At Your Fingertips

Ah, I thought I understood it, but I still didn't understand it at the end. I felt very frustrated. I spent a lot of time in the beginning to prepare the villain and his career, and for a long time in the middle, the protagonist seemed to be working hard to build a career, but the career line has been stagnant without much change. I always thought that the author was laying out a plot to defeat the villain in one fell swoop. The result directly told me that it was a game, the career line was basically scrapped, and the ending of the villain was also brushed aside. There is also King Baihai. So much effort was spent on writing a character who has nothing to do with the protagonist, but in the end it did not play a big role in advancing the main plot. Maybe the author wanted to create some smoke bombs so that they would have the most impact when the ending is revealed, but the previous atmosphere was all set off here. The smoke bombs were too complicated and interfered with the main line. The huge world view and suspense created later could not integrate the main content of the previous ones. At the same time, there were too few words and it seemed very suspended, making people confused. The first 80% put aside the career line and focused on the emotional line. As a result, the emotional line went back and forth with no progress. I don't understand what He Lianzhi and Zhao Qiyan are struggling with. What is it about them that tames each other and makes the canary the one in control? Can Zhao Qiyan fall in love with He Lianzhi after going through everything? It seems that everything is the author's fog bomb. When you peel it off layer by layer, you will find that none of it is the answer, and then use the last 10% to start anew to summarize the emotional line. It's like that tattoo, mentioned so many times and foreshadowed so much, the result doesn't matter. It made me very tired and empty. I subscribed to read the entire book in one go without skipping any plot points. Maybe I am not a reader with high IQ and details, and I may be half the reason for not understanding the plot. However, as an ordinary online reader, after reading the whole book, I felt that the front and back were fragmented and anticlimactic. The author should also have half of the reasons.

If you feel that this platform limits your creative space, you can change the platform and don't come back. Your writing is really good, your intention is also very good, and the problems it reflects are also very realistic. I really regret why I didn't get to know Dada earlier!

Only after seeing this can I really believe that this is a he and not a be

I was deceived by the copywriter again. As a reader, I can't even trust the copywriter. I really don't feel respected.

After reading it slowly, I felt a little mixed. From my personal point of view, I actually don't like the ending. Is it HE? Yes, it is HE in the end, but there are still some issues that have no ending, or in other words, there is no clear explanation. What happened in reality during the two years that Zhao Fanghao left, may not be important, but how did he cheer up? This matter is very important, is it a game? After sorting it out, I think the script of the game is not important. The game is being tested internally in the closed beta game. It is not very clear what the content of the second closed beta is. Fortunately, the script hopes that she will be a healthy and successful person, and she did it. So what about outside the script? In fact, the key question is, why is it now? Minato, who has clearly lost hope, will give herself such a script. The article explains that it is a sweet dream that people want before dying. A dream that comes true will not give the dying person the motivation to live. Even if he wants to live, his body may not allow it, so how can he take good care of his body? This is not explained, which is very strange. Another point that makes me feel unsatisfied is that after coming out of the game, Zhao learned a lesson. What lesson was it? This really hurts me. Zhao really lacks a lesson. I also wanted to see her be taught a lesson, but she didn't. In fact, it is very obvious from the full text that Zhao is a person who does not understand what love is at all. At least at the beginning, she was arrogant and conceited. She tortured her to this point and wore away her most basic dignity as a human being. Does such a person deserve to be forgiven? The starting point is good, but it does not mean that the result will be good, not to mention that the process and the result are actually not good. So how did Zhao get it back later? I didn't say it. I think there is no need for the extra chapter. I even think that the extra chapter is forcing HE, and there is no need for HE at all. I don't know if it is a coincidence. I had something to do after I read the main text and the first extra chapter, so I stopped reading the rest for a long time. During this period of time, I was thinking about the ending, and I felt that this was it, I died, it was a good ending, or in other words, I returned to the real world, re-established the hope of life, picked up the upward momentum, and became a top figure in the industry, but it had nothing to do with Zhao. But I still want to die happily. It's not that I don't want HE, it just seems more reasonable. This is the third night of reading this book. In the first two nights, when I learned how Zhao was treated in real life at the beginning, I felt that for this article, you'd better give me BE. If it doesn't work, just OE. It's still a bit reluctant to think of HE, even in the first For two nights, I felt in my dreams that this was the love story between a hostage and a kidnapper in Stockholm. It was interesting and I liked watching it, but I hated it morally and I didn't like to meet it in reality. Even if it happened, I still wanted the two of them to lock up, one willing to fight and the other willing to suffer, one a villain and the other a fool. But one thing is that the author's writing style is really good. It got me all involved. The writing is very good. Don't write it next time. It's going around and around. It's not interesting and a bit wasteful. But the most amazing thing is that I think this is a bloody article. Even the plot is not perfect and has loopholes. I still think it is good-looking and has no other meaning. Maybe it's because I didn't use my mind when reading it? The only time I really think about it is when I finally start the main story line. Also, let me complain, I really wrote a lot of unnecessary things. The pen and ink written in the early stage will not be used later. The things written in the later stage have no obvious or even obvious foreshadowing in the early stage. Is it a stream of consciousness? Or forgot to write it down? I feel that the state of this book may not be as good as when it avoids ambiguity. For example, what is the meaning of the villains in the early stage and what they did for self-improvement? In fact, after thinking about it, I found that there are some, but not many. So in summary, the ending is really inappropriate. It is best to change it. It is best to remove the character of Xie Yan and completely change the story. Adult story, if not, at least explain the changes made to the memory when entering the closed beta, at least mention it in a vague way, so all the easy things in the early stage are just for dreaming. In the end, I found that I couldn't connect this sweet dream with Zhao Hehao. Where is the bridge of reconciliation? It can be said that the plot structure is broken. It's really hard to comment. If you don't use your brain to think about the ending, the story is really good. But if you use your brain, you can't turn around and many problems remain unresolved. If you want to use your brain, why don't I read mystery novels and suspense novels? I thought it was a love story. What I wanted to read was a sweet love story. I was tricked by the introduction. I thought it was a cookie, but it turned out to be a science fiction show. Finally, I really want to give this book a high score. After all, it is quite comfortable to read, but the ending of "Comfortable Returns to Comfort" is really not good. This is a book written in 21 years, right? At that time, this idea should be pretty good? Anyway, this plot shouldn't be very good now? I remember there was a Japanese 3D animated movie a few years ago with a similar plot, just like this matryoshka doll. Anyway, I don't know if the author will see it. If not, forget it. This is one of the few merciless complaints I made. The evaluation is that Mr. Zhao is not as good as Director You, or that You An is the boss.

I was really shocked when I read the last dozen chapters. I thought it was just an ordinary rebirth novel, so I didn't bother reading it. Unexpectedly, they were not dead at all. The so-called rebirth was just a game, a dream that Zhao Qiyan gave to He Lianzhi. She really made me cry to death.

The pattern is very imaginative, but I would rather watch the regular Twins

It's very well written, but it's so emotionally draining that I don't even want to write the thesis. The structure is super complete, but I'm a native dog, so I just want to see Zhao Gou chasing his wife in the crematorium, kneeling on the washboard, bloody confessions in the heavy rain, crying bitterly, let me do it all again.

I feel it is a pity that Zhao Qiyan is really an awkward person and there is no formal confession in the extra episode. Even though He has understood Mr. Zhao's intention, I still want to see a formal "I love you". There is a high possibility that there will be another extra episode. I have watched it three times and I still cry every time I watch it.

Wow, I just saw the teacher's article a while ago (the student party didn't have any pocket money, so I searched it on the browser. I slid down (╥_╥) and waited for me to save up money to buy all the genuine books I've read!) At that time, I was overjoyed after reading "Avoiding Ambiguity" and thought it was really well written! I'm stupid and can't praise people, but I just think it's really good! So I ran around searching for your other works, and then I saw the news that you had withdrawn from the circle. I felt really sad and disappointed at the time. I finally saw that an author I liked very much had quit. When I read your other articles later, I always had a tragic feeling of being deprived of my life () Only today did I remember to come here and buy your original copy, and then I saw the new update!! Welcome back!!! I am looking forward to the new article but life is the most important thing. I wish you good health and many good things! Remember to take a break while coding, drink plenty of water and exercise! Happy May Day holiday in advance hahahahaha (of course it would be great to update more while taking care of your life?