
[Gu Jian 3] Xiang Ying and Jin Yun
[古剑三]相萤与缙云
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Being able to meet again after death is not HE. What is HE? This must be a happy ending.
Damn it, I really don't know what I wrote with such nonsense... This ending really made me cry. The author has a lot of potential, hehe, the story is so touching... I remember someone recommended a pornographic and sadistic novel to me. It ended with the romantic male protagonist meeting his former lover at Naihe Bridge. One of my lovers, my lover did not see the male protagonist for the last time before his death. After his death, he waited here for many years for the male protagonist. When the two met again, they just said hello, and then said that they would live a good life in the next life, and they immediately parted ways... I feel so bad QAQ... So sad...
Come on, I'm waiting for you
Have Xiangying and Jinyun still not made a marriage agreement? But it's also nice to live together!
Why does Jinyun get over it even if he thinks about it when his mind is connected?!! He's so awake, why not indulge in this beautiful moment? After all, he doesn't know when parting will come... He's still feeling sad even though he's sipping candy.
I was smacking my head with sugar, but suddenly a big knife appeared in the last sentence...
So sweet! So sweet! I love candy!
Stayed up late to read it. I feel like I won't be able to sleep today. Feeling disappointed. Why.
Wu Zhen can also have love! If the other party were from the Kingdom of Witches, I don't know what kind of story it would be.
Mua! Thank you so much to the author! (??ω??)?? I was so touched by QAQ. I probably read the article in the middle of the night that day. The author's emotional rendering was quite good. In addition, I have been following the article and I was emotionally invested in the author and the article. So I was very depressed at the end. This article did not fail at all, really! Nothing has a beginning, nothing has an end. How many people can't finish one thing? No matter what, the ending is a full stop. After all, I have been writing the article for so long, and I have tried my best to do it. I feel full of accomplishment. At the beginning, I was passionate about writing it, but later I found more and more, and it took a long time; there were some places that I didn't want to write but I had to write because of the transition of the plot. As I wrote, I found that it was different from what I thought. I feel the same way when writing articles and editing videos? I think it's because I took it for granted at the beginning, and I didn't have enough experience to write the article all at once. The main line of the chapter is grasped so accurately, or the outline theme. I have not thought about what story I want to write, such as whether it is to have a love line, or to pursue myself, whether to write about a glorious achievement, or to write about a strange hero's praise and lament... These need to be thought through before writing, and of course they are not static. There will be some changes as the number of words in the article increases... But it is very, very good to be completed ~ This article is not a failure at all! The title is novel and unconventional, the emotions are well rendered, and the character's character is also very accurately grasped! I have always felt that it is difficult to write good fan fiction, because it requires the author to have an understanding and understanding of each character in the original work. If he does not grasp it well, it will look OOC; and some plots are more difficult to add, because it is adding another character's story from a seemingly complete story. At this time, if you still want to preserve the theme of the original work, if the character is not well written, it will appear artificial and redundant; if you just want to write CP, the theme concept will not easily conflict; but if there are too many original characters and the background is too complex, the theme may be scattered and the story will appear unfamiliar... Having said that, The above problems are not problems when the emotions are well rendered and the plot is reasonable. It all depends on how it is written. Thank you to the author for bringing such an article to readers. It allows me to see the spirit of characters like Xiangying. From a god to a flower, no matter what kind of identity he is, he is striving to pursue it. The self is fighting against the invisible fate, and they don't care whether they live or die. All they want is to break the barriers in front of them. This spirit touches me... I also hope that the author will break the difficulties and barriers encountered in writing one after another in the future. I have been too busy preparing for exams recently, so I will disappear for a while! Come back in a few months to follow the author's articles hahahahaha~ mua! (??ω??)??