The Villainous Black Lotus Is Acting Strange

I watched Three O'Clock last night, and I got up and watched it again today. Now I can't stand it anymore. The setting of the article is not bad, but the details of the plot are really too inconsistent. The first point is that in just a few sentences, the place that should be described in detail is covered, and the reader needs to think about it in order to realize the impact that this plot should bring to the reader, which greatly reduced my reading experience. Take the paragraph about Gong's confession as an example. Some other online articles, even if they are suspected of being fake, will go to great lengths to describe the scene of the confession, the reactions of both parties, third-party comments, etc. However, in this article, the author only uses two incomplete sentences of "like" to end the description of this extremely important plot for romance novels. Secondly, there are no transitions in some places, making it difficult to connect the upper and lower plots. This is a fatal flaw for a web article with ten lines at a glance, because it is really torturous to read back. Third, the rhythm of plot development is not well controlled. Sometimes it is too fast and sometimes it is too slow, which is somewhat repetitive with the first one. Gong's psychological state has been laid out for so many chapters, but Shou only felt it briefly and took no effective measures. The two sides did not even have a direct conversation about this matter. Every time I want to see the emotional outbursts and conflicts between the two of them, the author always passes it by, which is simply abusing me. But then the plot developed too quickly. Shou suddenly disappears after confessing everything to Zhang Huanming, and then suddenly appears in the game, which is too abrupt for readers. But why did I abandon the article after seeing this? Because the shortcomings of the author in the early stage are not too obvious, plus the setting is interesting, the emotional line is bumpy and ambiguous, and there are many words that poked my small points, and the plot progress is not too nonsense. It is very different from the common big water stories on the market, so I watched Three AM with relish. Although I have to abandon the article now, I still hope that the author can write better and better. Come on?

Ah, it's gone now???

What the hell is that picture at the back? Aren't you just copying the previous chapters? Why did it end without me understanding what it meant?

Writing the finale gives me a headache, will it be better tomorrow? QAQ

Damn it, I'm running out of tricks, my family can't keep up, who can help me, woo woo woo woo

A little bit is not enough hahaha

The next few chapters must be sweet! Extras are also arranged, please be sweet to me, please? Woman, promise me!

Woohoo, how could this happen? It's not that you don't like to see people cry;

Yes, you are a bad person!

Crying and doing ruthless things at the same time