The House of Yi and Mu

Fortunately I read the comments before reading...

It's gone... Have I fallen into another big pit? TT

Urging for more, urging for more... Come on~!

My dear, it's such a beautiful article~~~ It's still fantasy, hehe, it's good, we like it~, slowly edit it, collect it and read it later~~

So, I seemed to see a scene in a certain DM game... A vast world with snow...

Really looking forward to the update. Ah. . Ah. . . Roll~

At the beginning, I was too cute for Yuyu, but then I found that the whole article is exactly the same as Yuyu's cuteness - even though the story has nothing to do with love, and even the ambiguity is very light. It is a very touching fantasy description, without deliberately imitating the Western style, writing a lot of redundancy or lengthy sentences, and the crisp and clear description is just right. The name was also chosen to be concise and easy to remember, so that people will not find it difficult to accept it. Of course, what surprises Yuyu even more is the initial character setting of this story. Both boys have special but unexplained backgrounds - which made Yuyu full of expectations from the beginning. Then the appropriate expressions in the following text unfolded bit by bit, stirring up new suspense. Conversation, agreement, separation, and meeting again three years later... The emotional development between the two protagonists is very natural and warm, and the smooth and tension-filled text makes people addicted. I read each chapter to the end in one breath, and then sighed - oh, it's over so soon. Laugh, this is really a very appetizing article. I will save it and keep reading. Please do your best, adults. A little suggestion: If you slightly modify the copy and make the layout more regular, you may be able to give readers a better impression.

Damn, I am a crystal in BS. I posted a long comment, but it was displayed on the homepage under your article, not in the long comment column. For Mao, for Mao? If you know the reason, please tell me and I will try again.

When I first read this article, I didn't know if I was being criticized or something. I actually thought it was from BG and Xianyan. You know, I am a standard fujoshi. I like the language greatly. The scene transitions are very natural, the language description is also in place, the introduction of the protagonist and supporting characters appearing in sequence and the author's narration are also very natural. Ah! Ah! Ah! I'm not very good at using words of praise anymore. In short, the author is good at expressing what he wants to express. I really like the bold fonts in each chapter, especially the bold fonts at the beginning of the third chapter: She said, this person will threaten your life one day, so kill him. Does it mean that these two people will be entangled in their lives and destined to have a sadistic love? When Il asked: Are we all different? Don't say that surviving is your own business and has nothing to do with others. I really like this sentence, it is like a famous aphorism, I have read it several times. Having said so much, let's talk about the plot. Xio's appearance is amazing. Who is the middle-aged man who said to Xio before he died in the snow, "Let's go traveling" and what position he plays in Xio's life. This is a suspense. Then talking about Xio, he is a very cold and cold person, with magic that is different from others. He is the same alien as El said. He has a cold expression and dark eyes that cannot see the bottom. He walks on the snow and then saves a young man. This young man had no magic, but he had a noble status and was a prince. However, he was born an unlucky person and was not liked by his father. In the end, his mother died to save him. Such a young man with a tragic identity was unable to protect himself. When he met his own life for the first time, he was still a young man who was a little green, a little confused, but also a little warm. A short journey, accompanied by each other, a mysterious girl who appeared in the middle, and a short and puzzling words, led to the purple moon, which is the title of the article - Mu Yi's Moon Eyes, so we know that Xiu has the eye of truth, and finally the girl said to kill him, one day, he will threaten you. Shocking words. Yet he still didn't kill him. The two agreed to meet again, and they did meet again three years later. At that time, Hugh was still Hugh, but El had gotten rid of the youthful youth, and still had purple hair and purple eyes. She was astonishingly beautiful, seductively beautiful, and ominous, but she was no longer warm and had put away her inner world. He is no longer the helpless prince he once was, he is a dead spirit. A cold-hearted person like Xio has seen so many scenery, met so many travelers, many things, and many people. He has passed by them and forgotten them as soon as he has seen them. However, the young man who accompanied him on the short journey three years ago is engraved in his mind. He is thinking about it lightly and will not deliberately forget it, nor will he forget it. The purple hair and purple eyes, and the scenery in the snow, are recorded in his mind. It turns out that it has been three years. When Hugh met him again when he was 19, they were still him, but he was no longer him. His purple eyes and hair were still bewitching, but there was no trace of the past in his eyes. The fire of life that once existed in the purple sea had disappeared in those three long years, leaving only the emptiness. The hibiscus flowers that once bloomed, the morning glories that climbed all over the mountains, that purple color, are they really the past, are they just a dream? So, Xiu asked, asking this young man who had never forgotten and always remembered him in the past three years: The people he met were the 'undead' and Xiu, what about El? The young man who answered, we couldn't see his expression clearly. He only said a faint sentence: There is no way for El to survive. . . . . . Her long hair covered her face, and the purple sea separated the past and present. No one knows how he has passed in the past three years, what he has experienced, step by step, how he has transformed into a strong, forbearing, silent and cold person, and said goodbye to his past with a knife. As I write this, I feel a little distressed in my heart. He is a prince who should have been crowned the capital, but now he is not. . . Well. . . Now that he is a dead soul, his glorious name in the mercenary world represents a good status. But someone asked, Xio, you are very familiar with the 'undead'. He still stubbornly believed that he was not an undead, but that he was El, the purple-haired boy who once walked with him in the snow. So someone said that you can actually let him talk to you because you have never heard him talk before. Everyone was surprised, so can we think that in El's heart, Hugh is also different? The writing is very messy. Sweat

I finally became an adult, congratulations ~ Swordsman + Magician = wide vermicelli tears... I love this kind of Xipi... TvT Then three years later, another black-bellied one was raised? (Eh? Why do I use 'again'?)