Hemanzi

The ending is still happy. So I feel very warm.

With a cry of He Manzi, tears fell in front of you

Very pretty. However, I feel that the weight of the final ending is not enough, and there is no feeling of shock. Hu Erzi's regret is not enough, and Luo's love is not deep enough. I think it can be expanded a little, for example, into three chapters. The first chapter is the reality before telling the story, the second is the story in memory, the third chapter returns to reality again, and the third chapter needs to be written more... I feel that the ending is too light, not sad enough (well... I can't use this adjective, or sad...)... The author's reply: This short story was written relatively early Um... I really didn't have the ability to grasp words at that time. Nai's suggestion is very good I will consider expanding this article

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Good article Well, well, well, well, well written

Khan, one allows you to write a long novel, and the other allows you to be more concise, but there is no contradiction between the two. After the story ended, Hu Erzi (forgive me, I still wanted to laugh) appeared on the stage with a bag that shook his head. However, it would have been better if there were a few clues or hints such as facial expressions and movements. Anyway, I admire your ability to gossip. It was very touching to watch. Author's reply: =3=3=3=3= If I don't call you Little C, what will I call you?

I always feel that MM's writing style could be more concise, but this article really moved me. It's also the first time I've seen a short article get long comments. :)Come on. I'll go read your other articles~

Happiness Even just looking at him makes me feel happy... This is Luo Yan's love and his happiness. So, what about Hu Erzi's happiness? I think that is the eternal longing for Luo Yan. From the moment he ate Luo Yan, the two of them became one, sharing a love, truly close to each other, and there was no longer any distance. Two people who love each other, perhaps their biggest wish is to be together forever, Luo Yan and Hu Erzi, they have been together forever, but if Hu Erzi does not eat Luo Yan, then maybe what they will always have is life, not happiness. This article by Orange may be an abusive article, but the abuse is very heart-warming. Hu Erzi's pain and longing, Luo Yan's waiting and no regrets, that kind of happiness is touching. I remember when I watched "Love" before, I was impressed by Zhongquan's words: "I can only see the moment when the body is combined, but I can't see the eternity of the soul being connected." No matter how close the bodies of two people are, they are still two people and two hearts. They can never become one person. When you can't see another person or another heart, suspicion and barriers will arise. In a hundred years of life, perhaps this kind of suspicion and estrangement can be hidden and covered up, but for people who live forever, the accumulation of this kind of suspicion and estrangement may bring about eternal separation. So what is the meaning of eternity? Therefore, the love for Orange's article also comes from Hu Erzi's "betrayal", if it is really betrayal. Hu Erzi who ate Luo Yan became both Hu Erzi and Luo Yan. The two people became one person. After Hu Erzi fully understood Luo Yan's love, his heart and Luo Yan's heart became one. I think this is the highest ideal of love. Some people may say that Luo Yan is stupid because he was betrayed by his lover, but he still looked at that person stupidly. However, in fact, Hu Erzi did not betray him. Although he ate his body, he also gave his heart to him. For the rest of eternity, Hu Erzi will miss Luo Yan and live in his love for Luo Yan. Some people say that the more you love someone, the more you will resemble them. I still remember Subaru from "Tokyo Babylon". After Seishirou left, Subaru became Seishirou. Because he loved him and missed him, he would imitate him unknowingly, as if the other person was still with him. Therefore, the unfortunate Hu Erzi is also a happy Hu Erzi. There are many kinds of happiness. Some people's happiness is two people growing old together, some people's happiness is having it once, and some people's happiness is a lifetime of waiting. There are memories and longings while waiting, then it is happiness. For Luo Yan, just looking at Hu Erzi silently, looking at his love for him, looking at every bit of him, and then slowly waiting for the day when he will become a human being, waiting for the day when they meet again, then such waiting is happiness. Orange's "He Manzi" has touching warmth and interprets love from a very unique perspective. It is not only HE that is happiness. From "He Manzi", what I saw is a happiness that makes people touch, feel distressed, but also makes people feel very warm. I am looking forward to this series of works by Orange and want to read the next one, so come on Orange Children's Shoes and update as soon as possible~~ 555, I have been trapped in abuse stories my whole life. The more abuse I read, the more I want to read it. The more I read it, the more uncomfortable it becomes. This is my first time to write a long review, and I finally managed to squeeze out 1,000 words... If I don't write well, don't hit me with eggs and rocks... Author's reply: Thank you fans=3=3=3=3=3=3=3= A friend who read this short article once encouraged me to write a longer one. But I always feel that if I write a long novel... On the contrary, I will be tortured to the point of... Giving up...

Hmm... It feels very good... I'll try my best to hold it in for a while...