Friends, if you read this before July 9, 2023, you might want to read it again, since I've heavily revised many chapters. I felt the female lead's personality and emotional development weren't clear enough, so I reworked her character. The current version is a little silly and conceited, with a touch of the slyness of a little snake.
I've also reworked the romance between the leads.
Here's the thing: I started writing this story in early 2020, and I've realized that a lot of the chapters are stiff and the prose is messy. The romance between the leads isn't clear enough either. In other words, it's all very stiff, so I've decided to revise it.
I'm so speechless, ahhh! Why did I put Regulus and Sirius in the same year? What was I doing back then...?
I'll explain why the female lead's eyes are dark red in a later extra.
I've noticed that when I wrote the characters before, I focused too much on the good or evil in them at that age, without paying attention to the flaws in their youthful personalities, like Sirius Black and Severus Snape. But they should have a good side, too.
The romance between the female lead and the professor needs to develop slowly. It might happen later on, but there will still be plenty of interaction between them.
Theme: Slytherin isn't full of schemers.
A genius who mastered more spells than many seventh-graders before entering school only got two O's? Is this forced intelligence?
I'm curious about how to write about being with Sev... Isn't Rand going to be written to death? … Although I love sev, but...
Ah - it's beautiful. I have no words and can only use "good" to describe this book. "Ah, I want to scream, ah"
Come on! Very nice
Damn, have you updated it yet? It looks great.
Is this romance? Why is it divided into pure love???