One Mistake After Another

The first half is well written, but the second half is a bit confusing. The business war part is full of loopholes and cannot be justified at all! Fortunately, there is a side story. Please comfort my hurt heart.

I like this one the best among Lan Da's novels. Woohoo, I really like Hu Qianyu and Lin Weiling.

Once a woman is in love, there is nothing left The heroine could have become a queen, but ended up being extremely humble. It's really ironic.

It's been so long, but I can still see an article. It's good. I always support you.

At first glance, this article is okay, just a story of business war + sadomasochism, but if you look closely, you will find that many things are not explained clearly! For example, the disputes between Lucy Yao and these men, such as the disputes between the heroine's previous generation, why Tony only now suspects that the heroine is her daughter, and why he suspects it. I forgot whether Tony is Asian. If not, then it stands to reason that the heroine should be mixed race, and everyone should be able to see it clearly. And what happened to the heroine and Wang Kewei? Since the hero is so strong, how could he let the heroine have a relationship with Wang, and then Wang become his assistant? In addition, the past disputes between the heroine and the hero are rarely mentioned, and the heroine stays with the hero as a lover for revenge. The hero and Tony are such smart people, how could they underestimate Li Muchen and not realize that he is actually working for the Yao family, etc., Etc., There are many things that if you carefully examine them, you will find that there are many problems! It feels like the author wanted to complicate the relationships between the characters in the article, but failed to explain them clearly one by one. PS: The author should be more careful when revising the article. Since the story has moved from Shanghai to Singapore, there should be no more low-level errors in the article, such as how it is possible to wear thick clothes and turn on the heater in Singapore's winter; the heroine's parents' cemetery is sometimes in Wuxi, and sometimes in a cemetery in Singapore; the heroine compares the weather in Hong Kong with Shanghai; the heroine said she went to Lujiazui when she went to the hero's company, etc... (Of course, it is possible that I am reading the result of the author's first revision!)

Very very beautiful. I like it!!

Will these two people really be happy together?

The second half is so tiring! You have to read it word by word, otherwise you won't understand what is being said. I still like to see you write simpler stories, it's not so tiring.

This article should not be called "Bu Bu Cuo" but should be called "The Plan Within the Plan". I think the female protagonist is the most pitiable in it. She was used by men one after another in the name of loving her, but she still fell into it in the end! The ending was a little rushed. The heroine was disappointed with the hero again and again. In the end, they got together again without explaining anything. Also, Wang Shuwei's feelings for the heroine and his character's relationship in this story were not described in detail! And Li Muchen is also the tragedy of this story. It's quite pitiful. In fact, he also likes the heroine. Although he didn't admit it in the end, I can feel that he likes her! Unlike Wang Shuwei, is he really determined not to like the heroine, or does he still have feelings for her? It's not described clearly. I think that whether it's the male protagonist's domineering liking, Yao Qianmo's perverted liking, or Li Muchen's faint liking, it's all explained clearly in the story, but Wang Shuwei can't figure it out? His ending was also brushed aside.

I recommend "Into the Glitz", an absolute classic