[Online Game Version]
Other people have female childhood friends. Mine is a guy.
He's been glued to my side for years, harder to get rid of than dried gum.
I've finally grown my wings and escaped him.
But then that guy shows up in an online game.
[Sci-Fi Version]
Eight years ago, two seventeen-year-old boys found a strange metal egg on Wanshan Mountain, and then went their separate ways.
Eight years later, a wildly popular online game brought them together again.
But after they entered the game, all sorts of strange events in their real lives seemed to hint that
this was no ordinary game.
A new round of censorship is underway. Anything beyond hand-holding is being censored.
To avoid getting hauled in for questioning, all explicit scenes have been replaced with garbled text.
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The reason why this is a rough reading is because I read it very roughly, and I may not be able to answer what happened in some places, but I still write a few sentences about what I saw!
I have only "had some exposure" to online games and have never gone into depth. Once it involves guilds or larger-scale team battles, I get dizzy. This may be the reason why I didn't read the first half seriously. In addition, my personal reading range is very narrow and I have a strong sense of exclusion for many books (very little reading experience orz), which makes me very interested once I encounter something. , I feel more excited, and I will do more unusual things. For example, I refreshed my phone last night under the text... I woke up and saw a whole line of my name, which was really scary o(╯□╰)o. Regarding my abruptness (I always seem to be very abrupt, I am just a lost novice on the Internet, orz), please forgive me, Orange Girl!
As for what you said in the postscript & acknowledgment that there are many bugs, I personally don't think there are many bugs. Instead of talking about bugs, I think too many elements have been added. They only exist as a setting, and they are very independent. They don't have the awareness that they should be "integrated" when they exist in the same story; or in other words, in some textual descriptions that are inserted here and there, there is no complementary background to make them more complete. When I was reading this article, my groggy brain kept thinking that in fact, a lot of words or chapters could be added to these places to make them more logical. I think the sense of logic is really a wonderful thing. In this case, it is not a problem for the article to exceed 500,000 words, and at the same time, it will add a lot of hard work. . .
Another thing I want to say is that I feel that the literary and emotional lines of Orange are generally not strong. I see this is the third article of yours, customized lover + post trigger + this article, there are many deputy CPs, the love story is not attractive (or just not attractive to me? Orz). Whenever I encounter this kind of situation, I remember a certain emotional line pattern you mentioned. It is indeed a very shocking pattern. As far as I know, every author has a little bit of self-confidence: the things he writes with self-confidence are somewhat different from others, and that stereotype means that all emotional stories are the same. You are just creating a story that others are tired of with a conceited mentality, which makes people lose motivation. In fact, I think it should be run away with, regardless of whether it is very accurate.
I don't know if it's because of this, but I think your love story is very simple and has no suspense. Except for the sadness and joy of the CPs' separation and reunion, except for the ending, which was a bit melancholy, I didn't experience the psychological processes of urging, expectation, worry, and joy. Well, of course, this may also be related to the relaxed tone of your entire article. Readers basically won't worry about the characters who are destined to be HE...
I was obviously very excited when I read it, but why are most of the words written above negative? I feel ashamed! It's not that I don't know how to express praises, but you may only see one person getting crazy here. For details, please see my refresh last night... I always praise some authors almost like an idiot. I can't bear to read those meaningless repeated "oohs" and "ahhhs" (it's enough for me to convey my excitement to the authors for them to know)
Therefore, please allow me to marvel at you to fulfill my rare and strange things. I have an eternal sense of admiration and awe for a story that has gone through many twists and turns, gone through thousands of sails, settled, and has a strong integrity. If there is no outline in advance and you just step on the watermelon rind, then I don't know what kind of talent brought you here. I admire you so much for completing this story. If you think my praise is too high, it's probably because I don't know how to tell stories at all. But I've read enough great stories to feel the same way.
If you come up with a more mysterious ending, I will have no idea where it came from. For example, I am basically in a semi-crash state now. This is why I have not written a single comment on the fate of the characters in this article. My most obvious "setting control" feature has not been revealed in this article. Of course, I know that it would be more direct to ask the author directly about the half-understood part. I am really trying to avoid the situation where I ask too idiotic words and the author will make me fly in my heart! (I feel like I deserve a beating o(╯□╰) o
I will save the opportunity to read this article again.
I think 1,000 words should be enough
Is he originally a system program? ? Is it Odin's dream? ? But didn't he clearly dream of reality? ? Didn't he see the real body? ? ? What was that in the dream? ? ? ? ? Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! ! ! What's going on, what's going on! ! ! ! !
Looking forward to the extra chapter and giving them a happy extra chapter
Scratching and scratching, I want to scratch through the wall of Orange's house...
Even if it recovers, there are still people and programs...
I was shocked by this embarrassing ending. I want a sequel.
It's not scratching the wall, it's tearing down the wall XD
Throw flowers, sprinkle flowers~~Warmly celebrate the completion~~~~This ending is quite good~~
Well, I finally finished the chase. I feel so emotional. Xiaoyu, I found that our cuteness is very similar~~Hide your face
Looking forward to the release of your next work~
I quite like this ending
But I'm looking forward to Rourou's extras.
... Speaking of which, someone's meat is really meat.
It must not be the high imitation food eaten by Shaolin monks.
Being deceived into tears again
Orange, you actually gave an open ending~~~~I scratched my head and burst into tears~~
Orange I hate you~~555~~
Will the extra story show that Ye Kai found someone~~~/(ㄒoㄒ)/~~
ps. Orange should write a normal online game next time T T
I like the strong cyberpunk style setting at the beginning. The silver-gray metal, the steel temple, the ferocious armored dragon, from the ceiling to the floor, countless smooth mirror-like crystal screens... Are unexpectedly appropriate.
I also understand Lietian's hesitation. After going through a long 98 chapters, I finally stood at the crossroads of choice. Should we face the bleak life head-on, or should we immerse ourselves in illusory pleasure and live in a dream? This should be a question that the author has been persistently exploring since the idea was brewed. It is a good question. Because it not only tortures Lietian in the world described in the novel, but also sneaks into the hearts of readers. I began to ask myself: Facing the stumbling blocks of reality, should I hide in the world of the Internet, anesthetize myself with online novels, and deceive myself with online chats... Or is it the opposite? I can't think about it anymore, I feel so sad for it. Lu Xun said that true warriors dare to face the dripping blood, and those who make choices are all good.
The final impressive scene is after the war. The world fell into darkness. The scorching sky floats on the black ocean. Thick sea, broken water, memories of myself and others. Quietly, thinking about nothing. I smell a familiar scent from this description, it really looks like the birth of a human being. The fetus is floating in the amniotic fluid, and then a beam of light shines down from the ceiling... What a metaphorical scene. When Tangerine is fully immersed in his work, he often writes the most magical things, including metaphors, prophecies, ancient legends, and original memories. Whether the author realizes it or not, they actually give his works unexpected beauty.
The reason why this is a rough reading is because I read it very roughly, and I may not be able to answer what happened in some places, but I still write a few sentences about what I saw! I have only "had some exposure" to online games and have never gone into depth. Once it involves guilds or larger-scale team battles, I get dizzy. This may be the reason why I didn't read the first half seriously. In addition, my personal reading range is very narrow and I have a strong sense of exclusion for many books (very little reading experience orz), which makes me very interested once I encounter something. , I feel more excited, and I will do more unusual things. For example, I refreshed my phone last night under the text... I woke up and saw a whole line of my name, which was really scary o(╯□╰)o. Regarding my abruptness (I always seem to be very abrupt, I am just a lost novice on the Internet, orz), please forgive me, Orange Girl! As for what you said in the postscript & acknowledgment that there are many bugs, I personally don't think there are many bugs. Instead of talking about bugs, I think too many elements have been added. They only exist as a setting, and they are very independent. They don't have the awareness that they should be "integrated" when they exist in the same story; or in other words, in some textual descriptions that are inserted here and there, there is no complementary background to make them more complete. When I was reading this article, my groggy brain kept thinking that in fact, a lot of words or chapters could be added to these places to make them more logical. I think the sense of logic is really a wonderful thing. In this case, it is not a problem for the article to exceed 500,000 words, and at the same time, it will add a lot of hard work. . . Another thing I want to say is that I feel that the literary and emotional lines of Orange are generally not strong. I see this is the third article of yours, customized lover + post trigger + this article, there are many deputy CPs, the love story is not attractive (or just not attractive to me? Orz). Whenever I encounter this kind of situation, I remember a certain emotional line pattern you mentioned. It is indeed a very shocking pattern. As far as I know, every author has a little bit of self-confidence: the things he writes with self-confidence are somewhat different from others, and that stereotype means that all emotional stories are the same. You are just creating a story that others are tired of with a conceited mentality, which makes people lose motivation. In fact, I think it should be run away with, regardless of whether it is very accurate. I don't know if it's because of this, but I think your love story is very simple and has no suspense. Except for the sadness and joy of the CPs' separation and reunion, except for the ending, which was a bit melancholy, I didn't experience the psychological processes of urging, expectation, worry, and joy. Well, of course, this may also be related to the relaxed tone of your entire article. Readers basically won't worry about the characters who are destined to be HE... I was obviously very excited when I read it, but why are most of the words written above negative? I feel ashamed! It's not that I don't know how to express praises, but you may only see one person getting crazy here. For details, please see my refresh last night... I always praise some authors almost like an idiot. I can't bear to read those meaningless repeated "oohs" and "ahhhs" (it's enough for me to convey my excitement to the authors for them to know) Therefore, please allow me to marvel at you to fulfill my rare and strange things. I have an eternal sense of admiration and awe for a story that has gone through many twists and turns, gone through thousands of sails, settled, and has a strong integrity. If there is no outline in advance and you just step on the watermelon rind, then I don't know what kind of talent brought you here. I admire you so much for completing this story. If you think my praise is too high, it's probably because I don't know how to tell stories at all. But I've read enough great stories to feel the same way. If you come up with a more mysterious ending, I will have no idea where it came from. For example, I am basically in a semi-crash state now. This is why I have not written a single comment on the fate of the characters in this article. My most obvious "setting control" feature has not been revealed in this article. Of course, I know that it would be more direct to ask the author directly about the half-understood part. I am really trying to avoid the situation where I ask too idiotic words and the author will make me fly in my heart! (I feel like I deserve a beating o(╯□╰) o I will save the opportunity to read this article again. I think 1,000 words should be enough
Is he originally a system program? ? Is it Odin's dream? ? But didn't he clearly dream of reality? ? Didn't he see the real body? ? ? What was that in the dream? ? ? ? ? Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! ! ! What's going on, what's going on! ! ! ! !
Looking forward to the extra chapter and giving them a happy extra chapter
Scratching and scratching, I want to scratch through the wall of Orange's house... Even if it recovers, there are still people and programs...
I was shocked by this embarrassing ending. I want a sequel.
It's not scratching the wall, it's tearing down the wall XD
Throw flowers, sprinkle flowers~~Warmly celebrate the completion~~~~This ending is quite good~~ Well, I finally finished the chase. I feel so emotional. Xiaoyu, I found that our cuteness is very similar~~Hide your face Looking forward to the release of your next work~
I quite like this ending But I'm looking forward to Rourou's extras. ... Speaking of which, someone's meat is really meat. It must not be the high imitation food eaten by Shaolin monks.
Being deceived into tears again Orange, you actually gave an open ending~~~~I scratched my head and burst into tears~~ Orange I hate you~~555~~ Will the extra story show that Ye Kai found someone~~~/(ㄒoㄒ)/~~ ps. Orange should write a normal online game next time T T
I like the strong cyberpunk style setting at the beginning. The silver-gray metal, the steel temple, the ferocious armored dragon, from the ceiling to the floor, countless smooth mirror-like crystal screens... Are unexpectedly appropriate. I also understand Lietian's hesitation. After going through a long 98 chapters, I finally stood at the crossroads of choice. Should we face the bleak life head-on, or should we immerse ourselves in illusory pleasure and live in a dream? This should be a question that the author has been persistently exploring since the idea was brewed. It is a good question. Because it not only tortures Lietian in the world described in the novel, but also sneaks into the hearts of readers. I began to ask myself: Facing the stumbling blocks of reality, should I hide in the world of the Internet, anesthetize myself with online novels, and deceive myself with online chats... Or is it the opposite? I can't think about it anymore, I feel so sad for it. Lu Xun said that true warriors dare to face the dripping blood, and those who make choices are all good. The final impressive scene is after the war. The world fell into darkness. The scorching sky floats on the black ocean. Thick sea, broken water, memories of myself and others. Quietly, thinking about nothing. I smell a familiar scent from this description, it really looks like the birth of a human being. The fetus is floating in the amniotic fluid, and then a beam of light shines down from the ceiling... What a metaphorical scene. When Tangerine is fully immersed in his work, he often writes the most magical things, including metaphors, prophecies, ancient legends, and original memories. Whether the author realizes it or not, they actually give his works unexpected beauty.