This story was originally titled The Tomb, but has now been renamed.
In plain terms: This is a story about a tomb awakening memories of a past life, and a tangled tale of love and hate involving the mysterious kingdom of Loulan.
“One has love, the other has honor. Which will you choose?”, Yan Zheng
“I, the Red Kite who soars between heaven and earth, would never be content...”, Chi Yuan
“If you let yourself be trapped by love alone, you will be unworthy of serving as a subject. Where to go from here, Jun'er surely knows in his heart.”, Ming Jun
“You stand high above it all, and those chains will bind him for the rest of his life. Can you really bear that?”, Xuan Shuang
(This story contains fictional elements, and much of it is made up. Please don't take it too seriously!)
There are quite a few uncommon characters in this story, so I'll list their pronunciations here. I hope you won't give up reading because of them~~
Ming Jun (JUN), Yan (YAN), Ming Wei (WEI), Zhuang Qing (QING), Wu (WU) Beihuang, Mi (MI) Yanhua
Tomb robbers are rare. Come on.
The tombs and Loulan in the copy, the uncommon names... Well, this is not the kind of article I want to include.
LZ of BBS That being said, the copywriting feels overly complicated to me, although mine feels the same. Your description feels too heavy, as if there are many words, but you want to summarize it into one word to express it. Not refreshing, not relaxed. Maybe you can try changing it? Then, the writing technique is a bit green. The character structure is not very clear, and there is no interesting point in the article, which is a bit boring. Without ups and downs, it's hard to attract me. You can bury the pen, which might attract more readers. Well, it's pretty good. Anyway, keep working hard.
Chi Yuan's character is quite good, haha, although she is a bit sinister. . .
She obviously saw him frowning and asked because she smelled the concubine flower, but why didn't he ask. <---Catching insects: taste
The storm is finally coming, look forward to it. . .
Wa is a certain insect from Bishui~ Then I read the first chapter. I will continue reading. I still like the writing and I feel it~ Then catch a little bug: keep [mo] silent - it should be [silent]~
. . . Finished reading. . Come on update. . . Seemingly. . How do I feel about how this is going? . . It went so well. . . Hey~~hey~· Not tangled enough, tangled~~ Okay. . Someone is more abusive. .
Oh ho ho ho. . Fast speed is a must... I was just kicked out by my mother. . Now come back and continue reading. . Overwhelming the country and the city? Dance? Wow. .
Hey, q actually I think so. . If I can't think of a title, I won't write it. . . (Okay... Someone is too lazy... Passed by...) Ancient literature is very difficult to say. . . Hmm~hmm~. . Keep watching. . .