Your ending, and all the comments, tell me that the theme of this article is anti-Mary Sue? But why do you want to create an image of a heroine struggling in the face of power? What did the heroine do wrong later? Even if you were naive and ignorant at first, you will change your ways later? Write an anti-Mary Sue, and Voldemort's actions will become reasonable.
After watching it, I had mixed feelings. Although I skipped it, I felt a little happy when I saw the male protagonist died in the end. Although the heroine is not a particularly good character, there is no way she is the heroine and I just like her, but the V Palace is really a bit too much, that's it.
This is how anti-Soviet articles should be written, tear up some glass hearts
If Voldemort was so smart, the original author wouldn't have died so tragically.
The content is surprisingly rich, but a bit heartbreaking
No matter what, the novel is for people to read. If you want to write some critical articles, it should be like this from the beginning instead of the beginning. There are contradictions in the middle and the end, and the heroine is even more like this. I can only feel a kind of dissonance in the article. It is the same as when I read a post-apocalyptic novel. At the beginning, it is a family fun and everyone lives together warmly. Then the author may Because no one has commented or paid attention to PS. The author once complained about the nonsensical writing of all people to death and found an excuse to say that the end of the world is so cruel. I will not comment. I can only say that the author was a bit extreme when he wrote the article. I felt extremely uncomfortable after reading the article. From the beginning of the heroine's forgiveness v, I felt extremely uncomfortable. I kept waiting for the author to fulfill his words.
The ultimate goal of torturing a heroine is to torture v, or to whitewash the boss, etc. In the end, I only feel the heroine's incompetence and cowardice. Sometimes it is too nonsense and it is really bad. The following are just some remedies for HP criticizing su. I have read another article, although it is a bit old, but I really think that one is better. This one may have a better ending if it changes. The heroine understands that it is her cowardice that Su Bai caused the final result. The final growth may not be as good as the author's writing, but it is always more comfortable.
Last year I came up with the idea of writing a Mary Sue novel to attract a group of Mary Sues and pop the balloons one by one. It turns out I already had it. You, the author, are my soulmate! It feels so good to see a group of Mary Sues wailing and howling in your article. I want to follow your example and tease Mary Sues as soon as possible! [Holding hands firmly]
This is anti-Soviet culture 0 0
The author has such a big game...
Why don't you want to write it down seriously? It's obvious that the writing is not bad. Isn't it better to leave a beautiful story worth remembering? Why bother to disgust people? I would rather you not write the story after the heroine was killed by Nian. The heroine's character is completely distorted and can no longer be regarded as an independent personality. Please don't introduce personal emotions when writing novels. It is an insult. If you can't write it, don't write it. No excuse is needed. Stopping the novel is sometimes a sign of respect. Hope it will be clear
Okay, I finally finished reading it...
Big question
Why do everyone hate the heroine so much...
I don't hate her from beginning to end
I feel very sorry for this child.
Does anyone have the same opinion as me...
Your ending, and all the comments, tell me that the theme of this article is anti-Mary Sue? But why do you want to create an image of a heroine struggling in the face of power? What did the heroine do wrong later? Even if you were naive and ignorant at first, you will change your ways later? Write an anti-Mary Sue, and Voldemort's actions will become reasonable.
After watching it, I had mixed feelings. Although I skipped it, I felt a little happy when I saw the male protagonist died in the end. Although the heroine is not a particularly good character, there is no way she is the heroine and I just like her, but the V Palace is really a bit too much, that's it.
This is how anti-Soviet articles should be written, tear up some glass hearts
If Voldemort was so smart, the original author wouldn't have died so tragically.
The content is surprisingly rich, but a bit heartbreaking
No matter what, the novel is for people to read. If you want to write some critical articles, it should be like this from the beginning instead of the beginning. There are contradictions in the middle and the end, and the heroine is even more like this. I can only feel a kind of dissonance in the article. It is the same as when I read a post-apocalyptic novel. At the beginning, it is a family fun and everyone lives together warmly. Then the author may Because no one has commented or paid attention to PS. The author once complained about the nonsensical writing of all people to death and found an excuse to say that the end of the world is so cruel. I will not comment. I can only say that the author was a bit extreme when he wrote the article. I felt extremely uncomfortable after reading the article. From the beginning of the heroine's forgiveness v, I felt extremely uncomfortable. I kept waiting for the author to fulfill his words. The ultimate goal of torturing a heroine is to torture v, or to whitewash the boss, etc. In the end, I only feel the heroine's incompetence and cowardice. Sometimes it is too nonsense and it is really bad. The following are just some remedies for HP criticizing su. I have read another article, although it is a bit old, but I really think that one is better. This one may have a better ending if it changes. The heroine understands that it is her cowardice that Su Bai caused the final result. The final growth may not be as good as the author's writing, but it is always more comfortable.
Last year I came up with the idea of writing a Mary Sue novel to attract a group of Mary Sues and pop the balloons one by one. It turns out I already had it. You, the author, are my soulmate! It feels so good to see a group of Mary Sues wailing and howling in your article. I want to follow your example and tease Mary Sues as soon as possible! [Holding hands firmly]
This is anti-Soviet culture 0 0 The author has such a big game...
Why don't you want to write it down seriously? It's obvious that the writing is not bad. Isn't it better to leave a beautiful story worth remembering? Why bother to disgust people? I would rather you not write the story after the heroine was killed by Nian. The heroine's character is completely distorted and can no longer be regarded as an independent personality. Please don't introduce personal emotions when writing novels. It is an insult. If you can't write it, don't write it. No excuse is needed. Stopping the novel is sometimes a sign of respect. Hope it will be clear
Okay, I finally finished reading it... Big question Why do everyone hate the heroine so much... I don't hate her from beginning to end I feel very sorry for this child. Does anyone have the same opinion as me...