Brown Sugar and Ginger Tea

It's very sweet, but I think the author can write it better. I think it's not suitable for the heroine to be so angry and want to break up after going abroad. I think it's not suitable for the character of the heroine who likes the hero so much. I can write a misunderstanding that makes the heroine give up and add the provocation of the female partner. This is only reasonable. There is also the male protagonist. He didn't come back for five years and he still thought it was unreasonable not to break up. He could come back secretly in the middle and then saw the female protagonist with another boy. He was very painful and never came back again. Don't add that other boys have kissed the heroine. I felt disgusted when I was separated from each other and held hands, and then the heroine broke up. This is fine. Adding these I think it will be more reasonable and beautiful, otherwise many of them will not stand up.

But it looks quite interesting, better than some

Hahaha, isn't the hero dirty after he bumped into a flower bed? There was even one shot

?! It seems I didn't bring a byt!

Thanks for the limited exemption, but I personally find the plot confusing. These 10 chapters are like a roller coaster. Let's not talk about whether you will be jealous and wonder how your ex-girlfriend who broke up five years ago gave birth to a 9-year-old child. I personally dislike the plot setting of the KTV heroine's adventure. After the heroine is selected, she chooses the adventure. The content of the adventure is to choose a member of the opposite sex present to hug for one minute. The heroine chooses a revolutionary comrade, a married male classmate with a wife. I personally think this situation is quite ambiguous. In order to prevent people present from misunderstanding, it is understandable to choose someone who can't be laughed at. But to be honest, the other party's married status is not a tool for the heroine to escape the ambiguous teasing. Will the other party's wife know about it? In the end, the reason I really couldn't stand it was that after 5 years of separation, the male and female protagonists did this thing when they reunited for the second time under the influence of alcohol... From a God's perspective, the male and female protagonists will end up together, so seeing these ambiguous and intimate plots will enhance the relationship between them. Wen, I think it's quite sweet, but let's put aside God's perspective... It's been 5 years. Although I remember my first love hard, I haven't seen each other for 5 years. We are still ex-boyfriend and girlfriend. The male protagonist used alcohol to pretend to be crazy, forced kisses, and engaged in sexual behaviors that made me feel uncomfortable, like a pervert who sexually harassed me.

Like!!! So sweet!

Thank you for the sweet cookie

Why is the front of this picture the same as a short paragraph from the previous chapter?

"Things" are a big thorn in the side of the author~ time

Emm.. So why is Zhou Jiangshui so close to that female classmate named He Wan?