The Mary Sue Dilemma

Personally, I think your stories and characters always attract me. I also followed the Garden of Eden. From the Garden of Eden to The Dilemma of Mary Sue, the shortcomings of both books are obvious. The early stage was too long, so that later I felt that the plot at least had a long development, so it ended suddenly and the ending was very hasty. , I personally feel that it is not a bad ending, but that the ending that should have been told in more than 20 chapters was suddenly compressed into one chapter, and then ended unexpectedly. Many foreshadowings were not explained clearly, and Anton and the friend who went to see Ye Ke were not followed up. I hope you can improve this problem next time.

From Betrayer to Garden of Eden to Convict to Mary Sue, the relationship between the male and female protagonists in each novel is so strange and harmonious. The heroine's psychology is also very sympathetic, and the world view of the supernatural novel is also very complete. But why is it so rushed every time I write the ending? I feel that the early and middle stages of each novel are full of attractions, and I feel a little powerless in the later stages. However, because the characters are so well portrayed, I can't help but read on. . I don't know why every book is very interesting to me even though it has many flaws. Finally, I beg Li Zhongyan for extra chapters and new books.

Oh, it couldn't be Anton. Then he must have approached on purpose. I didn't expect Anton Xiaobaihua to have some tea.

Half a year has passed and I still can't find a meal replacement book. It's about superpowers + Mary Sue + all kinds of dank male protagonists + little white flowers who can do whatever they want and naturally. It seems that there are many similar novels about nuns, but they are not the same as this one. I beg you to write more extras or start a new novel! ! ! ! !

Ahhhh, I want to know the expression on the person involved, Judge Lu

It has the same problem as the previous books, the plot in the later stages is not good, the ending is forced, and the ending is unfinished.

Hahaha, so the heroine was still seduced by someone else [eating melon]

Laughing to death, I can't resist other temptations [laughing and crying]

It's a bit sudden, anyway, the ending is full of flowers, how about the next one is Qingcheng or Black Swan, if you don't want to read be [crying], then make a good outline and details before writing the novel, the characters are really good, and the plot will be better if it is strengthened [red heart]

It's over, I feel it's still a bit boring, but congratulations on the ending [Come on]