The Myriad Realms Livestream

In fact, it's not pretty, and it has so many bugs that I forgot to put it away before reading it. But inexplicably, I really wanted to read it, but it ended here. It felt like there were still 300 unwritten chapters. Obviously the first part was okay, although there was a problem with the logic. There are also some things that have not been mentioned and are probably half-finished, such as the treasures lost to the country and exchanged from ancient planes. For example, the college took a few chapters to write about the college and so many students, but the map ended with just one traitor. There is no description of the interstellar world, and the ending of the equipment world is hasty. There should always be an option for the live broadcast room to merge the live broadcast rooms? It feels like the protagonist of this article is a time management master. Zhu Da is gone, but where is Zhu Er? And the merger of the "six realms" and the revival of spiritual energy? Otherwise, I would be in despair. If I were to enter the Immortal Way, I would not be able to practice because I don't have enough spiritual energy. I might want to kill the protagonist, the protagonist's parents and other supporting characters. They will disappear at the end. It is so difficult to practice to the foundation stage. As a result, it will take one year to become a god at the end. Xuanyuan Sword kills all the demons with one sword. Why didn't I kill them at that time? Although it was said to be related to luck, it wasn't very weak at the time, right? The worst I can do is hack them to death one by one. Anyway, the operation is pretty much the same when locked up. I haven't written anything about my brother's return or anything like that. It's so simple. The more I think about it, the more uncomfortable I feel. Some of them are just my personal thoughts, and some of them are real bugs and really logical.

Why didn't they go on vacation? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

Spread flowers, sprinkle flowers, the ending is a bit sudden, but it's very nice.

I originally thought there would be more plots between the fairy world and the human world, as well as some content about cultivation in the human world, competing with other countries, and so on. The pace at the end of the article is a bit too fast. But the article is still very interesting (*^ω^*)

The pace is a bit fast later on

Isn't the ancient plane a parallel world? So won't the history and techniques taught before affect the present?

Could his brother be a clue buried by the author?

I finally waited until you were okay and I didn't give up! Haha ~ Congratulations on the completion!

Wait for more updates! Cheers (? ??_??)?

I worked hard and finished writing it in one breath~