like your background is quite extensive, but you've already explained it in just a few dozen chapters. What should I write next? I feel like this could be a long story. 4. The characters are not three-dimensional enough, and then the CP settlement is sudden. This is the same as the third point. Don't unfold the plot so quickly. Spend more time on the characters and emotions to make the characters more three-dimensional. I'm not asking you to write an emotional flow, but if you don't interact, as a reader, sometimes you will be confused... For example, the character of the male protagonist could be more interesting. Unfortunately, embarrassing scenes sometimes occur, but the character of the male protagonist is actually stable and good-looking. Therefore, when something embarrassing happens, the male protagonist will feel embarrassed and helpless. I can even imagine that the male protagonist accidentally embarrassed himself in front of the female protagonist, and then blushed a little, but when he saw the female protagonist smiling, he felt helpless and doting, and then they were happy together.
2. But, I only felt this way after seeing it later. It is possible that I gave up on the article between the first and second chapters. According to my experience in reading books, I prefer the plot to be more intense. For example, the heroine did not accept this friend, but she did not give up. Some of the later details moved the heroine. Or maybe two people just meet each other and find that their personalities are compatible. Then there is Goldfinger, but you think it's great, but it doesn't exist. One of Shushuang's points is to emphasize it with pen and ink, and the other is to highlight it by describing other people's reactions. I do feel that some points can be rewritten, such as the experience value of chicken legs and medicines with opposite effects. But there are some things that need to be taken slowly, such as those systems and the layout behind them.
Senluo: I can't hear it. I can't hear it.
But based on your character design, I just feel like there could be more contrast. The current male protagonist's character is really a bit thin and weak. Even though he is the male protagonist, he is still the first one to have the system, so it won't be so miserable. Come on, there's a lot of nonsense. ￣￣ Personal nonsense, just take a look.
Now that I have read all the chapters, let me say something!! After all, there aren't many new authors who write well! I feel that the plot is gradually getting better, but there are some places that are a bit unappealing. When I was reading the first and second chapters, I was thinking, what is the significance of the appearance of the female supporting character? There is no foreshadowing, and a person appears who is of little help to the protagonist... Does this help the plot? When I saw new teammates later, I knew you were telling a team story. Everyone here is part of the team and needs to be there.
When I was reading the copy, I only saw the word "female queen", and then I read the copy carefully, and then I saw the four characters of the copy of this article at the bottom, um... Okay! I'll keep the pre-accepted ones first. Please hurry up and update this article and that one.
There are so few! I want to fatten up before eating!
The writing is pretty good, why doesn't anyone read it?