Everyone's a God [Esports]

The emotional scenes are okay, but they are not so good if they are all emotional scenes. It feels like they are dating under the guise of an e-sports person. Moreover, the protagonist is very good at playing games, but there is not much e-sports plot. It feels like the character is not three-dimensional. I don't feel that he is very good at e-sports, which is very annoying. It feels pretty average. Hope the next one will be better.

It's very good, but it is indeed a bit fragmented and a bit rushed. It seems to have been a little bit from the handling of the little green tea.

Later on, the writing was a little sluggish, and the whole text of the e-sports article had too many emotional lines (I don't mean to say bad, my wife's emotional writing is really amazing), and I didn't write a copy that described the madness of each madman in a slightly detailed way.

It's pretty, but it doesn't feel very complete.

I kind of want to ask for a follow-up of Yan Ming and Du Zi, but I'm just a little bit greedy. It's the words that Du Zi and Yan Ming said to Yan Ming at Yan Ming's house. It feels like the sky is bright. Maybe this word is very inaccurate. It's the past of Yan Ming and Mu Zi, and the feeling of Mu Zi's character suddenly standing up. The handling here is very heart-warming, really amazing⊙▽⊙

Whole The overall conception and development of events in the novel are quite interesting and gave me unexpected surprises. It's a pity that when the author was writing in the later period, his mentality may have really exploded, which caused the last few chapters to be a bit sloppy. If the author considers revising the article in the future, it will be even better (?▽`)?

I really want to read the extra chapter of Twilight! ! !

I can feel that the author's writing style is very good. I really like this kind of extremely detailed psychological description. It may be because of my wife's three-dimensional incident that many parts of the article are not connected (I originally talked about this matter, but I skipped it in the next chapter). Also, since it is advertised as an e-sports article, even if it is a love article that criticizes e-sports, the description of the game should be more detailed, not just one scene 2: I only talked about the first game of Game 1, and left out the rest. It gave me the feeling that I was just on top, and a basin of cold water poured down on me to force me to calm down. The plot is really too exciting, but I still like it very much. The character setting, plot, background, and the two people's two-way pursuit all poked at me. I hope my wife will get better and better and write more good-looking articles! I also wish you good luck in the third dimension! Chew Mi!

Emmm I just started to read the author's articles in the past few days. The first one was "I Became a God After Taking Off My Vest". Because the previous article gave me a very novel feeling, so I wanted to read some of the author's other works. I saw the comment section and the composition saying that I thought this article was rushed or something. Emm I am not very good at evaluating this. I want to talk about the novelty I just mentioned, which is a kind of childish feeling. This word is probably coined by me. I need to explain it. That is, I read emotions from the text, because creation itself is a subjective thing, so because the emotions and perceptions of life are very naive, so the frame and plot are not that important in my opinion. I read the text for spiritual satisfaction. The author's text gave me the opportunity to touch the emotions of a stranger. For example, I was lucky enough to touch the overflowing spring breeze through the ivy on the outer wall. It was a magical feeling. Thank you to the author.

555 Looks great. I hope my wife is safe and well.