A Fateful Pair

Oh sweat = - I can't find a reply in Jinjiang = - let alone a long comment. What a tragedy. I don't know if you still remember a P child, please update the article... Under the discussion, it was said that if you update the article, it will write a long review for you. In the end, I just didn't write anything. Although you didn't say anything afterwards, I think sometimes you still have to do what you say. So here is the following. A child like me who has no quality = -, no culture = -, and no education will not be able to write a long review. So just treat it as a long comment. I have a bad memory, just like you =-. So... I forgot that it was the article I urged you to update. It should be "Double-sided Fate". Regarding Double-sided Fate, first of all, I found typos. I don't mind at all if you reread it slowly and then revise and update the text. How long has it been since you updated = - The heroine is still a strong type. The protagonist. Also a beauty. As for the plot, I also think it's good, although it doesn't have any ups and downs, making it "unforgettable". At least, it's satisfying for me, who is picky about articles. It just suits my taste. I read basically everything you write = - (well, except for tutors) As you talk, it becomes my opinion of you, not the content of the article itself. (I just don't know how to write long reviews, what a mouthful!) When it comes to review articles, I only have a few adjectives in my mind: ups and downs, profound meaning, obscure foreshadowing, refreshing... Etc. I'm too lazy to say anything docile. Anyway, I like this article, it's a mouthful. Whether it's the style of the article or the character of the protagonist, it reminds me of the God of Death (as expected, I've been hanging out in the Death Bar for a long time). "There is no absolute evil". The only thing is that although the "Three Ghosts in Guanzhong" in Double Fate are evil, they are just a supporting role and there is not much description. The fight just started, but the fight was described briefly. But it's not bad for people who don't know how to write. Well, I also saw the author's comment... You said you were obsessed with fighting scenes recently = -. Maybe it was influenced by the big sword or something. Some of the articles are embarrassing... I've never really liked sex scenes or anything like that... This is probably why I like your writing style. Although you said it was a spoof, Mary Sue, XXXXX. Content, character, or ability. There have been some changes, but the style of the article has not changed significantly (when the big change was made, there was a poop = -), but I have to deny that when the protagonist Jing H (... Ahem...) Was introduced in the article about recovery, I was indeed embarrassed. I don't deny that the many bloody plots in "Crazy Story" made me embarrassed. No one can keep me. This is the first time I read your article. I was naive at that time, at least more naive than I am now, but the memories are beautiful. When I look back at your article, I also feel a little childish (= -is this a criticism?) The silent slander in my heart and the beauty in my imagination fully prove the truth that people can change. When the high school entrance examination was about to take place, I read your article with trepidation. Well, more to come... Skip... Moving on to Shuangmengyuan, I feel that the articles you write, Micah, and the people who write them are very "clean". Because underneath the cleanliness on the surface, you can't see the deep filthiness. (Is this a criticism? Is it a criticism?) It is undeniable that I like the cleanliness of this surface. I don't know if you understand my confusing words. Basically, "evil" people will die or "sublimate" in a short time. The boss has not ignored anything, but he is very clean during the conversation anyway. Although they all have their own personalities. Although I like it, on the other hand, it also reveals your shortcomings. Most characters will have similar "shadows". (I'm a mess, I'm not suitable for analysis, and I'm not suitable for putting the lid on the pot...) Well, as for time-travel writing, it's enough that readers like it and the author likes it. Long review, long review, are you done yet? ! ! ! ! ! ! I didn't keep my word, right? I did it, proud! ! ! A little shorter will do fine... Okay! Better than nothing, shrug. Why can't I see replies and long comments in Jinjiang? This is bad, BS. Oh! ! Yes, I'm going to… complain about you recently. It's been two years, why hasn't it been updated? ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Ah, hey, what a fake trap!

- -It's still me, how many years have passed? Hey, whipped

Except for my lovely Ziye and Xiaoyan, they are all crazy, hehehe~

In fact, I think the people in your article are quite loving. . . . ! ~

Big. . . . It seems that there are not many normal people in your article. . .

It seems that our hobbies are very similar! BT is great!!

Yuanmu... My dear, you really don't think who writes about whom... Cough cough cough...

There are so many bad bt men around The future of the heroine is worrying

We Shui Feng is very depressed. If I had known earlier, I would not have played the role of sister. Now we are in big trouble.

The word "host" is really well used...