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When the frail, aloof Lin Daiyu leaves the resplendent Rongguo Mansion, where will she find refuge?
When the beautiful, passionate Lin Daiyu steps out of her hazy, dreamlike romance, where will her heart wander?
In the kingdom of beauties in Dream of the Red Chamber, where a hundred flowers vie for attention, there is the alluring, voluptuous Xue Baochai, the charming, radiant Shi Xiangyun, and the otherworldly Miaoyu. But just as Lin Daiyu lets all of this go, she encounters Xue Baoqin, the second young lady of the Xue family, whose beauty and talent surpass even those of her elder sister. Is this fate, or some unseen retribution?
“Since my sister lost to you, Baoqin will take the liberty of competing with Sister Lin to see which of us can win this man's heart!”
Can Lin Daiyu outshine the beautiful Xue Baoqin, whose sunny disposition and worldly knowledge make her seem so innocent and pure?
It all began with the lovebird incense beads that Prince Beijingshan gave to Baoyu. At the time, Lin Daiyu, steadfast in her love, told Brother Bao, “I don't want something that's been handled by some filthy man!” Who could have guessed that the rootless, drifting Daiyu would become entangled with this elegant figure, whose face was as flawless as jade, whose eyes shone like stars, and whose rank and splendor were beyond compare?
Can Lin Daiyu's beauty, talent, melancholy, suspicion, and passion move another man's heart? Find out in this Dream of the Red Chamber tale, A Tangled Romance.
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Why don't you write it anymore? I want to see Sister Lin's married life.
It's just a running account, a waste of previous preparations. Refuse to send flowers!
Hey, what can I say? The writing in the last few chapters is very messy and disorderly, the plot is bizarre and unreasonable, and many clues are not followed up. Basically, it is not much different from the short story. If it were someone else's article, I would definitely not rate it, but since it is Bailing, forget it, I'd better rate it and encourage it. Really disappointed and helpless.
Bai Ling, if you haven't finished this article yet, you start a new article, which makes people feel like "Forget this article, I will write the new article well, and the new article will be better." It is a typical anticlimax and lack of perseverance. However, you don't know how to sweep the world without sweeping the whole house. You cannot place your hopes on the "next one". Only by revising this article well will we not be disappointed. I seriously doubt that you will improve this article, and I even doubt that your next article will be able to change the shortcomings of this article, which is anticlimactic. Because you have changed too much and are not persistent enough. Because you are too carefree, writing is just a temporary interest for you. Because you have already been full of time to write this article, will you have enough time, energy, and patience to revise this article?
You are really challenging the readers' patience. I don't know how long my patience will last.
First of all, congratulations to Dada for starting a new article, but when will the extra chapters and revisions to the two old articles that Dada owes be completed? ? ? ? ? ?
It's better to finish the extra chapters and those that need to be fixed first, and then focus on writing a new article. Promises also come in a sequence. You should fulfill your first promise first. I hope you will seriously consider it. I hope there will be surprises…
Extras two, three, four... , Will there still be one? ? ?
This article is much better than the one in Secret History! More, more, more
Wait and wait~ Bai Ling~~
Hurry up, or I'll go over to the new book and update you.
Wait for the extra story until your neck grows!
The ending of Bai Ling is too frivolous, as if it is in a hurry to conclude the story, so many plots are explained vaguely, which is really a pity. This is a rare continuation of a popular novel. Regardless of the concept or conception, the plot in the previous part is very brilliant, and the characters and language style are very close to the original work. If Bai Ling can continue to write as always, polish the following chapters more, see the true feelings in the subtleties, and put more thought into it, it will be as beautiful as Bingluo's.
Why don't you write it anymore? I want to see Sister Lin's married life.
It's just a running account, a waste of previous preparations. Refuse to send flowers!
Hey, what can I say? The writing in the last few chapters is very messy and disorderly, the plot is bizarre and unreasonable, and many clues are not followed up. Basically, it is not much different from the short story. If it were someone else's article, I would definitely not rate it, but since it is Bailing, forget it, I'd better rate it and encourage it. Really disappointed and helpless. Bai Ling, if you haven't finished this article yet, you start a new article, which makes people feel like "Forget this article, I will write the new article well, and the new article will be better." It is a typical anticlimax and lack of perseverance. However, you don't know how to sweep the world without sweeping the whole house. You cannot place your hopes on the "next one". Only by revising this article well will we not be disappointed. I seriously doubt that you will improve this article, and I even doubt that your next article will be able to change the shortcomings of this article, which is anticlimactic. Because you have changed too much and are not persistent enough. Because you are too carefree, writing is just a temporary interest for you. Because you have already been full of time to write this article, will you have enough time, energy, and patience to revise this article? You are really challenging the readers' patience. I don't know how long my patience will last.
First of all, congratulations to Dada for starting a new article, but when will the extra chapters and revisions to the two old articles that Dada owes be completed? ? ? ? ? ? It's better to finish the extra chapters and those that need to be fixed first, and then focus on writing a new article. Promises also come in a sequence. You should fulfill your first promise first. I hope you will seriously consider it. I hope there will be surprises…
Extras two, three, four... , Will there still be one? ? ?
This article is much better than the one in Secret History! More, more, more
Wait and wait~ Bai Ling~~
Hurry up, or I'll go over to the new book and update you.
Wait for the extra story until your neck grows!
The ending of Bai Ling is too frivolous, as if it is in a hurry to conclude the story, so many plots are explained vaguely, which is really a pity. This is a rare continuation of a popular novel. Regardless of the concept or conception, the plot in the previous part is very brilliant, and the characters and language style are very close to the original work. If Bai Ling can continue to write as always, polish the following chapters more, see the true feelings in the subtleties, and put more thought into it, it will be as beautiful as Bingluo's.