The Lost Mermaid [Western Crossover]

Although it is a comprehensive British and American film, the protagonist of Titanic still plays an important role. This is also the original intention of clicking this article. You must know that there are too few male protagonists by Carl Hockley, and even fewer good ones. This article did not disappoint me and it is worth subscribing. The characters inside have been given new meanings, and the story structure has not collapsed, making it reasonable. The relationship between the male and female protagonists does not have a straight path to the end, and there are no inexplicable delays. It breaks off when it breaks, and the handling of the male and female protagonists is also very reasonable. For example, the little Edward's entanglement with the female protagonist, the female protagonist dealt with it without being disrespectful for a few days, and it was clearly explained after a few days. It is in line with the character setting in the introduction. There are two things that surprised me. The first is Jack's treatment of Joroif. I don't think it's strange how Carl handled it. Jack felt that it was a little strange to say that if he was lucky, he would survive. Because at the beginning of the story, the heroine also commented that his soul was very clean, so I felt a little caught off guard. , Of course, there is also a reason why in the movie Jack is the kind-hearted white moonlight image, so it also makes me feel a bit contradictory. However, the fandom is also a re-creation, so it is mainly because the author's original positioning of this character is a pure soul, which is a bit inconsistent with Jack's inner analysis. The second point is the handling of Joloif's attack on the heroine. I feel that it was not explained clearly. Because the ending comes after this paragraph, this person's revenge is the climax of the novel. The cunning old servant's revenge on the heroine can go hand in hand with the shipwreck, which can push the story to the climax. Therefore, I feel that this revenge has not been handled well, so I would like to make some suggestions here. If you have any ideas for editing, please be sure to consider improving this plot. In the end, I felt the same as most of the reviews. The ending was unexpected and felt a bit rushed, although the movie also ended when everyone was rescued by another ship. But what makes me feel rushed here is that there are some holes that you have dug before but not filled in, such as what happened to Ruth's nude portrait, what happened after 1900, and the ending ends here. Although the number of survival ships is enough, there is no further writing, which makes me feel that the band of 1900 is buried in the sea like the original movie. Also, Carl's father is not satisfied with Miss Mermaid, this contradiction has not been resolved, and for example, whether the old servant Joloif died, and whether Ruth can escape her fate. Although if I continue to explain these things, the book may become a long novel with more than 200 chapters, and the plot may become too long and vulgar if I am not careful. However, after reading it, I still think that the novel ends at the end, which is a pity. It's like hanging halfway, half alive, very uncomfortable. Many years ago, Guo Jingming said that when he wrote a book, if he couldn't continue writing and didn't know how to arrange the ending, he would write everyone to death. Haha, I would like to ask if you are also like this. You don't know what to write next, so you just decided to end the novel at the shipwreck. But I haven't read your other works, so I can't make this conclusion. Overall, this novel is still very good. It is very novel among the many fanfics created with the theme of Titanic. For example, the setting of the heroine is very interesting, but it is not Mary Sue. The writing style is also very good and has certain literary qualities. Your new article is about Pride and Prejudice. It is also very interesting to write a cp between Darcy and his cousin Miss Anne. Basically, the fanfic is about traveling through other Bennet girls and Darcy to form a cp. It makes me tired of reading it. To know a good fanfic, the determination of CP and the innovation of plot are very important. Looking forward to your new work.

Waiting for the extra episode! Good looking! The abrupt ending is not satisfying at all><

Carl completely mistook Doris for a woman

I don't understand. Didn't it say at the beginning that the heroine's voice would become better as long as she got a man's true love? So the male protagonist doesn't really love the female protagonist? Or did I misunderstand the previous article and the heroine's voice has been so ugly her whole life?

Haha, the original CP met

No more? Yazi who feels like it's not over yet

No more? Yazi who feels like it's not over yet

Why did Ruth and Edward get engaged? They are all families who are not short of titles and money.

I started singing this song in my heart before I saw Zuo's words. It's amazing.

It's so beautiful, but I'm still not satisfied with it.