My Dad Is a Transmigrator

The writing style has a sense of tranquility and far-reaching meaning, and it is told eloquently. It's just that there isn't as much content as before, such as the interesting story of going to the desert to see trees, the process of pregnancy, the process of falling in love, the process of confessing that I want to be in a relationship, and the rest are all kind of extra narratives. The text cannot be like this. For example, when I went to Jiuzhaigou, I had to describe the content and the interesting things that happened. I was very excited at first, but the journey was far away, so I wasn't so excited. I met some people and had wonderful stories. The tour guide and driver are responsible for the customs and customs along the way, and the beautiful scenery at the end. And the difference in temperature on the return journey. This is the author who has recently written such a short time-travel book. The framework is so big, and there are many things that have not been written, such as barbarians, or exotic customs, corn and sweet potatoes that are a must-have for time-travelers, and the Hainan Navigation Plan. There are so few descriptions of how the night market is lively, how the bright lights of thousands of families came to be, the achievements of the protagonist father, what he invented, and what he did are all very general. The imperial examination system or something, or everyone in the world can study and study, how can business and trade be in the hands of the emperor, and how can it be done without money. Why do charities only plant trees? They also have other functions, such as organizing various activities for comparison and offering advice, helping orphans and widowed mothers, setting up an orphanage or something like that, or setting up a technical college, so that such poor people can have ideas. There are also installment plans for opening a store to popularize commerce.

You might consider changing the title of the book. Every character is very vivid, so no one is reading it. For example, The Regent's Daughter. I am the successor of socialism, and the ideal missionary is a princess. Her father is the regent. After the time-traveling father became the regent, any of these names are acceptable! For example, the record of a good harvest, the record of good fortune, and the record of raising a daughter by Gong Changxing. Lin'an Biography Huangliang dream, knowing people and affairs, things are right and people are different. A cowardly ruler is inhumane, but he helps his friends and changes his dynasty. Later, he received an official title, a diagnosis and a temple gift from God, and a beautiful woman became a couple. After giving birth to a son, his mother passed away. He was extremely sad and left Beijing to teach his daughter. Go up to the northern wasteland and guard the territory. Thousands of yellow sand and dead bones have been poured out, and trees and canals have been planted to turn the water into forests. When I sit down and have some free time, my goddaughter knows what's going on in Lin'an. Youdao is the charm of imperial power: when the emperor collapses, the world will be in chaos. It is difficult for Xiudao to leave the world, so he is busy returning and making arrangements. He brought his daughter to the capital and defeated the conspiracy with one or two clever tricks; he taught the young emperor to be alert and wise, to use the king's ways well, and to govern the world. I borrowed an excerpt from Manluhua's poem.

The noble ladies in the capital enjoy the anointing of the common people, and they can get it without making money. . The little princess didn't know the social order at that time.

Girls in the capital want to marry into a good family, oh, preferably into a concubine. Ha On the importance of education

I think of our country's efforts to return sand to forest and wiped out a desert in Inner Mongolia.

I think of our country's efforts to return sand to forest and wiped out a desert in Inner Mongolia.

Xiao Tiantian is so cute!

Sister Jiang Shui won't marry the one who broke off the engagement of Jing Zhaoyin's daughter, right??

The content is interesting and the writing is so-so

His father is a long-term thinker, so he made the wrong call hahahaha