When the Swallows Return

Yan Yu's character traits are all outstanding and are well demonstrated through a series of events and details. Yan Zishu has grown from a rebellious boy who smokes and fights to gradually grow up academically and emotionally. Yu Jingxuan is a smart, calm and self-respecting girl who has a unique way of dealing with the difficulties of others and her own feelings. The transition process of the two people from childhood to adolescence is written in great detail. It does not happen overnight. There are many small things and details to reflect the gradual warming of their relationship. It really makes you feel very immersed in the process. However, I personally feel that the pace of the opening chapter may be a bit full. The description of high school life, some daily studies, and campus activities are a bit lengthy. It would be better if it was appropriately streamlined. Although the previous foreshadowing was sufficient, the moment of confession still felt a bit abrupt and I was not mentally prepared hahhh The description of the appearance and environment is a bit monotonous and too simple. I think it would be better if it were more vivid to enhance the atmosphere. All in all, it's still pretty good. I urge you to update more~~

You are brighter than the stars in the sky

Awesome, awesome. I saw the comments and came to see you during the holiday. It's very good, hehehe.