[A Boring Traditional Cultivation Story]
Once upon a time, there was a very tall mountain. A little girl lived on it, and whenever she got into danger, she'd shout, "Number One Under Heaven! Number One Under Heaven! Come save me!" Eventually, the little girl was kicked off the mountain.
After waking from a great dream and forgetting everything from her past, where should a 158-year-old go from here?
Years later, someone asked Ning Qingzhi, "How do you become Number One Under Heaven?" She answered, "Beat the current Number One Under Heaven."
A few things to know before reading:
1. Starting from Chapter 29, this story will be discounted to half price as it goes into reverse chronological sales. If you've already read it, please don't buy it again. If you haven't, half price is a great deal!
2. Plot-focused. The heroine grows independently first, and the hero appears much later. A little angst, but not an effortless sugary romance.
Theme: Love, trust, responsibility, and commitment.
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I'm a little confused. In addition to revealing the identity of the heroine, what else does the main plot involve in dividing the spiritual energy in the later stage. It feels like the male protagonist is like an upgrade package, specially designed to add experience to the female protagonist. I don't dare to give guidance on writing. For the time being, I think you want to read readers' comments. I will just talk about my own feelings. I will only talk about the bad things. If you didn't write well, I wouldn't follow you here. Haha (please bow if you are offended). It's been nearly 30 chapters, and the main feeling I have is that I always feel like something is missing, and I feel like I'm on the sidelines, and I'm not very empathetic. I specifically looked at the number of clicks. The first one was fine, but when it came to the Ancient Secret Realm, it dropped off a cliff. As far as I feel, that part is mainly about narrative, which is too bland. Although there are two typical characters as highlights, the description method is a bit single. For example, most of them are from a third-person perspective, which has a thrilling feeling, but it always feels too alienated. I can't describe it accurately, it's mainly a language problem. This remains true to this day. Another point is that I am not quite sure what the heroine is thinking. Maybe it is because of amnesia that I cannot analyze her in the context of her past experiences. Maybe it's because the first impression of the copywriter (cold and sword-drawing school) is different from her soft image in the plot. You can probably understand that the heroine mainly wants to upgrade now, and is still in the growth stage, but her personal charm is not outstanding. For example, although her firmness of mind is reflected, the characterization is a bit average, which is not very attractive to readers (for example, some people like beautiful/calm/firm...). Simply put, the character is unclear. My main feeling is that at the beginning, the heroine was easily deceived by the little boy (if her age and cultivation were not tested, it would be even worse). Although she has amnesia, it is more obvious that she was not a smart type before her amnesia. Although it may be to pave the way for her identity, but after a series of interactions between siblings, until the younger brother "gives up" on her, I feel that the image of the younger brother is more deeply rooted in the hearts of the people than the heroine. The heroine is like the cornerstone of her brother's growth, in various senses. Her hardness is always revealed after she is hurt. Although it is a growth stream, from the perspective of an uninformed bystander, her early growth plot lacks highlights. Although it may be realistic, as far as online articles are concerned, the characters here are relatively popular (I feel that this experience is still very ordinary), and it is somewhat difficult to capture readers. In addition, the switching between different mini-maps feels a little too fast compared to the slow-burning description. For example, choosing a Taoist companion is a springboard. Although there are many explanations, I still feel very surprised. Not to mention how Elder Shen was a stickler for his own opinions, a believer in strength and survival of the fittest in previous portrayals, but I found it a bit baffling to save the heroine from the secret realm. When it comes to choosing a Taoist partner, it can be seen that he understands the balance of interests better and has a method to deal with the world. It is impossible to have that reputation just because of his strength. But when I saw his favorite disciple, I felt that something was wrong. Such a master would actually teach such a disciple without any detailed analysis. However, the disciple was too naive and indulgent, which was completely different from the image of the master depicted in the previous article. It was difficult to understand why he liked him the most. There may be various reasons, but the first disciple behaved like this. Even if he is "fearless in being favored", he is quite speechless. Elder Shen's shyness and his apprentice's behavior make me think his emotional intelligence is a bit touching, as if he suddenly becomes cute. Alas, is he a little too powerful or am I thinking too much. Keep up the good work, I will talk about it from a personal perspective. If it is inappropriate, I will not post it anymore. After all, it is better to be happy. _(:з∠)_
The writing is quite beautiful, but why are there so few collections?
This kid. . Not very fond of it. . Always making his own decisions. . . . .
Wow, I'm so excited. This is my first time reading the article and I've read more than 30 chapters and it's still free. The author is so awesome.
Why haven't you updated? Woohoo!
The male protagonist is a bit naive, but the female protagonist has grown up so far
The sun is in the eyes—— Eyes warm, like sunshine
So Ning Qingzhi is not necessarily called Ning Qingzhi. This name belongs to Little Luobotou's sister?
This kid is so big