Eden [Apocalypse]

The author's ending is too perfunctory. It ended suddenly just to finish the story. I'm really disappointed. Everything in the previous setting was good... It's still hard to see this ending after following the story for so long.

Overall not bad. However, throughout the entire text, the physical foreshadowing of the female protagonist has almost no effect. The affairs of Gao Fei and Sang Ming are not clearly explained. The love and hatred between the female protagonist and the male protagonist are fascinating in the early stage but lack of stamina in the later stage. Gao Fei is not strong enough as the villain of the article, or the conflict is not obvious enough. The drug economy of Karelin City, which the author describes the most, and the series of events it brought about seem more like the focus of the article, but the heroine and the events are not more closely connected to create a plot, resulting in a lack of stamina, and many foreshadowings are not explained. It seems that the author does not want to write it! There are many advantages. The characters of the male and female protagonists are not superficial and have their own characteristics, but the characters are still a bit thin. The action descriptions are quite accurate, and it shows that they are carefully thought out. The most important thing is that the setting of the world view is relatively novel and has its own unique description, but it is still a bit thin in one sentence. I can see that the author has described the city of Karelin in a large space, but the image of this city is still not completely established in my mind. I think the author can focus on detailed description. If the city's personality can be highlighted in a small way, I will be more impressed than a straight description. Author, keep working hard. I see the potential of a great master in you, but these are just my personal opinions. The author should listen carefully and stick to yourself. The most important thing is.

This is a mess. . .

The sexual tension between the male and female protagonists in the early stage was too strong, but in the later stage, there was a lack of stamina. Neither the male or female protagonist is perfect, but the small characteristics of the characters are really written out. As mentioned in the article, if you are lucky, you meet Ye Kai, if you are unlucky, you meet Sang Ming. Anyway, Rongrong is a free person in the end.

I always feel that many things have not been explained clearly, but in fact, the ending of many things is already vaguely clear to us. But I really want to know if Rongrong's disease is cured or not.

I even think Gao Fei fell in love with Rongrong in the end.

I'm looking for a side story. I'm really curious about the sweet relationship between the family of three or the two Sheng Ye before the end of the world (the opportunity and way of expressing love between Sheng Ye before the end of the world in the article really poked me [vomiting blood]

The male protagonist is chauvinistic, and the female protagonist is pretty good at first. I don't know why the more I watch, the less strong she becomes. In the end, she seems to have been tamed. If she was convinced for love, then why wouldn't the male protagonist become like this? I can't see how strong the female protagonist is. Alas.

Why is it inexplicable? I drove high and drove low.

What kind of dark ending is this? I used to really like this book.