Main story complete. Extra chapters will be updated from time to time. My new novel, The Crown Princess's Irresistible Beauty, is now available.
The victorious army of the Prince of Qin arrived in Chang'an. The Crown Prince rode out thirty li from the city to greet them in person. "I have come on His Majesty's orders to welcome my fourth brother. The Crown Princess and I are both delighted that you have returned safely in triumph."
The Prince of Qin's lips curled into a faint smile. "I accept the kindness of my elder brother and his wife today." With that, he flicked his reins and rode on, ignoring the Crown Prince.
At the victory banquet, the emperor asked the Prince of Qin whether he was satisfied with the marriage arrangement. To everyone's surprise, he said he was not, and declared, "I want to take the most beautiful woman in the world as my wife."
The assembled officials all turned in unison to look at Duke Zheng and the Crown Prince.
Who in Chang'an didn't know that Duke Zheng's daughter was widely acknowledged as a beauty, praised by the people as "the most beautiful woman in the world"? The Prince of Qin had wanted to marry her before leaving on campaign, but while he was away, this peerless beauty had married the Crown Prince.
Author's upcoming novel: The Crown Princess's Irresistible Beauty
Ji Tanyin, daughter of the Grand Censor, and Du Qize, son of the Crown Prince's tutor, were betrothed as infants. On the eve of their wedding, Ji Tanyin's father angered the emperor with a memorial and was dismissed from office and exiled. Du Qize broke off the engagement to climb the social ladder, becoming the Crown Princess's brother-in-law.
After being reborn, Du Qize regretted what he had done and wanted to make amends for the wrongs of his previous life. Unexpectedly, when they met again, she asked him to discuss breaking off their engagement. Du Qize didn't believe she could leave him and waited for her to change her mind. He never imagined that the news he'd receive would be that she had been chosen as the Crown Princess.
No wonder the Crown Prince smiled at her that day in Yangzhou...
No wonder the Crown Prince visited the Ji residence to see the Grand Censor the day he returned to Chang'an...
No wonder the Crown Prince personally went there on the day the Ji family was arrested...
No wonder the Crown Prince readily agreed when Du Qize asked him to let her work in the Eastern Palace...
No wonder the Crown Prince went to see Lord Ji on official business the day the two families brought up their old betrothal agreement again...
No wonder that day, and that day, and the day after...
Theme: You can't escape fate, and mutual respect matters.
After reading this in one breath, I feel that the plot design is pretty good, but the writing style needs more polishing. First, the transitions between the plots are not in place, and the logic in some places is not smooth. Moreover, every time I write the climax of the plot, I always feel that I am half-breathing, unable to get up and down, and feel stuck. For example, in this chapter, the heroine has a difficult childbirth, and the whole process doesn't feel that tense; secondly, the character's emotions (character creation) are not expressed well. To be honest, the hero loves the heroine crazily, and sometimes he just doesn't feel like he can get it. Then there are other things such as the relationship between the prince and Wei Liangdi. The relationship between the heroine's brother and Miss Sun is also very awkward. I can say that from the time when the hero asked the emperor to match them up to the time when the heroine's brother returned safely from the war, Miss Sun disappeared from the world. . . . PS: The expression may be a bit confusing, but in short, I feel that the writing power needs to be improved, and more work needs to be done on character creation and plot transformation.
Has the male protagonist not yet made it clear to the female protagonist about Shui Xin? The female protagonist still thinks that the male protagonist slept with her in the name of having sex. Sometimes it's really uncomfortable to misunderstand things that are just a few words. Is this Shuixin offline?
I thought the heroine's name in the next book was related to Epiphyllum, but it turned out that I was not familiar with it. The origin given by the author is more refined. I would venture to guess that it is not related to the story of the fairy world. The male and female protagonists have a fairyland relationship, and their son and daughter-in-law should also have one.
Judging from the copywriting of the next book, Nian'er is most likely either a bitter female supporting character who was deceived by the second scumbag, or a vicious female supporting character who covets her fiancé. I've been wondering since I saw the copy. Even though she was just Chu Liyu'er's adopted daughter, she wouldn't have developed a bad temper under their guidance. So, did she learn about her true life experience while growing up, and was taught by others? Under the instigation (such as the current queen mother in the next book), she believed that her biological parents were harmed by her adoptive parents. She could have become a real golden branch, but because her adoptive father "took" the crown prince position from her biological father, she was in an embarrassing position. I think so much, but I can't bear to see the daughter of the late Crown Prince Chu Xun end up in a bad way, and I don't want the adopted daughter that Yu'er and the others treat sincerely to turn into a white-eyed wolf.
Hahahahahaha, the strong girl is afraid of stalking the man
I feel that Nian Nian is not happy and will meet scumbags in the future, ugh
Finished spreading flowers!!! I'm really looking forward to their third life!
Is it true that Yu'er will only have one son, Chu Yi?
Nian'er is going to be the female supporting character in the next article
Help, am I the only one wondering if I can stop the brother and sister from turning against each other?