The Angsty Novel Heroine I Wrote Came to Settle the Score with Me [GL]

How come you realize you have no brain after watching this? ? ?

Will Hou Xiao and Wu Xiaojing become lovers in the future?

It was okay in the early stage, but what the hell happened in the later stage, not to mention the extra episode 1, Hou Mu's character was completely ruined, and I was also ruined, I was speechless.

Um, Hou Mu's transformation is so unnatural. He said before that he didn't dare to use a dagger, but now he dares to stab people with a potion?

To be fair, couldn't a female general take the enemy's general's head among a hundred people? . . Assimilated by modern people? Even if you can coerce several people, you can't do it?

Congratulations on the completion. The following only represents my personal opinion, different people have different requirements. The first half of this article is really interesting, and it has some personal characteristics. I couldn't help but subscribe to Chapter 18. The author threw out a lot of jokes, although I couldn't understand some of them (local cultural differences, I don't often surf the Internet, it's my problem hh). The tone of the whole article can be said to be light-hearted and funny, but sometimes it is funny even when talking about serious business, but it just feels a bit annoying. The emotional line of the protagonist... I personally feel that the transformation has been quite bald. The layout before more than 40 chapters was quite good, with possessive expressions, habitual physical contact, etc… Why do you just call your wife GHS after returning from a long trip...? Sure enough, I am an ancient person, and GHS just after confirming the relationship, it is more exciting than 419. Then there's 69... I think the author really wanted to bring out some social news through the novel, but Mu Mu went into such a weird village alone. If it weren't for the aura of the protagonist, she would have died long ago. If Mu Mu was someone who exercised regularly and knew some self-defense skills, I wouldn't want to vomit, but looking at Mu Mu, a scumbag whose legs were shaking for three days after climbing the 30th floor... Ugh... It's a bit unbearable to look at. In short, this incident reminded me that Mumu would take in Xiao Pian, but it was only because he found out on the Internet that the school had a lot of dark history, and because she was the daughter of his own novel, he raised her in his own home. Then there is the self-safety line of the silly one. I am not afraid of old age. Of course, I can do it casually. After all, the entertainment industry writers can't escape the hot search memes + reversals. But I was very shocked when the little poor girl voluntarily took the medicine. A female general who has experienced the pain of prison and been on the battlefield, has seen so many evil people, and is still a scheming person. She is so easily fooled, and goes to the private room without calling Mu Mu for confirmation. Is this caused by not being clear-headed after sleeping + falling in love brain IQ... I understand that Ke Lian's only tie in this world is Mu Mu. But I still think this incident can be handled in a better way... Instead of being like the ancient bloody story where some tyrant breaks in at the critical moment... Oh... And this incident also highlights a point, the trust issue between them, which is the trust that the other party will not put themselves in danger. Mu Mu herself mentioned it when she accompanied her grandpa to discuss Li Lai's threat with Chen Chen in Chapter 9X. In the end, the incident was over, the story was over... I just... Wanted to cry. I really like the character of Little Poor. In my eyes, she is the one who has always doted on Mu Mu and is more mature than Mu Mu. So I had really high expectations for her, but unfortunately it turned out to be a bit silly and sweet in the end. I only read the story here, I will read the extra when I have time... Thank you for the story! I hope the author will write better stories in the future. Come on! FIGHTING!

Plate after plate of dog blood...

Just... Quite suddenly...

I feel that the subsequent scripts are better than the test scene... Could it be that Mu Mu was too silly and I couldn't get into the role...

Will it be another one that comes out?