
A Life of Fooling Around (A Chinese Paladin 3 Derivative / Hu Huo RPF)
胡活一辈子(仙剑三衍生/胡霍真人)
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 24k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 17y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
10Chapters
58Favorites
2.1kClicks per chapter
55Comments
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Damn, the article is pretty good (*๓′╰╯`๓)♡ I want to follow it. When I looked at the update, it turned out to be from 2009. Drunk(›′ω`‹)
Gone? Gone? I just got addicted to watching it... Come back and update
No, LL, it's such a good article, why am I being fooled. Woo woo
555~ I feel cheated. How long has it been since I updated? Damn, don't give up! (Hold your thighs
Do you also paint pink? People of the same taste. I look forward to what follows.
Tricked? No way? ! What a trap! ? What a rare good article...
. . . Is it just kissing? . Is it just kissing? . .
I also. . . Nosebleed. .
It turned out to be a kiss. . .
This is my first time writing a book review, just because I was really touched by it. It's hard to imagine that I, who was firmly opposed to fan creations in the past, would be so persistent in falling in love with fan creations. I can only say that Jing Qing's charm is too powerful. Leaving aside the TV series, among the many Jing Qing fan creations, this one really touched me the most. Although the story has only just unfolded so far, the two are still in the ambiguous stage of loving you, but just because the two are so entangled, it makes the onlookers hate and love each other, so they have to keep their hearts in their throats to watch their development. This shows how unkind it is for the author to stop filling in the holes at this time Because it is a modern novel, the story naturally has nothing to do with TV series or games. It just simply borrows a few names. What's rare is that the author strictly maintained and developed the original personality of the characters in his creation, and used spiritual words to portray them vividly and full of life, making Jing Qing's story as eloquent and touching as it happened around us. The most noteworthy thing is the author's "transformation" of Chang Qing. Xiao Huo's performance in the TV series is amazing. I don't know if it is because of his handsome appearance and weak and pitiful temperament. He is originally a master of martial arts and decisiveness, but it always makes people want to protect him unconsciously. In "Lifetime", everyone can finally fall in love with Huo Changqing legitimately. This is definitely a character that makes people feel sorry for him. I always wonder whether the author added a lot of elements of Xiao Huo to Changqing during the creation process - just like the name "Huo Changqing" she specially used. Here, Changqing's "boring" is brought to the extreme. Although such a bad guy and a beautiful person is lovable, sometimes he will make the people who love him feel sad and resentful because he is unconditionally good to anyone - so in the opening chapter, classmate Hu Jingtian is jumping up and down in anger in front of the good guy but is helpless. It is said that Changqing makes people feel distressed not only because of his weak and gentle character. From the beginning, except for Sedum, everyone seems to be hurting this honest man who has no desires or desires, intentionally or unintentionally. The use of the pregnant female student, the hostility of Chang Yin's wife, and the intentional and unintentional exclusion and isolation of him by the entire environment all make people feel depressed and entangled. Only Jingtian was kind to him - not because of the cliche love at first sight, but because of the righteousness in Jingtian's character, which made the two people's lives intersect, and they discovered each other's goodness in the long and smooth interactions. In fact, the author did not deliberately create an atmosphere of depressing and entangled sadness. Instead, her writing appears playful and witty. It is far from black humor, but it does not play with nihilistic romance. But in such free and easy words, there is always a hint of sadness that lingers from beginning to end. In terms of advancing the plot, the author handles it neatly and without any delay. However, the key to the quality of a romance novel lies in whether the details are fascinating. This is where the author's skill is shown. The "melodrama"-style advancement method in the novel eliminates the need for branches between chapters, but when describing the details, it can also be long-lasting and touching. Xiao Huo's silent endurance after being treated with hostility by Chang Yin's wife, his various hardships in school life, and the story behind his ear piercings are all extremely sad. What impressed me the most was of course the trip the two took together to Fenghuang Ancient City. It's obviously just a simple description, but the picture of drizzle ancient streets, stilted houses, and handsome young people holding bamboo-bone oil-paper umbrellas comes to life vividly on the page. As for the scene where the two couldn't help but passionately kiss after being drunk, and the scene where Sedum carries the groggy Changqing on the mountain trail, it was even more adorable and made my blood boil. The overall feeling is that the author never directly depicts the psychological process of the two, but only subtly influences the readers in the narrated stories. The moment Jingtian sees his own feelings clearly, the readers seem to empathize with him and experience this emotion with him - it is touching and yet true and believable. After waiting for so long, a side story is finally here. However, the author still does not change his style of making others tangled. The short length of more than a thousand words made me feel sad. Changqing's heart-wrenchingness reached its extreme in an instant. This "sultry" little lover maintained his low self-esteem and silently endured character since the beginning of the story. He chose to escape just when the relationship between the two showed signs of progress. At that moment, the two said goodbye as usual. When Jingtian was secretly delighted by Changqing's sudden affectionate address, Changqing said: "Goodbye, Xiaotian..." - Jingtian didn't know that Changqing's farewell had such a deep meaning. Perhaps when Chang Qing said this, there was sadness and helplessness in his eyes, but he was confused by the name "Xiaotian" and did not see it. "Until I graduated from Jingtian University and left the provincial capital, they never saw each other again" - because of this sentence, I finally made up my mind to give up writing the homework due tomorrow, and pieced together this long and confusing review to relieve the depression after being abused! So I implore the author: come back, I really can't wait to graduate soon