The Tough Farmer from the 1960s Dotes on His Wife Like a Treasure

I didn't have to catch up anymore, so I thought of this article again, and analyzed why the gold finger is too big. First of all, I feel that the author's system should not be called Taobao. The purpose of this name is immediately clear. It can be said that readers have deep-rooted impressions. You can buy food, daily necessities, and mechanical products. Therefore, when the author writes about star battleships, simulated robots, and doctors, it breaks the imagination. The idea that the gold finger is too big appears. If you change it to any other original name, this problem will not occur, but Taobao does not work. Secondly, the author positions his works as career-oriented heroine stories. I don't think this is accurate. The appearance of interstellar-level technology in period stories is far beyond the scope of career stories. After all, it is a down-dimensional attack, so it should be regarded as a cool story. Then it is not surprising that there are exaggerated things in cool stories. At this time, it is much easier to analyze the reasons why cool stories fail. To put it more broadly, cool stories are not good-looking only because they are not cool enough. I said that the reason for the dissatisfaction in the later part of this article may be because the external environment has not kept up. From weak to strong, she stands out from the crowd. The heroine has done it. From the real environment, the heroine is very good and can do everything well. But when the heroine does better, the people around her can no longer set off the heroine. The heroine should change the map and go to a more powerful environment to show off. First, it can be some university, then government departments, foreign guests, the capital, national key machinery departments, etc.

The author actually writes well, and the daily writing is very warm and good, but the career line may be a bit broken later on. Even if the heroine is very lucky and has great luck, she must at least have a struggle process. If the author wants to write a short story, for example, just mention that she can repair machines, and mention that she helped her nephew get a job. After that, every time she went out to buy and repair machines, she didn't have to write down the details every time, but also showed a slap in the face. This slap in the face actually didn't feel good, but was a bit empty. In the later period, many of the same routines were used, which looked fake and then collapsed. Also, every time she does something, it seems to be smooth sailing, and she gets through it without any setbacks. When she wants to be successful, she suppresses it first, but it's always a little difficult, and then she gets better when she solves it. If you don't want to spread such a big story, the tone set by the author is actually quite good. It would be good to write about daily life. Otherwise, it would be very cute to write about the first child and the second child and the daily life of raising a baby. I suggest that the author try to write a book that is related to his or her own work. I think the author's book fell apart in the later period because he didn't quite understand the daily life of that era and the professions he wrote about, such as repairmen, raising chickens and ducks. It's actually quite interesting to write about professional knowledge well. Come on, author, I hope the next article can be a work that satisfies you!

It sucks. Author, what are you doing? It sucks.

Don't be discouraged, it's very well written, and I really like the story of a heroine who has a golden finger, is ambitious, and has a bit of a family background. Generally speaking, there are too many top-notch stories about farming that make it unreadable. How can there be so many top-notch stories? Even if there are, just one or two will be enough. Stories about a family working together are more interesting. So it will be updated soon. I bought and read all the chapters without leaving a single chapter???

Just give it a try. I think the author's short stories about parents are very good, so the author's current base is short essays about parents in the era, and the author's characteristic is that he writes emotional lines well. Other authors have short stories about parents. Basically, after the wedding period, the relationship slowly begins to turn into a family relationship. What I write does not have the warm feeling before marriage. As for the author, in the later period, he will occasionally feel passionately in love. I feel that this is good, continue to carry it forward.

I will never read this author's articles again. Count how many pieces of writing you have left unfilled. You know you don't have the ability, but you still write down your career line. Don't you want to write an outline before writing? We spend money to read such rubbish articles. We really feel depressed. Please be kind to the responsible readers.

Suddenly it was over. . . . I want to see the details of eldest sister and Changsheng

It feels a bit unfinished. I just finished reading Entering the State. I haven't written about my career or my children. If the golden finger is too big, I should limit it. In short, the experience is not good. I feel that it is not worth buying. It is not as good as the previous articles.

Hurry up and wait for the next one

It turns out that as soon as possible is so fast