[Complete] [Chapter comments are open (heart)]
During the war between immortals and demons, Wen Hanyan forged herself into a spiritual weapon to save all living beings. She fell unconscious and would not wake.
In a void, she learned that everything was nothing but a novel.
The bad news: it was a "substitute for the white moonlight" story, and she was the despised white moonlight who would soon be brutally killed by someone once dear to her.
The good news: she had bound herself to the [Long Aotian System], which specialized in defeating stronger opponents and surviving desperate situations.
When Wen Hanyan awoke, the master who had promised she would be his only disciple in this life was holding a ceremony to accept the novel's heroine as his disciple.
System: [This character fits the archetype: a blind, sycophantic cannon-fodder master.]
Mission: [Please run him through with your sword, then flash an evil smile and say, "Who do you think you are to teach me?"]
Wen Hanyan: ? What does an evil smile even look like?
Not long afterward, her cold and aloof fiance, who had only ever smiled for her, took the initiative to break off their engagement for the sake of the novel's heroine.
System: [This character fits the archetype: a fair-weather, self-serving cannon-fodder fiance.]
Mission: [Please tear up your marriage contract, kick over his compensation, press your sword to his throat, and sneer, "I told you, 'The east side of the river is high for thirty years, and the west side for thirty years. Don't look down on a poor young man!'" ]
Wen Hanyan: ...I never said that.
After some time, the System took the initiative and asked her to enter the Ji Jin Abyss, said to seal a bloodthirsty, obsessive demon lord.
System: [This secret realm meets the requirements: battling foes above your level, with an exceptionally attractive, powerful male expert at least ten times stronger than you, who is trapped and can only do as you please.]
Mission: [Please enter the secret realm and find this expert. Then, while afflicted with a potent poison, say: "Senior, help me cultivate!"]
Wen Hanyan: ...
What senior? He was the demon lord sealed by her blood, powerful enough to crush an entire sect with a flick of his finger.
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After the war between immortals and demons, Pei Jin was suppressed beneath the Ji Jin Abyss by the united righteous sects, where he awakened to something called the [Green River Tragic Romance System].
System: [After a unanimous reader vote, we hope you'll play the role of the book's villain and redeem the white-moonlight supporting female character. Protect her from being bullied and turn this tragic romance into the sweetest story ever!]
Pei Jin gave a cold laugh.
Him? Protect her?
What a joke.
But after being forced to go through some of the plot...
Pei Jin followed behind Wen Hanyan with an exasperated look. When he saw some worthless fool with a death wish dare to offend her, the System's voice went wild in his mind.
[Fly into a rage for your beloved and immediately deal with the blind cannon fodder for the white moonlight. Then pin her against the wall, your eyes bloodshot as you grip her waist, and lean close to whisper in her ear: "Don't be afraid. My life is yours."]
Pei Jin narrowed his eyes. Are you sick?
At that moment, a flash of sword light streaked by, and the enemy was slain with a single strike.
The white-robed cultivator in flowing-cloud Daoist robes calmly sheathed her sword and said coldly, "I would rather betray the world than let the world betray me."
Pei Jin: ...?
Did a woman who had only just "reunited with him after a long separation" and was already demanding that he "help her cultivate" really need him to protect her?
[The tsundere, fake playboy, genuinely ruthless, fiercely protective demon lord who earnestly follows the sweet-romance plot x the career-focused Long Aotian heroine who refuses to follow the romance route]
Tips:
※ One-on-one romance, both leads have no prior sexual experience, happy ending;
※ Not a conventional strong-female-lead cultivation story. "Long Aotian" is just a playful reference. Romance and plot are split about fifty-fifty. See the first chapter author's note for content warnings, and decide for yourself whether to read. Further comments that try to start arguments will be deleted;
※ The blurb is unserious, but the main story has a more serious tone and a moderately sized ensemble cast. The overall mood is satisfying and sweet, with face-slapping, scumbag men, and romance. Flashback scenes ahead;
※ A shut-in who doesn't want to crack jokes isn't a good author. Some dialogue may occasionally be colloquial;
※ The cover uses a template and may resemble others, but it can stand in for the heroine's character design;
※ Light on logic and writing style, focused on practicing pacing;
※ Cultivation stages: Spirit Guiding, Spirit Control, Heavenly Spirit, Dao Enlightenment, Dao Unification, Void Refining, Ascension, and Return to Immortality.
Screenshot dated January 28, 2021; revised April 9, 2023
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Next novel: "The Comments Say I Love You. You Actually Believe Them?"
Wen Qingli is the young lady of a moderately influential family. She's perfectly content with her comfortable, laid-back life, even if she isn't rich beyond measure.
One day, she awakens to discover that she's a cannon-fodder supporting female character in a novel. The Long Aotian male lead, "Su Xian," will eventually join her father's sect. In the end, he'll bring her family to ruin, and she'll be brutally murdered while fleeing.
The plot has only just reached the point where Su Xian joins the sect, so Wen Qingli decides to get rid of this menace while she still has time.
Her father asks Wen Qingli to deliver pills to Su Xian. She secretly replaces every medicinal pill in the bottle with poison and sends her even lazier senior brother to deliver it.
Her senior brother gazes into empty space and, instead of refusing, readily agrees. But he gives her a complicated look.
"A Li, you should respect the truest impulses of your heart."
Wen Qingli: ? What impulse? The impulse to rid the world of a menace?
At the tournament between fellow disciples, Wen Qingli gets distracted thinking about her upcoming assassination attempt and loses to her longtime rival.
But instead of mocking her, her rival looks at her with a dark, displeased expression.
"Can't you take your mind off him for a little while?"
Wen Qingli: ?? Have my murderous intentions finally been discovered?
Then one day, she sees a mass of translucent text drifting across the sky.
[How did Lili know Su Xian had a special constitution and that ordinary pills would send him into qi deviation? She's so considerate, she specially switched them for pills suited to his constitution. I'm crying, she's so sweet.]
[Every time Lili wants to show Su Xian she cares, she's too embarrassed to do it herself and has to beat around the bush by sending her senior brother instead. Even he can't help encouraging her!]
[Lili's little expression when she's conflicted is so adorable~]
To put a stop to this completely baseless misunderstanding, Wen Qingli immediately takes a group of people to surround Su Xian's courtyard and bully him right in front of those words.
[Lili is going to such lengths just to get Su Xian's attention! She's usually so lazy.]
[I can confirm. In nine out of ten scenes, she's in bed. The one exception is her way to bed.]
Her expression stiffens. She immediately flees back to her cave dwelling, sharpens her sword with a vengeance, and vows to practice swordsmanship properly and deal with the great nuisance Su Xian as soon as possible.
[Look how hard she's working! She's striving to improve for the person she loves. I'll always be moved by this kind of romance!]
Wen Qingli: ...There's no clearing my name now.
She doesn't notice that, day after day, Su Xian's gaze grows stranger and stranger.
When the plot reaches the destruction of the Wen clan, Wen Qingli still hasn't put her plan into action. She waits in terror for her fate to arrive, but instead sees the demon lord Yin Suxian tear off the secret identity of "Su Xian," the Wen clan's senior disciple, and break through his seal.
As everyone watches in terror, the handsome demon lord in black robes approaches the Wen clan's mountain gate, brimming with murderous intent, and pulls the stunned young woman into his arms.
"Lili," he murmurs. "I love you too."
The comments had said she wanted him to come in his true form, riding a five-colored auspicious cloud to marry her.
Wen Qingli: ...?
Where's the Long Aotian male lead? How did he turn into the villainous demon lord?
[The fake "Long Aotian," actually the demon lord and the strongest fighter in the world, male lead x the fake layabout, actually "wicked" rich beauty heroine who doesn't want to be turned on her head]
Theme: Saving each other
I was bullied by my group friends for half a year, but I haven't cried much recently, and I have slowly gotten better... I was happy before, but now I am sad. Just as I am typing this, I am a little hungry and want to eat KFC. Today is Crazy Thursday, who can treat me to some?
You don't have to v me 50, you just need to click into my column and collect my two advance collections of archrival literature——
"After Forcibly Kissing the Villain's Rival": The heroine met an unkind person in her previous life and sealed away her rival. In her next life, she wanted to stab the scumbag in the back and forcefully kiss her arch-rival, but she never imagined that her arch-enemy would also be reborn?
"A Guide to Killing Your Husband and Enlightenment": The heroine of the Ruthless Way wakes up from a serious injury and has lost all her cultivation. She decides to find a good pretty boy to kill her husband and prove the Way, and take back everything that belongs to her! Unexpectedly, this cute pretty boy turned out to be a deadly enemy? !
Excuses suck, it's okay, I love watching it so much
Ah Ruan's death was inexplicable. Wouldn't Yichen give her a self-defense weapon? Really outrageous. The safety buckle is also outrageous. Why don't you give me a few more magic weapons? If you sell one, it will be gone. Don't your parents send someone to watch over this kind of dangerous person who subverts Kyushu? There seems to be no mention of why the Wei family was destroyed. In addition, the emotional line is smooth and the plot line is smooth. I really like the treatment of the stand-in heroine, making her truly awaken. It is really not easy for Aotian and Motou to stay happy forever.
Looking forward to the final if line? Waiting online
Both the male and female protagonists have suffered a lot. They have gone through hardships but are still kind and brave. They are a perfect match.
Primary school chicken falling in love (pointing and pointing)
I finally finished reading it. To be honest, what supported me in reading this was, firstly, that I had already ordered it all, and secondly, because of my obsessive-compulsive disorder, I was not allowed to buy it but I didn't finish it. After reading the whole article, the good thing is that the dual-system thinking attracts me, and the truth buried by the author keeps me reading just to see the final truth. In other aspects, my personal opinion is average. The first is the character creation, the second is that there are always contradictions in some places, and the third is that the logic is sparse and cannot be thought about at all.
Wow wow wow I really want to see the happy ending of the if line, everyone wants to be well! ! !
Woohoo if line! ! ! I really can't let go of Demon Tou and Han Yan. I also want to see Yun Feng
Too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good [Love Eyes]
We Are Both Ex-Husbands, If You Have Anything to Say, Talk to Me
Restrict the Heroine of the Novel to Pass Through the Jinjiang Literary Queen
□□Guide
It Doesn't Matter, Passerby a Will Take Action
The Barrage Said I Love You, Do You Really Believe It?
A Guide to Cleaning up a Villain's Death Escape
Ordinary People, but ABO Shura Field
How Can She Fear Be the Leader of the Hehuan Sect!
After Becoming the Male Side Character in a Harem Novel
After Kissing My Archrival, the Villain, by Force
Playing Four Male Leads' Exes at Once
Unrequited Feelings
I was bullied by my group friends for half a year, but I haven't cried much recently, and I have slowly gotten better... I was happy before, but now I am sad. Just as I am typing this, I am a little hungry and want to eat KFC. Today is Crazy Thursday, who can treat me to some? You don't have to v me 50, you just need to click into my column and collect my two advance collections of archrival literature—— "After Forcibly Kissing the Villain's Rival": The heroine met an unkind person in her previous life and sealed away her rival. In her next life, she wanted to stab the scumbag in the back and forcefully kiss her arch-rival, but she never imagined that her arch-enemy would also be reborn? "A Guide to Killing Your Husband and Enlightenment": The heroine of the Ruthless Way wakes up from a serious injury and has lost all her cultivation. She decides to find a good pretty boy to kill her husband and prove the Way, and take back everything that belongs to her! Unexpectedly, this cute pretty boy turned out to be a deadly enemy? !
Excuses suck, it's okay, I love watching it so much
Ah Ruan's death was inexplicable. Wouldn't Yichen give her a self-defense weapon? Really outrageous. The safety buckle is also outrageous. Why don't you give me a few more magic weapons? If you sell one, it will be gone. Don't your parents send someone to watch over this kind of dangerous person who subverts Kyushu? There seems to be no mention of why the Wei family was destroyed. In addition, the emotional line is smooth and the plot line is smooth. I really like the treatment of the stand-in heroine, making her truly awaken. It is really not easy for Aotian and Motou to stay happy forever.
Looking forward to the final if line? Waiting online
Both the male and female protagonists have suffered a lot. They have gone through hardships but are still kind and brave. They are a perfect match.
Primary school chicken falling in love (pointing and pointing)
I finally finished reading it. To be honest, what supported me in reading this was, firstly, that I had already ordered it all, and secondly, because of my obsessive-compulsive disorder, I was not allowed to buy it but I didn't finish it. After reading the whole article, the good thing is that the dual-system thinking attracts me, and the truth buried by the author keeps me reading just to see the final truth. In other aspects, my personal opinion is average. The first is the character creation, the second is that there are always contradictions in some places, and the third is that the logic is sparse and cannot be thought about at all.
Wow wow wow I really want to see the happy ending of the if line, everyone wants to be well! ! !
Woohoo if line! ! ! I really can't let go of Demon Tou and Han Yan. I also want to see Yun Feng
Too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good, too good [Love Eyes]