There are stories whose beginnings I think I know, but whose endings I cannot guess. The truth is, I don't know. I haven't even fathomed the beginning...
This is an allegorical romance fanfiction. Lin Daiyu's love story is the main thread, while the decline of the four great clans, Jia, Wang, Xue, and Shi, runs beneath it.
The story begins with Lin Daiyu straying into Tianxiang Tower, exploring the brief and enigmatic life of Qin Keqing and the many related events that followed.
Perhaps fewer people will dote on Sister Lin in this story, and all she will face is reality. But she has incomparable resilience and conviction. Watch her find a way out of hardship and discover a happy life of her own...
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What kind of hero is this? !
I didn't catch up with that group of Secret History back then, but today I caught up with the male protagonist and the beginning of it, who was almost under-shot. I would feel sorry for Sister Lin if I didn't scold him.
I guess your nymphomaniac and protective mother likes Xue Baochai, Tanchun and Miaoyu from the bottom of her heart. The male protagonist has Baochai and Tanchun's strategy, skill, calculation, and coldness and ruthlessness, and Miaoyu's arrogance, awkwardness, and coldness.
Even if your biological mother claims to like Sister Lin, it's just a claim, and she just likes her skin. What she wants most is to make Sister Lin become the above-mentioned person wrapped in Sister Lin's skin.
Toughness? Although Sister Lin looks weak on the outside, she has always been proud and self-loving in her heart. She would rather bend than bend, and she has no emotional toughness. It is your Jiabao sister who is resilient and unyielding in her pursuit of a man, the best choice for her ambitions. (Of course, your mother may appreciate this).
Do you think that if Jia Baoyu loved Baochai, Sister Lin would get involved in the fight like Sister Bao?
"People say that the Grand View Garden is prosperous and beautiful,
In my eyes, it is just a city of sorrow. "Our sister Lin lives there because she has no choice but to live there. It's not like Sister Bao, who has a house, a job, a mother, and a brother, but still has to live in the Grand View Garden for several years.
In The Secret History, your nymphomaniac and protective mother only made her sister and this cold-faced, cold-hearted and arrogant prince into a "loving couple" based on wishful thinking and force, and their "love is stronger than gold" - as for the male protagonist, how can you be a qualified lover? Love words, love words cannot be said; hugs and kisses are not enough; in bed, they are childish and boring; talk to each other? "No. I never do this. Just like this, I can't handle what comes to my door."
Your own mother treats an arrogant, arrogant, narcissistic, and selfish male protagonist as a treasure, and she wants many women inside to treat him as a treasure, and she insists on our sister Lin treating him as a treasure too. Actually, just you? What have you done for Sister Lin? You didn't dig your heart out, put down your body, or put in all your efforts, but just lingered and waited, weighed and calculated, and just wanted Sister Lin to commit her heart to you? Your mother is a nymphomaniac, so is Sister Lin? Xue Baochai wants to fall in love with Qingyun, but Sister Lin also regards the prince's little wife as a good job and an honor? Still a loveless little wife.
So your biological mother really loves you. I will give you the upper hand both emotionally and in bed, and I won't let you suffer any injustice or lose control of your impulses.
"Those who cannot get them will always be in turmoil, and those who prefer them will always be confident."
So you are good at being confident and don't know how to give, only know how to ask. When it comes to others, you can only calculate and weigh gains and losses. Even if you say about the sister you care about the most, "But Huayang, she broke my heart." - It's just because your sister didn't agree to your marriage to the Xining Palace. Just because I didn't let you plan on your sister's lifelong happiness, it hurt your glassy heart - your biological mother loves you so much, but you still feel wronged by this kind of thing.
When it comes to treating Sister Lin, your sister is more like a male protagonist than you, more frank than you, more proactive than you, more affectionate than you, warmer than you, more willing to communicate and talk, than you who can talk, instead of worrying about ostracizing Crown Prince Zhongsu. I can't rule out that it's because your biological mother also knows that not saying anything is not the best thing about the relationship between the two of you. She loves you too much and spoils you, and won't tolerate you being humble, not even in front of your lover! So I find a spokesperson for you, who can convey the message without you having to show up in a lowly manner.
Even her sister was trying to take advantage of her, not to mention taking advantage of her subordinate Qiu Liang's feelings. Have you never thought that people are human beings, not chess pieces? You will definitely not consider this, except from your own perspective, who else have you considered? If you married Lin Daiyu out of love, I would definitely forgive you a lot. But you are not. You and your own mother don't believe it, right? Lin Daiyu would not have any other way to impress her except love. This is what you lack. This is also the main reason why I want to shoot you to death.
Our sister Lin is also smart, charming, charming and cute, but the most important thing is that she has a delicate heart with seven orifices that you don't have, a sensitive but warm heart. Only on the premise of mutual love can she be willing to give.
Now let's talk about this article. Now your mother is showing her mother's energy to pamper you, the male protagonist, and the female partner as always.
Maybe this female partner will inadvertently hurt your arrogant heart because she has family secrets and family interests? Maybe you will take the initiative to give up on her because you have calculated it and it is not good for Beifu? So the marriage can't work?
Does your biological mother plan to let you move to sister Lin if your marriage fails?
I won't shoot what I haven't written yet.
But so far, you, the male protagonist and the female partner, are still selected as the characters in the novel that I most want to shoot to death.
Has the author really given up on the article? I waited for years and never came back to fill the hole. It's very well written, don't be fooled.
I don't like some readers' comments about this book. Every author has his own style. If they are kidnapped by the readers' thoughts, how can the authors complete the stories in their hearts. Compared with other Red Mansions novels that make Sister Lin and the male protagonist extremely disgusted from the beginning, I still like Zhi Da Da's style of letting the relationship warm up slowly. Shui Rong is the prince, so he has to be more arrogant and reserved. If the male protagonist is not strong enough, how can he control Sister Lin. The past with Bao Yu destined King Beijing not to win Sister Lin's heart too early. Why not have a more tortuous process and a sweet ending? Is it possible that Sister Lin Zhongzhong was interested in her from the beginning until the end of the novel? Wouldn't readers get bored of reading this kind of article? I believe that many readers like the large red Mansion novels and hope that she will continue to write them. Don't pay too much attention to bad comments, everyone is attracted to their own eyes, and there will be people who like to read.
Judging from several of the author's articles, it is obvious that the author's writing of emotions is very poor and has no way of starting. The so-called origin leads to the climax. There is no context at all for the love path, and there is no touching feeling at all. Not to mention Sister Lin, even I was not moved. There is nothing wrong with a man who only shows up, devotes himself to politics, and puts political life first. It's not that there is anything wrong with him, but he is just not suitable for Sister Lin. Author, you have completely failed to write about the other "human" side of the male protagonist besides being a cold and restrained political animal. What is the inner nature of the male protagonist who is compatible with Sister Lin?
Don't do it in the name of Red Mansion. It's not a big problem if you want to elevate the male lead. Change your name. If I'm not mistaken, was he tricked by the criticism?
The writing is not bad.
The author has something to say:
Well... I haven't updated for a while. I'm too busy, but I have no intention of giving up. I still want to believe that what the author said is true. I just hope that the author has not forgotten what she said and doesn't abandon the trap! ! ! ! !
Daiyu's language in this chapter is good, smooth and elegant, which can be seen from V Bailing's language skills. Continuing with yesterday's topic, writing is my hobby and what I enjoy. Besides, after working so hard to write, I hope it will reach a wider readership. Take two fictional works that have received great response: one is "The Queen" and the other is "The Empress" as examples. In my personal opinion, both works are not very mature, both in terms of plot and character development. (I must praise you again for your secret history.) But it captures the reader's psychology: a beautiful and radiant beauty is loved by everyone, and every man is affectionate. Everyone (me too) is obsessed with this kind of heroine. It would be better to say that everyone has narcissism, and their vanity is greatly satisfied in the virtual world. So I have a small suggestion. When Bailing opens Xihankeng, he should first determine the composition of readers. It is estimated that the romance and history route will have a wider readership. I personally particularly like historical themes. From the Western Han Dynasty to the early days of Emperor Wu of the Han Dynasty, the status of women was very high. The status of women plummeted starting from Dong Zhongshu. In the Song Dynasty, Cheng Zhu's theory pushed Confucianism to the extreme, and women fell into hell. Therefore, Bailing can still be liberal when writing about the Western Han Dynasty, unlike Red Mansions which is too restrictive. Furthermore, I still hold this view. The heroes and beauties of the Western Han Dynasty are so brilliant and everyone is familiar with them. In this way, you create an unknown heroine, so that the heroine's light will be covered. After all, Chen Ajiao, who was "a hibiscus flower in the past, is now a heartbroken grass", Wei Zifu in Weiyang Mythology, (Liu Che, this guy, apart from fighting the Xiongnu in his life, he also defended The most ruthless ones are women. This actually made Li Meiren (Wei Zifu, who came from a humble background and had a baby brother) "there are beauties in the north, reclusive and independent"... All the characters are so outstanding, and they all have a broad readership base. Look, Tang Di Zhihua wrote that Gillian is still a little girl now, but her collection is already over 2,400. The only complete works on this subject that are readable are "Where to Hide Your Beauty in the Golden House" and "The Hate in the Golden House", but it's a pity that they are time-travelling.
It can be seen that Shui Rong also has a good impression of Mu Zi. I feel that Mu Zi is not a bad person. I am looking forward to the future development!
Not even more? Really well written!
Is the author going to update it? I loved it when I first read it and have been waiting for it.
What kind of hero is this? ! I didn't catch up with that group of Secret History back then, but today I caught up with the male protagonist and the beginning of it, who was almost under-shot. I would feel sorry for Sister Lin if I didn't scold him. I guess your nymphomaniac and protective mother likes Xue Baochai, Tanchun and Miaoyu from the bottom of her heart. The male protagonist has Baochai and Tanchun's strategy, skill, calculation, and coldness and ruthlessness, and Miaoyu's arrogance, awkwardness, and coldness. Even if your biological mother claims to like Sister Lin, it's just a claim, and she just likes her skin. What she wants most is to make Sister Lin become the above-mentioned person wrapped in Sister Lin's skin. Toughness? Although Sister Lin looks weak on the outside, she has always been proud and self-loving in her heart. She would rather bend than bend, and she has no emotional toughness. It is your Jiabao sister who is resilient and unyielding in her pursuit of a man, the best choice for her ambitions. (Of course, your mother may appreciate this). Do you think that if Jia Baoyu loved Baochai, Sister Lin would get involved in the fight like Sister Bao? "People say that the Grand View Garden is prosperous and beautiful, In my eyes, it is just a city of sorrow. "Our sister Lin lives there because she has no choice but to live there. It's not like Sister Bao, who has a house, a job, a mother, and a brother, but still has to live in the Grand View Garden for several years. In The Secret History, your nymphomaniac and protective mother only made her sister and this cold-faced, cold-hearted and arrogant prince into a "loving couple" based on wishful thinking and force, and their "love is stronger than gold" - as for the male protagonist, how can you be a qualified lover? Love words, love words cannot be said; hugs and kisses are not enough; in bed, they are childish and boring; talk to each other? "No. I never do this. Just like this, I can't handle what comes to my door." Your own mother treats an arrogant, arrogant, narcissistic, and selfish male protagonist as a treasure, and she wants many women inside to treat him as a treasure, and she insists on our sister Lin treating him as a treasure too. Actually, just you? What have you done for Sister Lin? You didn't dig your heart out, put down your body, or put in all your efforts, but just lingered and waited, weighed and calculated, and just wanted Sister Lin to commit her heart to you? Your mother is a nymphomaniac, so is Sister Lin? Xue Baochai wants to fall in love with Qingyun, but Sister Lin also regards the prince's little wife as a good job and an honor? Still a loveless little wife. So your biological mother really loves you. I will give you the upper hand both emotionally and in bed, and I won't let you suffer any injustice or lose control of your impulses. "Those who cannot get them will always be in turmoil, and those who prefer them will always be confident." So you are good at being confident and don't know how to give, only know how to ask. When it comes to others, you can only calculate and weigh gains and losses. Even if you say about the sister you care about the most, "But Huayang, she broke my heart." - It's just because your sister didn't agree to your marriage to the Xining Palace. Just because I didn't let you plan on your sister's lifelong happiness, it hurt your glassy heart - your biological mother loves you so much, but you still feel wronged by this kind of thing. When it comes to treating Sister Lin, your sister is more like a male protagonist than you, more frank than you, more proactive than you, more affectionate than you, warmer than you, more willing to communicate and talk, than you who can talk, instead of worrying about ostracizing Crown Prince Zhongsu. I can't rule out that it's because your biological mother also knows that not saying anything is not the best thing about the relationship between the two of you. She loves you too much and spoils you, and won't tolerate you being humble, not even in front of your lover! So I find a spokesperson for you, who can convey the message without you having to show up in a lowly manner. Even her sister was trying to take advantage of her, not to mention taking advantage of her subordinate Qiu Liang's feelings. Have you never thought that people are human beings, not chess pieces? You will definitely not consider this, except from your own perspective, who else have you considered? If you married Lin Daiyu out of love, I would definitely forgive you a lot. But you are not. You and your own mother don't believe it, right? Lin Daiyu would not have any other way to impress her except love. This is what you lack. This is also the main reason why I want to shoot you to death. Our sister Lin is also smart, charming, charming and cute, but the most important thing is that she has a delicate heart with seven orifices that you don't have, a sensitive but warm heart. Only on the premise of mutual love can she be willing to give. Now let's talk about this article. Now your mother is showing her mother's energy to pamper you, the male protagonist, and the female partner as always. Maybe this female partner will inadvertently hurt your arrogant heart because she has family secrets and family interests? Maybe you will take the initiative to give up on her because you have calculated it and it is not good for Beifu? So the marriage can't work? Does your biological mother plan to let you move to sister Lin if your marriage fails? I won't shoot what I haven't written yet. But so far, you, the male protagonist and the female partner, are still selected as the characters in the novel that I most want to shoot to death.
Has the author really given up on the article? I waited for years and never came back to fill the hole. It's very well written, don't be fooled.
I don't like some readers' comments about this book. Every author has his own style. If they are kidnapped by the readers' thoughts, how can the authors complete the stories in their hearts. Compared with other Red Mansions novels that make Sister Lin and the male protagonist extremely disgusted from the beginning, I still like Zhi Da Da's style of letting the relationship warm up slowly. Shui Rong is the prince, so he has to be more arrogant and reserved. If the male protagonist is not strong enough, how can he control Sister Lin. The past with Bao Yu destined King Beijing not to win Sister Lin's heart too early. Why not have a more tortuous process and a sweet ending? Is it possible that Sister Lin Zhongzhong was interested in her from the beginning until the end of the novel? Wouldn't readers get bored of reading this kind of article? I believe that many readers like the large red Mansion novels and hope that she will continue to write them. Don't pay too much attention to bad comments, everyone is attracted to their own eyes, and there will be people who like to read.
Judging from several of the author's articles, it is obvious that the author's writing of emotions is very poor and has no way of starting. The so-called origin leads to the climax. There is no context at all for the love path, and there is no touching feeling at all. Not to mention Sister Lin, even I was not moved. There is nothing wrong with a man who only shows up, devotes himself to politics, and puts political life first. It's not that there is anything wrong with him, but he is just not suitable for Sister Lin. Author, you have completely failed to write about the other "human" side of the male protagonist besides being a cold and restrained political animal. What is the inner nature of the male protagonist who is compatible with Sister Lin? Don't do it in the name of Red Mansion. It's not a big problem if you want to elevate the male lead. Change your name. If I'm not mistaken, was he tricked by the criticism? The writing is not bad.
The author has something to say: Well... I haven't updated for a while. I'm too busy, but I have no intention of giving up. I still want to believe that what the author said is true. I just hope that the author has not forgotten what she said and doesn't abandon the trap! ! ! ! !
Daiyu's language in this chapter is good, smooth and elegant, which can be seen from V Bailing's language skills. Continuing with yesterday's topic, writing is my hobby and what I enjoy. Besides, after working so hard to write, I hope it will reach a wider readership. Take two fictional works that have received great response: one is "The Queen" and the other is "The Empress" as examples. In my personal opinion, both works are not very mature, both in terms of plot and character development. (I must praise you again for your secret history.) But it captures the reader's psychology: a beautiful and radiant beauty is loved by everyone, and every man is affectionate. Everyone (me too) is obsessed with this kind of heroine. It would be better to say that everyone has narcissism, and their vanity is greatly satisfied in the virtual world. So I have a small suggestion. When Bailing opens Xihankeng, he should first determine the composition of readers. It is estimated that the romance and history route will have a wider readership. I personally particularly like historical themes. From the Western Han Dynasty to the early days of Emperor Wu of the Han Dynasty, the status of women was very high. The status of women plummeted starting from Dong Zhongshu. In the Song Dynasty, Cheng Zhu's theory pushed Confucianism to the extreme, and women fell into hell. Therefore, Bailing can still be liberal when writing about the Western Han Dynasty, unlike Red Mansions which is too restrictive. Furthermore, I still hold this view. The heroes and beauties of the Western Han Dynasty are so brilliant and everyone is familiar with them. In this way, you create an unknown heroine, so that the heroine's light will be covered. After all, Chen Ajiao, who was "a hibiscus flower in the past, is now a heartbroken grass", Wei Zifu in Weiyang Mythology, (Liu Che, this guy, apart from fighting the Xiongnu in his life, he also defended The most ruthless ones are women. This actually made Li Meiren (Wei Zifu, who came from a humble background and had a baby brother) "there are beauties in the north, reclusive and independent"... All the characters are so outstanding, and they all have a broad readership base. Look, Tang Di Zhihua wrote that Gillian is still a little girl now, but her collection is already over 2,400. The only complete works on this subject that are readable are "Where to Hide Your Beauty in the Golden House" and "The Hate in the Golden House", but it's a pity that they are time-travelling.
It can be seen that Shui Rong also has a good impression of Mu Zi. I feel that Mu Zi is not a bad person. I am looking forward to the future development!
Not even more? Really well written!
Is the author going to update it? I loved it when I first read it and have been waiting for it.
Can anyone tell me how to contact the author?