
It's Hard Being the White Moonlight's Substitute
白月光替身真难当
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- Completed
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- 159k Words
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- Danmei (BL)
- Updated
- 5y ago
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- JJWXC
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48Chapters
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What do you think after reading this article? I felt that the author's writing style was really immature. Because one of my sisters commented that this article was very good, I made an impulse purchase and bought the full text last night. But to be honest, the more I read, the more I regretted it. I should have bought it chapter by chapter. First of all, Lu Yanning's feelings for the emperor are really inexplicable. I can understand that the emperor likes Lu Yanning, but why does Lu Yanning like the emperor? Not to mention that the emperor wanted to kill Lu Yanning when he lost his memory at the beginning, treating him as a substitute, not saving him immediately when he was captured by Ling Ge, and later even ordered Huan Huan to be killed. There was nothing worthy of Lu Yanning's liking in the emperor. Let's just say that later, when Lu Yanning regained his memory, he had forgotten some unimportant things he said, so he had no feelings for the emperor at all. So what did he like about the emperor? Why do you like the emperor? Also, if Lu Yanning is not a natural mosquito repellent, I think the first thing he will like is Huanhuan. In this palace, Huanhuan is really good to him and even goes to death for him, so there is no reason for Lu Yanning not to like Huanhuan. Okay, even if Lu Yanning is a natural mosquito repellent, why doesn't he like the national master who always calls him his benefactor? The little national master was also very kind to him. Okay, just think that Lu Yanning and the emperor are two people who are in love with each other. This is indeed the case in reality - a person is very kind to you, but you just have no feelings for him. But novels are novels, and reality is reality. In novels, you have to explain your feelings first. And if Lu Yanning really fell in love with the emperor, then why did he have no feelings for the emperor five years ago and even forget about him? Is he M? Just like to be abused? Besides, you have to explain what it is about the emperor that Lu Yanning likes, right? Looking at the whole story, I really don't think there is anything about the emperor that Lu Yanning likes, except for the fact that he helped Lu Yanning block the arrow in the end. When the emperor was nice to Lu Yanning in the early days, he was completely taking advantage of him. Although he might have a little hope for Lu Yanning's good in his heart, most of the time he kept Lu Yanning in order to bring down the Taifu, right? Later, Lu Yanning became a teacher, and the emperor followed Lu Yanning regardless of his wishes. How could such disrespectful behavior lead to a wife? Sometimes there is really only a thin line between affection and stalking. The most important point is that people's rationality and sensibility are actually difficult to separate. Lu Yanning knew rationally that the emperor killed Huanhuan to protect himself, but emotionally he would definitely resent the emperor, because Lu Yanning's original family was very unhappy, with a cheap father and two stepmothers and younger brothers who wanted him dead, so Huanhuan's sister could be said to be very important in his heart. So how could he forgive the emperor just because he said he was sorry? Even if he knew rationally that the emperor was not wrong, he would definitely be resentful emotionally. Huanhuan should actually be a thorn in the hearts of the two of them. The thorn that made the emperor feel guilty when he mentioned it, but the author did not write it out. He only wrote Huanhuan as the tool that was the ultimate reason why Lu Yanning wanted to kill the prime minister. (Also, I think the emperor can actually keep Huanhuan. He can put Huanhuan in prison first, and then find some death row prisoners to replace Huanhuan, but the emperor did not do this and killed Huanhuan on the spot) In fact, there are many bugs in the article. The prime minister hired a lot of staff because he was not as talented as Lu Yanning. So where did Lu Yanning's talent come from? In fact, if a modern person suddenly comes to ancient times, he will not be more awesome than the ancient noble masters. After all, the ancients learned things that modern people do not learn. It is impossible for a modern person to understand things like eight-part essays and etiquette better than the ancients. So why is Lu Yanning so awesome? Is it because of the help of the system? If he took advantage of the system, then Lu Yanning himself was not that knowledgeable and talented, so he was essentially no different from the Prime Minister, they were both just liars. Also, is the palace the place where the Taifu said he would kill people with a knife? You two should send a young eunuch to secretly convey the news. Why did the eunuch come to ask Lu Yanning for the tiger talisman in person? And that Imperial Preceptor, Lu Yanning can be considered the emperor's concubine, and the emperor's woman can be taken away from the palace as soon as she is told? There are still a lot of bugs that I really don't want to mention, it's really frustrating. The most annoying thing is the ending of the Prime Minister. He did so many things to Lu Yanning, but in the end he knelt down and kowtowed three times, and then directly beheaded him, and he was gone. Is he gone now??? Don't you want to cut off Ling Chi's car and cut him off? And the Prime Minister has been sent to prison, so many people are watching him, and he can just run away? I don't know exactly how he escaped, or whether the author didn't explain it, or whether I missed something because I became angrier the more I read the article. But no matter who saved the prime minister, if you have the ability, don't save the prime minister. If you have the ability, assassinate the emperor. I guarantee you will kill every one. I understand that there is definitely a need for a cannon fodder in the novel, and the Prime Minister is also the best cannon fodder. He can be used from beginning to end, but he was really tired of me. I was finally caught because of the Tiger Talisman, but the Emperor refused to kill him, so he left Lu Yanning in anger. Then when he was chasing his wife, he let the Prime Minister run away, and it took him a long time to catch him. In the end, the Emperor was almost assassinated by the Prime Minister, me. . . I'm really too tired. In fact, we can actually use a cannon fodder to write it in the middle. There is no need to write it alone. And in the end, the emperor said that he was shot by an arrow and was so easily assassinated. What did the secret guards around the emperor do for food? Your emperor did step forward suddenly to block Lu Yanning's arrow, but shouldn't your secret guard have reacted earlier than the emperor? I really don't understand what this article is about. Looking at the tone at the beginning, I thought the author was going to torture the emperor in the end, and let the emperor go to the crematorium to chase him. However, from beginning to end, it was just torture all the time. I really can't understand this article. In the end, Lu Yanning chose to go back to ancient times. What about his modern equity? If he is treated as a missing person, will his equity eventually return to his cheap brother (I don't know much about this, I am just making an assumption). As long as his brother bullies him so much, he will at most say a few harsh words to his stepmother and cheap father, and then it will be gone. Is it gone? God, I feel so frustrated. Anyway, I really regret buying this article. It's also my fault that I was too impulsive and bought the entire book. I personally don't have the habit of giving negative marks, so. Posting so much can be regarded as a way to vent. After all, I am really angry that I can read this. I also hope that the author can hone his writing skills and that his writing skills will be better.
It turns out that there is a word limit for ratings, so I didn't delete the number of words in my review. Finished watching it in three hours! This is a very exciting article for me to read! First of all, I really like the plot. There is another thing about this article that surprised me, which I have never experienced before. It is that the article is not long, but as I read it, especially after reading Chapter 24, I found that the plot has developed a lot. It's not that the progress is fast, but it's short but the content is very full and full. After reading it, I feel that I have read at least more than 100 chapters hahaha. It can be understood that the plot is not laggy and full. This is the first time I feel like this, but the plot of the Emperor of Yi Kingdom is a little sloppy later on. The rest is really good, but this should be regarded as a serious drama. By the way, the chapter in v is just very attractive. Read on.
Later, when I agreed to be a queen, I felt that my jump was a bit fast...
Wow, it's been a while since I ordered a whole book, but this one is good for practice! It's just that the relationship changed too quickly, and suddenly I felt pitiful. I didn't plan to go back to modern times, and then we got together. Rocket speed [covering face and laughing] Overall, it's okay. I should be able to refine it [like]
Throw flowers! Read the next one~
Sweet article!!! It feels like the progress starts too fast from the middle and it's already finished while I'm still immersed in the text!!!?
This,,, is this over? Let's start a chapter by getting married...
It turns out that there is a word limit for ratings, so I didn't delete the number of words in my review. Finished watching it in three hours! This is a very exciting article for me to read! First of all, I really like the plot. There is another thing about this article that surprised me, which I have never experienced before. It is that the article is not long, but as I read it, especially after reading Chapter 24, I found that the plot has developed a lot. It's not that the progress is fast, but it's short but the content is very full and full. After reading it, I feel that I have read at least more than 100 chapters hahaha. It can be understood that the plot is not laggy and full. This is the first time I feel like this, but the plot of the Emperor of Yi Kingdom is a little sloppy later on. The rest is really good, but this should be regarded as a serious drama. By the way, the chapter in v is just very attractive. Read on.
It turns out that there is a word limit for ratings, so I didn't delete the number of words in my review. Finished watching it in three hours! This is a very exciting article for me to read! First of all, I really like the plot. There is another thing about this article that surprised me, which I have never experienced before. It is that the article is not long, but as I read it, especially after reading Chapter 24, I found that the plot has developed a lot. It's not that the progress is fast, but it's short but the content is very full and full. After reading it, I feel that I have read at least more than 100 chapters hahaha. It can be understood that the plot is not laggy and full. This is the first time I feel like this, but the plot of the Emperor of Yi Kingdom is a little sloppy later on. The rest is really good, but this should be regarded as a serious drama. By the way, the chapter in v is just very attractive. Read on.
Ahhhh, I haven't seen enough. I also want to watch the extras. It's so damn good.