After I Transmigrated into a Book, I Petted the Villainous Boss Bald

Great, the article is very fluent and interesting. Although the plot is fast but not abrupt, the legendary "short and concise?" Hhh But, it's true that I can't understand some of the descriptions in some places (near the dreamland, but it's very possible that I didn't read carefully hahh The relationship between the male and female protagonists also happened smoothly. It should be sweet and sour, and it was so enviable! It's so cool to read it in one sitting. I really like the contrast between the long-haired dumpling and the cold temperament. Rua furry pets and stuff are awesome. In short, it's all about spreading flowers!?

Hahaha Emperor and Queen of Heaven os: If you can't beat her, then join her. By the way, it's so cool to draw a bow or something! Still blue fluorescent! Full of feeling of ice! So pretty!

Xiao——san——, yo——yo——, don't——want——ah

Foolish melon, so beautiful and sweet!!!!

I finished reading it intermittently in two days. The overall setting and character setting of the novel are very attractive, but the main logic of the story is a bit confusing and unclear. It is like a pot of well-cooked noodles that can be eaten but become mushy. Furthermore, the author's description of the emotional changes of the characters, especially the protagonist, is not delicate enough and is somewhat inexplicable. Also, the supporting character Shu Yi has a deep affection for the original Lan Qi. Why did he suddenly change his gender and fall in love with Yue Chulan? I like this article very much. I hope the author can revise this article after he improves his writing.

Shangxian, your way of falling in love is too tactful.

Cute Zai Zai seduces online

How come the tone of people from heaven is more demonic than demonic~

. This, the story is quite good, but sometimes the author's narrative is hard to understand.

After reading it, Zaizai is the best