Dalu's Investigation Notes

Without Jianguo in the end, this extra chapter would have scored 80 points. First of all, it is not purely about solving crimes. Goldfinger and making money are too important. It is a bit worse than a small work... The last Jianguo was still in the steam era. It was too ridiculous. The heroine's aura was purely willful... The author said that he hoped that the heroine would be truly free. , Maybe I have a different understanding of true freedom. There is no absolute freedom, only relative freedom. The heroine has done so many things in feudal society that ancient women did not dare to do, and she is already free. She has single-handedly changed the status of women in this era. It is enough to write to this extent. In fact, it's just right. We have to establish an independent steam country. To make this just right is superfluous... And the free heroine is too ideal. Instead of writing about establishing a country, it is better to travel back to modern times. A policeman can build a steam country by traveling to ancient times. Era, the scientists of the Industrial Revolution in Europe couldn't hold the coffin board... But you are the author, you have the final say... I read two small novels before reading this one. Maybe the small novels gave me too high an impression. The last part of this one is really disappointing. My personal thoughts after reading it...

Damn it if the emperor is happy... I will only think that you are not loyal enough to the emperor. The heroine herself still has a title here, and she occupies several islands. How many talents and productivity can there be no matter how advanced the high-end technology is? In modern society, there are even villages and towns in Western countries that have declared their independence and established their own countries. What I have done is right, but the country above is too lazy to pay attention to it.

The heroine Jianguo, who yearns for freedom, establishes an imperial feudal country?

The ending of the Jianguo episode is a bit hard to comment on... Emm the Crown Princess... Using semi-modern equipment to build a country with a semi-feudal system? ! At first glance, this is slightly inconsistent with the heroine's anti-feudal struggle in the main story, which is a bit of a continuation of the story! But if you think about it carefully, it is hard to say what kind of superstructure a modern person would choose if he really had the opportunity to found a country after being immersed in feudal society for more than ten years and enjoying privileges! A test of humanity… Anyway, overall it's a good article! !

I also think the founding of the country in the end is a bit ridiculous... How many things are involved in this? ! Technological progress can only be accomplished by giving girls a few textbooks? Hehe…

The extra is too ridiculous, even if there is a golden finger.

This episode looks like it was written by someone else.

Ah? Just, why was the country founded? Jianguo is somewhat outrageous... I felt that the heroine was too imprudent in bringing out all kinds of modern things. In fact, it is not a matter of being cautious or not, but the gap in technological capabilities is too big, so it is not appropriate to use it casually. In the extra story, Dalu is still a farming society and a feudal society, and the new country is directly in the steam era?

In this extra chapter... Island country, does the heroine want to do something?? I'm speechless outside the episode

I still feel that this extra episode is a bit abrupt, maybe because it's an extra episode, there's no foreshadowing, it's hard to explain, it just feels weird and a bit awkward. Others still like it very much, Logic Online.