The Beauty as a Hostage [Book Transmigration]

I feel like why is Gong so skilled at delivering babies? Haha

Sprinkle flowers. I think the subject matter is good. But I don't know if it's because the writing style is immature or something, it's a bit sloppy, not a running account, it's great, but it's not complete, the depth is not enough, and there are pitfalls in reading it. There seems to be only one world line that is most obvious. Although there are many career lines, I still feel that something is missing. It feels like a pity, a pity. But it's great, let's spread the flowers

Very nice! ! Overall, it's a cookie. I like the characters very much, but the extra chapter is actually a bit short. I could finish some things in more detail, such as Chang'an and the princess, Qin Huwei, etc.

I feel like there are a lot of things that have not been explained, the follow-up of Chang'an and the princess, the follow-up of Xia Wanqing, and I don't know if I missed it or something. Is Qin's feelings for Su Ye a little strange? Is there any extra story behind Madam?

This, without anesthesia, won't hurt to death

Extra story: Why is this happening?

Finished spreading flowers! ! Hong Kong is really not enough! !

I finished two books at once, which makes me feel a bit melancholy.

As the sisters in the comment section said, it is a pity to throw away food if it is tasteless. The tone of the article at first, I thought it was a drama, but when it came to the relationship, it turned into a sweet cookie. The front and back were a bit disconnected, the supporting characters were a bit single, the plot line was thin, and the early part of the emotional line was a bit fast. It felt a bit sweet for the sake of sweetness, but it was still a bit rushed, and the preparation was too fast. But after all, it was a work made three years ago, so it is understandable that it is a bit immature. Overall, it's a good cookie, and I hope my wife's other works will be even better!

It looks sweet, but why do I always feel sad?