Dream of a Comeback (Quick Transmigration)

How should I put it? There was no way for me to read each word carefully because the plot was a bit empty. Then I just read it at a glance.

It's too empty. I didn't understand anything after reading it.

Well, probably the text is a bit empty, like it's far away from the ground. You can intersperse appropriately. For example, you can describe something off-topic. For example, the protagonist talks about what the protagonist is doing when giving advice to his younger brother. After all, it still has to revolve around the protagonist. The interludes of subsequent events can also be placed in the side story without overemphasis. Dialogue could also be more refined and spoken. My wife's level is already very good. The most important thing is what she said herself. Don't go off topic and focus on the main character. Squeeze the water on the pen and the written words will be clearer. The above are personal opinions and are for communication purposes only. Little angel, don't let your opinion be affected, call your wife (??ω??)??

I hope there will be no trafficking in the world.

I've finished reading it, it's quite good, but the copywriting misunderstood me.

Spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers.

Today is New Year's Day. I specially come to the last chapter to send you a blessing and thank you: Happy New Year's Day, Happy New Year, thank you for free.

Those female cultivators who harmed the original owner are still alive and well?!

This world of cultivation is so disgusting

The so-called love of these people is so terrible and disgusting