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Jiang Fan died and was reborn into the family of a small landowner in ancient times.
He thought he'd transmigrated into an ancient romance world, playing the role of a young landowner.
Then one day, he saw someone flying on a sword and riding the wind, like a great hero, saving his life. He immediately thought he'd transmigrated into a martial arts world. He was just about to live out his dream of becoming a chivalrous hero who fought evil and upheld justice...
But before his martial arts dream could even begin, the hero took out a spirit-testing stone and had everyone line up to test their spiritual roots.
So he realized this was a world of immortal cultivation.
But when he saw a group of little kids with their arms folded, pretending to be adults and saying things he couldn't understand...
He... finally... discovered later that he was in a full-dive game world...
Coming soon 1: The Space-Time Tour Group Is Open for Business
[Little-devil personality bottom * true archangel top]
Ever since the Space-Time Law passed a rule allowing travel between different times and spaces, business at the Myriad Worlds Tree's Space-Time Exchange has been getting harder and harder. On the verge of bankruptcy, the owner had to develop a new business. And so the Panda Space-Time Travel Company burst onto the scene!
The travel company offers all kinds of tours to suit everyone's needs, such as:
Life Extension Tour: Extend your precarious life.
Health Tour: Escape the suffering of illness.
Romance Tour: Experience a love that leaves a lasting impression.
Thrill Tour: Feel thrills you will never forget.
And more.
Jiang Ting is a new tour guide for a space-time travel group. His job is to make sure every traveler who joins a tour arrives happy and goes home satisfied.
But there are always a few travelers who go back on their word and deliberately leave bad reviews.
So he changed his attitude toward customer service. From then on, his smiley service always got full marks!!
Excerpt 1:
"What did you just say?"
"I said I'm not going on that space-time tour of yours anymore."
"I don't think I heard you. Say that again." Jiang Ting stared at him and asked once more.
"I said I'm not joining your stupid space-time tour! Got it now?" The man across from him grinned, seeming quite pleased with himself for going back on his word.
"Mm, I heard you loud and clear." With that, Jiang Ting kicked him off the yacht.
"Since that's the case, I'll have to take back the so-called free lifesaving service." Jiang Ting watched expressionlessly as the man splashed into the sea and struggled in the water.
"Help!!"
"I'll go, I'll go!"
"Get me out of here!"
Ten minutes later, the man was hauled back onto the yacht. Looking at Jiang Ting, who wore a carefree smile, he couldn't help hugging himself and trembling.
Excerpt 2:
Jiang Ting waved a cute little flag printed with a panda in one hand.
With the other, he opened the space-time travel itinerary and flashed a standard eight-tooth smile as he read:
"...
Day 1: Arrive at coordinates (α2345, β5432) in the technological world → Private local transportation → Check in at the technological world's super hotel
Days 2-3: Technology Park Island → Paradise Forest Park → Check in at...
Itinerary...
Those are the main details of this tour. Does anyone have any objections?"
As he finished, Jiang Ting flashed another standard eight-tooth smile, looking very happy.
Seeing that familiar smile, everyone behind him hugged themselves, shivering, and shook their heads in unison.
When Jiang Ting saw them shake their heads, he was even happier. With a light, jaunty step, he led everyone aboard the space-time travel ark.
He thought to himself, delighted, Mm, my smiley service is definitely full marks again today!
A man carrying a long sword walked by. The group immediately looked at him with tearful eyes, as if a savior had appeared.
He scratched his head and looked at the smug person, spreading his hands: What could he do? He could only spoil him!
Coming soon 2: All Humanity Survives with Cheats [Doomsday]
[Humanity-wide version]
Demonic energy invades, Doomsday arrives, and the whole world turns into a game. What do we do?
Don't panic, we have cheats!
Nowhere to live?
The cheat connects to a fragment of space, giving humanity a base.
Can't beat the monsters?
The cheat enters combat mode, and with a few quick strikes, corpses cover the ground.
Then what do we need humans for?
Take back Earth and rebuild our home!
[Protagonist's version]
December 21, 2021
The barrier breaks again.
Ye Shi suddenly senses something. Spiritual energy pours into his head, then a cold voice sounds by his ear: "Ding! Congratulations, Player No. 000825. You have loaded the All Things Have Spirits Game Assistant System, Version 1.0. Scanning player attributes now...
Ding! Scan complete...
Player 000825's attributes are as follows:
Endurance 4, stamina 5, intelligence 7, agility 5, strength 7, comprehension 5. Overall combat strength: 33. Initial spiritual energy: 500."
Doomsday arrives, a new era begins, and the All Things Have Spirits Assistant System (cheat) goes live!
Theme: When you look at the world optimistically, life's surprises are all little sweet treats
No matter how domineering Qin Haolin is, he can only squat at the bottom of the food chain, hahahaha?
To be honest, this article has a good idea, but the narrative is not good. The ending feels a bit rushed, which makes it uncomfortable to watch. However, it is much better after adding extra chapters.
At present, in my opinion, there are several issues that have not been explained clearly.
1. For example, Jiang Fan actually practiced cultivation in the Immortal World. If the Slate of Heavenly Dao can appear in the interstellar world, then he should be able to try to practice in that world. If it is set as impossible, there should be an explanation, rather than letting us brainstorm a reasonable reason.
2. There is also something like Jiang Fan's mother Jiang Yao. Since she doesn't care about the child and doesn't ask, how did she know about his whims? As an adult with memories of his previous life, Jiang Fan shouldn't be like a child who has to pester his parents to chat about any thoughts he has. If he said it accidentally in daily life, it would conflict with the situation where he only has a robot nanny around him. The article said "it's just moving from one lonely house to another lonely house" emphasizes the above situation, which is an unreasonable point.
In addition, the problem that is not a problem is that the explanation of Jiang Fan's multiple reincarnations is a bit vague, and it feels a bit anticlimactic to mention it in one sentence. The rejection of the boss's rejection of borrowing a mirror when Jiang Fan solved the curse was really far-fetched.
If there are any problems with the logic of dealing with human nature, I can't see it. After all, I'm only 18 and haven't entered society yet, so I don't have any deep feelings. The author himself has mentioned flaws such as typos, punctuation, and bad sentences. As a newcomer, this problem is also normal.
The above are some shortcomings and shortcomings that I felt after reading the article overnight. It is a pity that I am not a little angel and could not find the advantages of the article to make a collection. However, I think the shortcomings can encourage people to make progress. I hope the author will continue to work hard and write smoothly, and not be sad about plagiarism and other things.
Come on.
Sweet, sweet! ! ! ! ! I read it in one sitting, I really like this style of writing????
Emma originally felt a little bit cruel, but a piece of glass shard got stuck in her throat, and then she realized that it was just a piece of hard candy, and it was so sweet.
555 I accept this ending
If you didn't win the prize, can't you really write more? I like Master so much~
No matter how domineering Qin Haolin is, he can only squat at the bottom of the food chain, hahahaha?
To be honest, this article has a good idea, but the narrative is not good. The ending feels a bit rushed, which makes it uncomfortable to watch. However, it is much better after adding extra chapters. At present, in my opinion, there are several issues that have not been explained clearly. 1. For example, Jiang Fan actually practiced cultivation in the Immortal World. If the Slate of Heavenly Dao can appear in the interstellar world, then he should be able to try to practice in that world. If it is set as impossible, there should be an explanation, rather than letting us brainstorm a reasonable reason. 2. There is also something like Jiang Fan's mother Jiang Yao. Since she doesn't care about the child and doesn't ask, how did she know about his whims? As an adult with memories of his previous life, Jiang Fan shouldn't be like a child who has to pester his parents to chat about any thoughts he has. If he said it accidentally in daily life, it would conflict with the situation where he only has a robot nanny around him. The article said "it's just moving from one lonely house to another lonely house" emphasizes the above situation, which is an unreasonable point. In addition, the problem that is not a problem is that the explanation of Jiang Fan's multiple reincarnations is a bit vague, and it feels a bit anticlimactic to mention it in one sentence. The rejection of the boss's rejection of borrowing a mirror when Jiang Fan solved the curse was really far-fetched. If there are any problems with the logic of dealing with human nature, I can't see it. After all, I'm only 18 and haven't entered society yet, so I don't have any deep feelings. The author himself has mentioned flaws such as typos, punctuation, and bad sentences. As a newcomer, this problem is also normal. The above are some shortcomings and shortcomings that I felt after reading the article overnight. It is a pity that I am not a little angel and could not find the advantages of the article to make a collection. However, I think the shortcomings can encourage people to make progress. I hope the author will continue to work hard and write smoothly, and not be sad about plagiarism and other things. Come on.
Sweet, sweet! ! ! ! ! I read it in one sitting, I really like this style of writing????
So cute, ah ah ah
Russian matryoshka doll? Shocked! ! !
Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
Ha
Emma originally felt a little bit cruel, but a piece of glass shard got stuck in her throat, and then she realized that it was just a piece of hard candy, and it was so sweet.
555 I accept this ending
If you didn't win the prize, can't you really write more? I like Master so much~