After Flirting with Five Male Leads, I Crashed and Burned

Emmm... It's a more general account... I don't know if it's a problem with the author's style or something else. I don't feel much about Su and Tian Chong... The male supporting characters also have no sense of presence, which is a bit disappointing...

Full subscription. After reading it, I want to say that if you are interested in watching cookies, I don't recommend buying it. The whole book feels like I went to a restaurant and ordered braised fish dish after dish. The menu looked very tempting, but when I was served, a plate of fish bones with various sauces came out. The whole article is basically written like a winter vacation diary composition. All the targets in the copy are listed once, and the heroine is snatched once in a very formalistic way. A little Lily element is added, and there is basically no too much in-depth emotional analysis. The article is over. There is basically no interaction between the male and female protagonists, and there is no relationship-building plot. The female protagonist just stands there and the male protagonist begins to like her. Originally, the male protagonist was supposed to be a villain, but in the end it was not written out. Inexplicably, the male protagonist became very fond of her, and then the female protagonist completed her mission and went home. It is obviously a very good subject and can be written very richly, but in the end, maybe due to the author's ability or other reasons, he wrote a 200,000-word anecdote, which is very regrettable.

Generally speaking, it is like boiling a frog in warm water. But it's still more palatable in Western Fantasy.

After reading it, I felt a little melancholy for no reason.

It feels a bit regretful that people in the other world have forgotten Alice, but it may not be a good thing for them to never forget it. Fortunately, in the end, it is considered he, and the flowers are over~

Ah, the characters are all so flat... The plot is also very streamlined... You can guess the rest of the story after watching it halfway... So I just skipped it all and watched the ending???

Is it gone? I'm going to whine. I thought the little hourglass that could turn back time was a clue.

Throw flowers! My favorite Western fantasy time travel otome! Easy Cookies, when can I find the next one 555

That's not right. The heroine should know about the God of Light. The last time I looked at the system, didn't it say that you have to have a good impression of him before he turns into light to succeed? Then I feel like everything is missing something. I suggest adding a few extras to make up for the shortcomings of the emotional drama.

Finished spreading flowers! Thanks for accompanying me! However... This emotional line feels like it has just begun, and there seems to be no big spark between the male and female protagonists... I feel like I have watched a movie trailer, but in short, it is very unfinished, so melancholy...