After Being Reborn, I Got Together with My Arch-Enemy

Most of the parts are really well written. The image of the mad dog at the end of the fourth chapter is really attractive. The interaction between the two protagonists is also very interesting. The mad dog and the femme fatale join forces. Although the mad dog is more powerful, he does not hurt Shou, and even willingly listens to Shou's words, just in exchange for a little meat, so you don't feel wronged when watching it. The writing is very good and it feels very addictive. It's just that I didn't follow up when describing the supporting characters. For example, the safe zone that I had been messing with for so long was released just because of a few words about the mother? It looked so frustrating. When I was reborn, I clearly wanted to sever ties with my scumbag brother and mother, and even wanted to kill them myself. That scumbag and his younger brother ended up letting his younger brother hold a birthday party in the safe zone because of his mother, and the end was coming. If they were allowed here, they would definitely grab this territory. How could they be allowed to come at this time? They shouldn't think of ways to destroy those uncles who were good to them. I brought my uncle and the dog here to wait for the end. I have been really angry from here on. Either I don't let them in from the beginning and line up more bodyguards to stop them, or I let them in and solve the problem directly. Instead, I just let them keep jumping around. I feel I felt that many people just couldn't stand it after reading this. I thought that the first part was so well written that there should be a twist in the later part, so I kept reading the later part. Later, my brother became the villain... And even my mother became the big boss, which was a bit unbearable. Now, I feel like my mother is a bit abrupt here. I skipped a few chapters and didn't pay much attention to where my mother became the big boss. I don't quite understand that my mother doesn't like an excellent brother but just likes a weak brother who is white lotus. Even for the sake of that brother. , It turned dark later. In the early stage, my mother really gave people a feeling of being weak and arrogant, and she was a little independent. She turned dark just because her younger brother died, and then became powerful. They can't be mixed up like this. I just think it's weird that my mother likes my younger brother too much. She can't help Shou and his younger brother when they have conflicts. She blindly protects her younger brother, which arouses their hatred of each other. My mother should be the one in the upper hand. I don't feel like it. Considering how much she values rights and interests, no matter what, at least she can't be an enemy of Shou. Shou is a very good successor. In contrast, her younger brother has stayed in the country for so long. Why doesn't her mother think about it if the family's things are given to her younger brother? Will she really not be ruined? Anyway, when I saw my mother and brother living so long after doing so many things, I really couldn't stand it. I kept jumping to watch the male protagonists interact with each other. I felt that the ending was quite good. The former mad dog died again without ruining his character. I like the second life of mad dog and look forward to their sweet side stories. I feel like I could spend more time on the supporting characters. The writing is very good. Like many great novels I've read, it's very touching. However, the supporting characters could be changed more to make their image fuller and smarter. The above is purely my personal opinion, and I don't mean to say that Dada's novel is bad. I quite like Dada's novel. The two male protagonists really poked me, but it's a pity that the supporting characters and the plot were mixed up. Otherwise, I feel that this novel could have been better. I wish you a smooth writing of the new article.

Thanks for reading and have a happy life

Bai Le's ending must be too tragic... His attack in the previous life was too bad

You must read this article without thinking, and you must collapse your worldview before reading it. Only in this way can we afford this pair of CPs. In the end, this is not about being strong. It depends on the strong ones not to come in.

??? Is Baile just gone?

Is it over?? I feel like this article could be further developed.

I'm interested in the pre-receipt, and I like the one where I can switch to attack directly without the crematorium.

Why is qaq so woo woo woo?

I don't like the attack in my previous life, it's disgusting

... For fsx in the previous life, it was better to just die... Oh my god, I hate this type of thing biologically!