The Demon Venerable Wants to Be Kicked Out of His Sect Every Day

After reading it, please leave a review. It wouldn't be a bad ending, but the ending is a bit rushed. I didn't believe it when I read the comments on the previous chapter that the next chapter would be finished. I just thought about it. . It feels like there are still a lot of questions that have not been answered (.) Who would have thought that it would really be over () Just, very suddenly. . I didn't look at it too carefully, I quickly skipped the . Jpg, and I lost a lot of details. Mainly because I don't like to read things in my previous life. I originally posted this article because I thought it was a crematorium for wives chasing after wives (?), And I thought Shan Yu was a sickly and beautiful master who was suffering from something. After all, in Jinjiang, eight out of ten masters are suffering from it (.) But later I found out that it seemed like the opposite was true. . But this cp doesn't affect anything. After all, the two of them rarely kiss, let alone from the neck down. I feel that many of the plot ideas in this article are good, but there are some contradictions, such as that... Bian Ge? It seems that the part about the young master at the end really tortured me. Including this messy thing between Yin Du and his father, it's really... Quite uncomfortable to analyze in detail. But it was all written in a hurry! ! When I was watching the scene where Yin Du's father died, all I thought about was "Hey, how would Shan Yu react if he knew about it? Do they have to confess to each other?" Then who would have thought that Yin Du would turn around and leave as soon as Yin Du's father died. . . Just left. . . . . Good guy ( Then, in the penultimate chapter, I wanted to find Shan Yu again, but ended up fighting, and then I stopped talking, and then... . Block the sword, it's the end The end. . . . . . . . Who understands, who understands my momentary collapse, who understands It ended like this, and I, you, and I too, it was too... It ended abruptly! ! ! The overall plot is still ok, and I can accept it. In fact, before I watched it, I read in the comments that someone said something about the ending. But what I thought at the time was that the ending turned into water and ink, and the protagonist's behavior became weird and OOC. I thought that if I didn't want to watch it, I wouldn't buy it. Who would have thought of such an ending! ! It's like buying a pack of biscuits and imagining it was nine dollars. Then I ate two of them, and as soon as I took them out, they were gone! ! Gone! ! ! Not even a bit of scum is left! ! ! There are no extras! ! ! ! ! (Grievance. Jpg) To be honest, 20w was really rushed when I wrote it like this. Too many things were left unexplained. I really felt that Comrade Xiao Dan was so miserable. I also wanted to see the two of them feel sorry for each other in the sequel. The young couple talked about love and coaxed each other to talk to each other. In the end, in the last few hundred words, from the perspective of others when everything was over, the two of them were together. . . Then, it's gone, it's gone It's heartbreaking, really heartbreaking. . . . . . . .

There is no follow-up between Ling Shu and Qin.

Md, I choose the master, resurrect the master, and throw away the slag attack! This makes me really uncomfortable...

In other words, every double line is sad. I read more than 60 chapters before I realized that something was wrong. I never expected that the finale of 71, with all kinds of divine twists and turns, ended up being HE... It was too difficult. I originally wanted to watch the master sprinkle sugar after I tortured him, but I just reached down with one hand and stroked the bald spots... I originally wanted to buy a pure sweet tangerine, but I didn't expect to buy an unripe Shiranui. By the way, the plot of the story is really good, and it would be no problem to expand it into 1 million words in detail!

Whenever I see such a disgusting and irresponsible "father", I always think that attaching all the faults and negative emotions to his children is really a problem with his outlook. Since he is so ruthless to his own flesh and blood, he has the ability to destroy the tool that caused everything! Swing your sword from the palace! ! I still think highly of him... What kind of rubbish is this? It's okay to not be like him, tsk

Ah, it's a bit short. Can there be two extra chapters? One chapter is about A'Du and Mingxiu's daily life, and the other one is about Qin Chuyi and Ling Shu. I really want to see it! Very well written! Please?? Please

How should I put it? Some books only find out that they are unfinished when they reach the last chapter. . .

Qin, be nice to Ling Shu, or I will break through the dimensional wall and hunt you down!

I cried when I read it for the first time. It's been a long time since I've been moved to tears by an article.

Don't agree, damn it, it would be really frustrating if you still agree.