Lai means “come,” Mi means “go”: Xiaomi.
Two swapped ID bracelets, two children whose fates were turned upside down
Lai and Xiaomi were born on the same day in the same hospital and given similar ID bracelets~~ A scatterbrained nurse sneezed and mixed up the bracelets~~ It wasn't just the bracelets that got switched. Two completely different destinies were set in motion~~~ As for how their lives turned out after they were switched back, let's just say the gap between dreams and reality is enormous...
Lai and Xiaomi can't help thinking back to that nurse from twenty-one years ago. Auntie, you're practically my own aunt! One little slip of your hand, and our lives were turned upside down!
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The review of Ah Hu Hu's "Up and Down" starts with an opinion - whether the word "er" should be avoided too much. The author may be used to speaking in dialect, but in the eyes of readers, the word "er" is added to all the words that should or should not be added, which hinders smooth reading. After all, readers come from all over the world and have their own dialects and habits. The northerners are so "eer" in everything, which makes the southerners tired when they look at it, and they feel as if their tongues are about to get tied up. The reviewer counted the words with "er" added in the first chapter: newborn, baby, boy, girl, xiao'er, beside, number card, later, eyeball, little guys, little face, little ghost, little swallow, eyebrows, and the same. There are as many as 15 in one short chapter, not counting the repetitions. Except for the necessary newborn and baby, the others are all changed to "er". Isn't "er" too much?
Afterwards, it becomes even more omnipresent. This overwhelming word "er" completely covers up the plot and characters of the story, making the reviewer only regain some understanding of the story itself after reading the third chapter. Because I was reading the story while chatting with literary friends, the thunder and lightning of the word "son" actually made time pass in laughter, and reached its climax in the third chapter - this chapter has a climax that is enough to ignore the word "son". Xiaomi witnessed the company's affairs, and the self-esteem that was abandoned for a few dollars hit the reviewer's heart hard, and I had to stop joking and start reading the article seriously.
The concept of the story is actually not new. The child-swapping incident that often goes wrong in the hospital delivery room was accidentally discovered more than 20 years later. The two people who were exchanged were bound to have intersections, and their emotions were sublimated in these intersections. In the end, everyone was happy and each found his own love. This very simple little story becomes a little different because the protagonists are positioned between men and men. The author obviously recognizes this emotion that very few people have, and uses the plot of Xiaomi and Wei to convince his family to convince the readers. Therefore, this story is different from any Danmei article that the reviewer has read before. It does not exaggerate male-male love, and there is no vulgar H-plot. Instead, it expresses the diversity of human emotions through this warm and tender story, which easily convinced the reviewer that the emotions possessed by very few people can still be beautiful.
The structure of the story is compact, and all the plots exist out of necessity. There is no delay. It is so concise that I don't even bother to think about the names of the people. I directly write Xiaomi's biological father and adoptive father as a man. It can be seen from this that the author really has a clear distinction between love and hate. He doesn't even give names to those he doesn't like, laugh...
The characters are clearly portrayed, especially the hearts of Xiaomi, Wei Lai, Lin Qi, and Qiu Tianhao. Through concise words, the reviewer can feel their struggle, hesitation, and entanglement, and experience the sublimation of emotions in this complex inner activity. In the end, the gender of the protagonists is almost ignored, and they can watch a love scene.
The biggest feature of the full text is that it is filled with warmth. Whether it is Xiaomi and her adoptive mother Zhang Shuxian, Wei Lai and her adoptive mother Wei Xinhui, Xiaomi's biological father and his son, Qiu Tianhao and his son, all the complicated relationships among the characters reveal family affection and friendship. Affection and love intersperse with each other and influence each other. Regardless of right or wrong, everyone's heart is full of overflowing emotions. These real emotions are integrated between the lines, making the reviewer forget the inconvenience caused by the word "son" and read it in one breath.
In fact, from the middle onwards, the word "er" has changed very little. Perhaps Ah Huhu was also obsessed with the story and forgot his own dialect. However, it is indeed a flaw that there are too many "sons" in the beginning. I hope Ahuhu will pay attention to it in future writing. Because this article has been completed, the reviewer will no longer comment on the writing, but will focus on the feelings after reading the review. I hope it can give Ah Huhu some help to write better stories in the future. I look forward to your next masterpiece, come on!
Good article from the Oral Review Team
Ah, it ended successfully. Looking back, I have been following this article from the first chapter to the end, and I feel a little reluctant to just play it like this.
Look at the cute Xiaomi, the tugging bits, and my favorite mother Zhang and the other mothers. Everyone has found their own happiness. The other half of life really confirms the old saying: good will be rewarded with good, evil will be rewarded with evil. The beauty of life will always come to a perfect end when you long for it.
From the initial misunderstanding, to entanglement, to mutual understanding, to understanding, to love, to small quarrels, to coping with difficulties, to knowing each other, Xiaomi and Wei Lai have gone through an ordinary journey that every lover will take. But they are extraordinary, because the nurse's mistake was wrong hugging, but they also got two lovely and amiable mothers as a blessing in disguise, because they are both boys, and they have to face the pressure of public opinion that ordinary couples do not have to face.
Fortunately, mothers are open-minded, friends are enthusiastic, and even the company's bosses are reasonable, so everything can be so warm and comfortable.
Some people may say that this article is too indifferent and not so stormy. But I just like to read Hu Hu's articles describing ordinary life with your delicate pen. Most people are ordinary, and most of our lives are ordinary. How many people can experience storms. Therefore, such plain truth, such ordinary sweetness is truly touching, and can truly make people feel caring and real.
Now let's talk about Lin Qi. I personally like Xiao Linzi very much. Seeing that this guy was so ignorant and felt sorry for Lin Qi, I really had the urge to kick him a few times. Well, for the sake of Xiaomi's good life, Lin Qi's love can only be sacrificed. In fact, Lin Qi is a person who truly understands love. He knows the basis of love, which is trust, all the time, sincere trust. So when Wei Lai saw the rumored photos and reflected in Lin Qi's eyes, he knew clearly that Wei Lai could not give him the trust he wanted. Even if the love between them could withstand this storm, it would not last long, so he chose to separate and cut off the restless and unstable love. However, Lin Qi's sadness also lies in his rational love. If he did not view love so rationally, then maybe he would not be separated from Wei.
The ending is obvious, a rational choice and a decisive separation. Fortunately, Xiao Qiuzi is also a good person and can provide Lin Qi with a safe haven. Fortunately, these four children are all kind-hearted, do not hold grudges, and have a cheerful personality, so they can get along with each other so happily and live together under the same roof with smiles.
Haha, let me finally talk about our two lovely mothers. They worked hard to raise their sons, but found out that they belonged to someone else. If they were ordinary women, they would have cried and complained. But the two mothers are strong, facing everything with strength, and shouldering everything with strength. This shows the greatness of maternal love.
The second spring of two mothers is the most happy thing for us. Seeing everyone put on happy smiles really brings a warm and comfortable flow to the bottom of our hearts.
Okay, that's all. Let me sum it up: I really like Hu Hu's writing, your writing style, your style of writing, your delicate description of the character's heart, and your thoughts.
So I really look forward to your new article, come on Hu Hu, I will always support you~
BY: I love your Xiaoyin
I'm back to rate (liao)~~~~~~Hey, everyone is happy, let's spread the branches and add more people
Oh hehehe~~~~~Float away
Looking forward to the new work~~Come on~~
Although the ending is like a fairy tale, it is very warm. There are many hardships in life, so why bother to be stimulated in the text? Haha, just torture in the middle~~
Sprinkle flowers. Cute Xiaomi and Lailai, a lovely family.
It's finished~~I loved it from the beginning to the end~
I burst into tears, feeling like I was marrying my daughter, how could it be over so soon...
Although the ending is like a fairy tale, I like it, I like it very much. There are already too many unsatisfactory and sad things in the real world, so it's not too much to just take a look at the beautiful life in novels, right? So I have always liked novels like this, which are warm, heartwarming, and touching. I will definitely support you again when I open a new novel! !
The review of Ah Hu Hu's "Up and Down" starts with an opinion - whether the word "er" should be avoided too much. The author may be used to speaking in dialect, but in the eyes of readers, the word "er" is added to all the words that should or should not be added, which hinders smooth reading. After all, readers come from all over the world and have their own dialects and habits. The northerners are so "eer" in everything, which makes the southerners tired when they look at it, and they feel as if their tongues are about to get tied up. The reviewer counted the words with "er" added in the first chapter: newborn, baby, boy, girl, xiao'er, beside, number card, later, eyeball, little guys, little face, little ghost, little swallow, eyebrows, and the same. There are as many as 15 in one short chapter, not counting the repetitions. Except for the necessary newborn and baby, the others are all changed to "er". Isn't "er" too much? Afterwards, it becomes even more omnipresent. This overwhelming word "er" completely covers up the plot and characters of the story, making the reviewer only regain some understanding of the story itself after reading the third chapter. Because I was reading the story while chatting with literary friends, the thunder and lightning of the word "son" actually made time pass in laughter, and reached its climax in the third chapter - this chapter has a climax that is enough to ignore the word "son". Xiaomi witnessed the company's affairs, and the self-esteem that was abandoned for a few dollars hit the reviewer's heart hard, and I had to stop joking and start reading the article seriously. The concept of the story is actually not new. The child-swapping incident that often goes wrong in the hospital delivery room was accidentally discovered more than 20 years later. The two people who were exchanged were bound to have intersections, and their emotions were sublimated in these intersections. In the end, everyone was happy and each found his own love. This very simple little story becomes a little different because the protagonists are positioned between men and men. The author obviously recognizes this emotion that very few people have, and uses the plot of Xiaomi and Wei to convince his family to convince the readers. Therefore, this story is different from any Danmei article that the reviewer has read before. It does not exaggerate male-male love, and there is no vulgar H-plot. Instead, it expresses the diversity of human emotions through this warm and tender story, which easily convinced the reviewer that the emotions possessed by very few people can still be beautiful. The structure of the story is compact, and all the plots exist out of necessity. There is no delay. It is so concise that I don't even bother to think about the names of the people. I directly write Xiaomi's biological father and adoptive father as a man. It can be seen from this that the author really has a clear distinction between love and hate. He doesn't even give names to those he doesn't like, laugh... The characters are clearly portrayed, especially the hearts of Xiaomi, Wei Lai, Lin Qi, and Qiu Tianhao. Through concise words, the reviewer can feel their struggle, hesitation, and entanglement, and experience the sublimation of emotions in this complex inner activity. In the end, the gender of the protagonists is almost ignored, and they can watch a love scene. The biggest feature of the full text is that it is filled with warmth. Whether it is Xiaomi and her adoptive mother Zhang Shuxian, Wei Lai and her adoptive mother Wei Xinhui, Xiaomi's biological father and his son, Qiu Tianhao and his son, all the complicated relationships among the characters reveal family affection and friendship. Affection and love intersperse with each other and influence each other. Regardless of right or wrong, everyone's heart is full of overflowing emotions. These real emotions are integrated between the lines, making the reviewer forget the inconvenience caused by the word "son" and read it in one breath. In fact, from the middle onwards, the word "er" has changed very little. Perhaps Ah Huhu was also obsessed with the story and forgot his own dialect. However, it is indeed a flaw that there are too many "sons" in the beginning. I hope Ahuhu will pay attention to it in future writing. Because this article has been completed, the reviewer will no longer comment on the writing, but will focus on the feelings after reading the review. I hope it can give Ah Huhu some help to write better stories in the future. I look forward to your next masterpiece, come on! Good article from the Oral Review Team
Ah, it ended successfully. Looking back, I have been following this article from the first chapter to the end, and I feel a little reluctant to just play it like this. Look at the cute Xiaomi, the tugging bits, and my favorite mother Zhang and the other mothers. Everyone has found their own happiness. The other half of life really confirms the old saying: good will be rewarded with good, evil will be rewarded with evil. The beauty of life will always come to a perfect end when you long for it. From the initial misunderstanding, to entanglement, to mutual understanding, to understanding, to love, to small quarrels, to coping with difficulties, to knowing each other, Xiaomi and Wei Lai have gone through an ordinary journey that every lover will take. But they are extraordinary, because the nurse's mistake was wrong hugging, but they also got two lovely and amiable mothers as a blessing in disguise, because they are both boys, and they have to face the pressure of public opinion that ordinary couples do not have to face. Fortunately, mothers are open-minded, friends are enthusiastic, and even the company's bosses are reasonable, so everything can be so warm and comfortable. Some people may say that this article is too indifferent and not so stormy. But I just like to read Hu Hu's articles describing ordinary life with your delicate pen. Most people are ordinary, and most of our lives are ordinary. How many people can experience storms. Therefore, such plain truth, such ordinary sweetness is truly touching, and can truly make people feel caring and real. Now let's talk about Lin Qi. I personally like Xiao Linzi very much. Seeing that this guy was so ignorant and felt sorry for Lin Qi, I really had the urge to kick him a few times. Well, for the sake of Xiaomi's good life, Lin Qi's love can only be sacrificed. In fact, Lin Qi is a person who truly understands love. He knows the basis of love, which is trust, all the time, sincere trust. So when Wei Lai saw the rumored photos and reflected in Lin Qi's eyes, he knew clearly that Wei Lai could not give him the trust he wanted. Even if the love between them could withstand this storm, it would not last long, so he chose to separate and cut off the restless and unstable love. However, Lin Qi's sadness also lies in his rational love. If he did not view love so rationally, then maybe he would not be separated from Wei. The ending is obvious, a rational choice and a decisive separation. Fortunately, Xiao Qiuzi is also a good person and can provide Lin Qi with a safe haven. Fortunately, these four children are all kind-hearted, do not hold grudges, and have a cheerful personality, so they can get along with each other so happily and live together under the same roof with smiles. Haha, let me finally talk about our two lovely mothers. They worked hard to raise their sons, but found out that they belonged to someone else. If they were ordinary women, they would have cried and complained. But the two mothers are strong, facing everything with strength, and shouldering everything with strength. This shows the greatness of maternal love. The second spring of two mothers is the most happy thing for us. Seeing everyone put on happy smiles really brings a warm and comfortable flow to the bottom of our hearts. Okay, that's all. Let me sum it up: I really like Hu Hu's writing, your writing style, your style of writing, your delicate description of the character's heart, and your thoughts. So I really look forward to your new article, come on Hu Hu, I will always support you~ BY: I love your Xiaoyin
I'm back to rate (liao)~~~~~~Hey, everyone is happy, let's spread the branches and add more people Oh hehehe~~~~~Float away
Hey hey, baby, I want to take a vacation
55555555555~~~~~~Finally achieved positive results!
It's finished, so fast, congratulations
Looking forward to the new work~~Come on~~ Although the ending is like a fairy tale, it is very warm. There are many hardships in life, so why bother to be stimulated in the text? Haha, just torture in the middle~~
Sprinkle flowers. Cute Xiaomi and Lailai, a lovely family.
It's finished~~I loved it from the beginning to the end~
I burst into tears, feeling like I was marrying my daughter, how could it be over so soon... Although the ending is like a fairy tale, I like it, I like it very much. There are already too many unsatisfactory and sad things in the real world, so it's not too much to just take a look at the beautiful life in novels, right? So I have always liked novels like this, which are warm, heartwarming, and touching. I will definitely support you again when I open a new novel! !