[Main story complete] The sweet-romance tag was added by mistake. Sorry, I bow in apology. This is not sweet. There is a groveling arc, and it is 1v1 with no changing tops.
[Enter at your own risk, lie flat and take the scolding _(:з"∠)_]
Please add my next book, The Real Young Master Becomes the Villain's Foil, to your collection: a cold and heartless, scheming fake young master top X a fierce, beautiful, vengeful real young master bottom. I'll start writing it as soon as this one is finished. The blurb is below this one~
[This book's blurb:]
[Cold, heartless, black-hearted lotus top X vicious but breathtaking bottom. Both transmigrate into a book.]
After the Demon Venerable Xie Li and his sworn enemy killed each other, they both transmigrated into a wealthy-family novel called The Pitiful One Holds the Harem Magnet Script.
The protagonist bottom is a pure, innocent little flower, adored by everyone except the white moonlight who shares the same name as his sworn enemy: He Yu.
The original Xie Li, meanwhile, is a vicious villain in the story, guilty of every evil under the sun. In the end, naturally, his family fortune crumbles and he dies.
After taking in all the information about the story, Xie Li scoffs and tosses the original plot aside, letting himself do as he pleases.
Until the original story gradually falls apart: the original tops can't let go of the little flower, yet become wildly attracted to him.
The protagonist top secretly pines for him. The sinister top loves him but can't have him, growing twisted and obsessive. The supporting tops all regret their choices.
Yet Xie Li only wants to break free of the plot and couldn't care less about the love lines gone awry, with one exception: his sworn enemy from his previous life, who has lost his memories.
The young man is clean and beautiful, but has no memory of his past life. He shyly tries to win Xie Li over. As Xie Li cares for him, he gradually develops some genuine feelings.
Then one day, he suddenly discovers that He Yu regained his memories as the Chosen One of Heaven's Will long ago, and has been manipulating Xie Li's tenderness and indulgence all along.
He deceived him into falling in love and ruined his family. He nearly let one of the supporting tops humiliate him.
On the day they lay their cards on the table, He Yu has become a new power among the wealthy and dropped his disguise, his gaze icy. "Did you enjoy yourself, Lord Xie?"
Xie Li tosses aside the gift he spent ages preparing, yet smiles lazily. "Thanks. It was only so-so."
He Yu will never forget the man who killed him in his previous life. Even as he died, he was consumed by obsession.
When they meet again, He Yu is filled with hatred and finally succeeds in getting his revenge.
He Yu thinks he can put his inner demons to rest once and for all, until, in a remote tavern far away, he sees Xie Li embracing and kissing someone else. Jealousy suddenly twists through him, nearly suffocating him.
The other man still wears a careless smile, but when he turns to look at He Yu, his gaze holds nothing but cold indifference.
[****The Real Young Master Becomes the Villain's Foil: Blurb****]
At seventeen, Jiang Lanyue is told that he is not the child of a retired worker in a rundown little town, but the only son of the Jiang family, one of the great families in City A.
But by the time he receives this news, the Jiang family has gone bankrupt and has sent the fake young master back to Jiang Lanyue's home.
Jiang Wangxing is refined and composed, with an exceptional intellect. His adoptive parents take an instant liking to him. No one pays any attention to the shabby Jiang Lanyue standing in the corner.
Across the crowd, he meets Jiang Wangxing's cool, detached gaze, and suddenly feels a surge of jealousy.
Everyone in town says Jiang Wangxing is warm and courteous, but Jiang Lanyue knows better. He once secretly saw Jiang Wangxing smoking in an alley, his expression cold and fierce through the thick white smoke.
He is forced to call the other boy his older brother, forced to be in the same class as him, and even forced to sleep in the same bed.
No one knows how much Jiang Lanyue hates him, except Jiang Wangxing, who holds him from behind and gently comforts him as they huddle together on the rickety little bed late at night.
Jiang Lanyue hates him. He grits his teeth and curses him for stealing his parents, and wishes him a miserable death. Jiang Wangxing silently accepts it all, holding him without a word.
Later, the Jiang family rises again. The Jiang couple bring the two children who had been living away from home back from the rundown little town, and the truth about the real and fake young masters is made public.
Mud faces a rainbow. Refinement and squalor become a glaring contrast.
Jiang Lanyue turns back in a panic, only to meet the other boy's expressionless gaze, cold as if they were strangers.
He hears Jiang Wangxing talking about him with the sons of wealthy families, his tone cold and weary: "Just a little beggar. Not worth playing with."
All their past tenderness was an illusion. Jiang Lanyue flees in disgrace that very night and vanishes without a trace.
Many years later, Jiang Lanyue has made a name for himself as a painter. He quietly returns to the country after being invited to an event, and at a banquet, he walks straight into a man's frost-cold eyes.
Jiang Lanyue is so frightened that he turns to run again, but the man corners him.
Jiang Wangxing stares at the familiar face, clear redness in his eyes. "Long time no see, little brother."
Theme: Love life, and don't let the past hold you back.
How can I put it, it just looks very frustrating. To be honest, it is very, very good-looking, but I feel that Gong is not worthy of it. Shou does not owe him anything from his previous life to the book, and everything he insists on has been offset. Instead, he took revenge. I felt that this person was really outrageous. He clearly had no position. Later, in the name of getting better, he went to get entangled with the so-called protagonist he hated the most, haha. I thought there would be a crematorium, but in the end he just saved Shou at the most critical moment, that's all. Without him, in the book, Shou would have been able to escape from all this injustice, and he would have been superfluous. Even now, I feel like he doesn't realize where he went wrong. Why do you call this a crematorium?
So He helped Shen Baibai hide in the closet, helped Shen Baibai, ignored the hot news about the scandal with Shen Baibai, drove away Xie's housekeeper who asked for help, signed Shen Baibai into the company, gave him a top position, gave him the ability to hurt Xie, and then said he was using him. He Mou took away Xie's family property, made him bankrupt, allowed him to almost be raped, and allowed Shen Baibai to hurt Xie's friends. He told Xie that he would not let Xie go if he was with someone else, and then said that he loved him. Wow, love written in big letters is so touching.
... Did I do something evil? Three books in a row are this kind of weird crematorium. Although the level of these books is: after watching the extra chapter at the beginning, I lost my temper, and directly finished the sweet slap in the face where only the injured person was injured, and started to break down and curse across the screen > I felt sad for my misfortune, but I was angry and didn't fight, and finally reconciled with Gong in a light and airy way > It's not the same as this article More, take revenge and then stop hating and it's over > This article has reached the extra chapter, and then it suddenly got better. I don't understand their good logic. If He saved the life, I owe He a life-saving grace, but He was not a good person before. Those not being good people are enough to offset the life-saving grace. No matter how they say it, they can even it out, that's it.
The author would like to thank Li Li for your very good writing. I like him very much, but let's not write more articles like this in the future! It's very unfortunate. This article is generally very well written, and I praise you for it, but I was really frustrated when I read it, and it almost made me angry. I also read other novels when I read this one, but this one was particularly attractive to me, so I insisted on finishing it. Da Xie Li is very good. Hex, please listen to my advice. Don't write anything that will make us readers angry. Thank you for your novel. I enjoyed reading it. I like you. Keep it up! (???)?
That's awesome. I really like Lili. The writing is so good. The only thing is that the attack is a bit speechless.
It's not sweet enough... I can't even feel the love from Gong... At the beginning, I still felt a little bit secretly in love. Amidst the condemnation that the crematorium was not strong enough, I felt that the protagonist's love was restrained and put away, and Gong was left with various courtships... Which was a bit unpleasant. It feels a little more exciting in my previous life. Speaking of which, the protagonist seems to have been kissing various people... It's not necessary.
The brutal attack is not enough, but in the end I don't like to attack anymore, which is good.
I didn't understand the fact that Xie Hui fell in love with He. In the end, when He forced Xie to cry behind bars, I felt very powerless when I brought Xie Hui in. I felt that He was truly a son of heaven and I would do whatever you want. I felt sad that I had lost to heaven. Xie's goal has always been Tiandao, not He, so from the beginning Xie put himself and Tiandao on the same plane. He was just a channel to challenge Tiandao. He could be anyone, as long as he was the son of Tiandao. So Xie should have killed him from the beginning and had no reason to let him go.
Without looking ahead, I felt it wasn't aggressive enough, and revenge wasn't satisfying enough. There is a lot of literature to read
I think it's a good idea to start low and go high. Overall, it's good-looking, and it's a cool and refreshing article with some brains.