One Piece: The Clouds Keep Flying

The author's writing is really, really good! The narrative style is unique, I wanted to praise it after reading the beginning! But Su still wants to make a small suggestion, because the author said it is the first time to write, and I think it is amazing to be able to write so well for the first time. But from the perspective of a reader, for an empty-headed person like me (I am Shazi Aba Aba, I will feel a little tired after reading it, but I am sleepy. The first 10,000 words just explain the resignation of the heroine, and I wrote such a long paragraph on this matter. If you are impatient, it will be really difficult to read, even if every time The paragraphs are very well written, but they are still a bit too long. So I think this kind of detailed narrative method is very special. It feels like reading a book in fan fiction? Well, it's the difference between reading a book and reading a novel. My expression may be very abstract. In short, I think some of the long and detailed descriptions can be cut out and focused. If the writing is simpler, more people will read it.

How to say it? One Piece is very happy overall, but this text is sad. After all, it starts with a war. It would be nice if there were more interactions with Luffy's protagonist group in the middle. There would be a chance to add these plots. Both the protagonist and the person the protagonist likes are original characters. The protagonist speeds up Luffy's journey to become the king and saves Luffy a lot of life. From this perspective, the entire world view of One Piece is a little sad again. I don't know why, but the last two people flashed, and I thought of the two people from Demon Slayer's Usagi... Just two short years have changed Joe's life. If he hadn't known his three brothers, would he have become a pirate or an admiral? Don't you have to ruin your efforts in the first half of your life in such a life-burning way? Well, it's hard to say. They are both brothers. Joe did something that the other two brothers couldn't do (or haven't done yet). He killed Blackbeard early. From this perspective, Sabo and Luffy are not as serious as Joe in avenging Ace. After all, they have their own partners and their own positions. I don't agree with Joe's waste of his life like this. People shouldn't live for others. Ace knows that he does this, so he must not agree with it. The good luck in his life seems to have been given to his three good brothers and his highlight moments in battle. Then he started his retirement life after beating Akainu, and he did not continue his life in his retirement life. It seemed that he had reached the end. Auntie's fruit ability seems to be able to transfer lifespan, can it be divided a little bit?

Everyone will die in the end, so no matter what, it's he (I can still fight!). This is the best ending.

I really like this article, the author is so awesome. The characterization of Joe is perfect, and you can even imagine Joe's movements and expressions. I admire girls like Qiao very much. Princesses rely on men, while queens rely on themselves. I was really happy after reading it. Thank you to the author for enduring the pressure and persisting in writing this book.

I am a person who has finished reading the synopsis and the first chapter before reading the epilogue. As expected, I still can't do anything. I will save it first and watch QAQ one day when I am equipped with armor. Let's take a look at the new pitfalls first

To be honest, if it hadn't been for the recent lack of literature and searching with tags, I really wouldn't have been able to find such good-looking pirate stories. Having been with Jinjiang for more than ten years, I actually have a thorough understanding of Jinjiang's writing style and novel routines. Every once in a while, there are only a few fan stories with grand and sophisticated worldviews. Among Pirates, the only ones that I have revisited over and over again in the past few years are those about Shunsui. I think it is possible to talk about love in fan fiction. After all, aren't fan fiction and novels written about a dream that is originally out of our hearts? But occasionally I still hope that these articles can be more realistic and closer to real life, such as psychological transition, suffering, struggle, every unknown life before the dawn rises... Etc. Perhaps it is because I am no longer at an age where I can make noises at will and turn a blind eye to reality and life, so I have higher requirements for novels? I also thought about a pirate novel that started with the death of Ace, because out of ten pirate novels, nine save Ace, which often makes me think that maybe someone should take a different route, and you just happened to write it. I'm surprised, really. But I'm also very happy that I finally found a pirate fanfic that is very close to me in terms of ideas. The world is really big. When you live in real life and face various problems and burdens that come one after another, love sometimes becomes slightly inferior. It's not that it's not important, but that there should be other more important things, such as goals, such as self—— Of course I also like the sweet and pure writing style (because it is very healing), but I also hope that this kind of realistic and logical thinking style can rise in fan fiction. However, I think it will not be easy. After all, even I am a giant of thought and a dwarf of action. I have tried my brain thousands of times in the past ten years without successfully writing an article. Perhaps I should not force myself too much. I should be grateful if I can encounter various fan fiction that is destined for me. So here, I still want to thank the author. Although this article did not gain much attention or fame, you still gritted your teeth and gave it a perfect ending. I hope you can continue to work hard, and I look forward to the day when your novel will be on the gold list. I also wish you a prosperous life and a bright future. Please forgive me if I feel the writing is messy. I managed to finish reading it tonight and I won't say much since I have to go to work tomorrow. All in all, come on. [Looks like I accidentally exposed my age hahahaha]

The sun that never falls, the moon that never burns out In my impression, few authors would write "Before Reading" at the beginning - this is equivalent to a kind of screening, a mutual screening between the author and the reader. What does screening mean? This means a shrinking audience and a decline in readership. Very few authors would open a separate chapter to clarify their concepts, telling readers what their creations contain and who they are suitable for. Be firm and uncompromising. This is not to say that the author does not allow writing suggestions, she is willing to listen to different opinions, but she cannot be swayed by any words about the core of the novel. But to be honest, what impressed me first was the content in "Before Reading". "Not all girls are made of sweets, spices and nice things. Some girls are born to fight and be fearless." "She has ideals and impulses. She is not willing to be left behind. She wants to fight hard. She can give up life and death for a promise. Because not only men deserve these things." I believe every girl has another self in her heart. Not a vassal of love, not a synonym for weakness, not a nightingale in a birdcage. It is a sword, a gun, and a light that tears apart all injustice and darkness. I remember when I was playing adventure RPG games as a child, what I liked most was the bond between the protagonist and other people. We help each other, we fight side by side, we say goodbye with a smile, and each begins a new journey. But when you need me, no matter the circumstances, I will eventually reach you. This bond is not limited to narrow emotions, nor is it swayed by conflicts of interest. It is the crystallization of sincerity. Be fearless because of sincerity, and be pure because of fearlessness. When a man gives up life and death for a promise, people praise him for his love and justice; when a woman gives up life and death for a promise, people pity her deeply. The meaning of "love" here is completely different. When the commitment of life encounters gender issues, emotions will always unconsciously move closer to love and become narrow and single. So, when the author wrote, "Men are not the only ones who deserve these things," I was devastated. I want to meet such a girl. The author's conception at the beginning is very clever, taking the aftermath of the War on the Top as the entry point, and putting the identities of Qiao Haijun and Ace's sworn brothers together, which almost became a dead end. Joe is caught in the middle, both sides want it, but in the end neither side can save it. For this, she has been regretting it. "I won't let him suffer this crime alone." This was her promise to Ace. So, while her leg injury had not healed, she and Marco and others faced off against Blackbeard's gang, killing Shiliu and Dai Peng in Orachion; she then fought against Blackbeard's gang and raped and killed the gang; she deceived the world just to punch Akainu... For a promise, she really risked her life. In fact, regarding this promise, I have always felt that when Joe said "he will not let him suffer this kind of crime alone", he not only refers to those who harmed Ace, but also refers to himself who failed to save him. She transformed into a vengeful ghost, exchanging pain for pain, blood for blood, and life for life. Every revenge, every memory, isn't it possible that Joe is accompanying Ace to suffer such a crime? Until finally, they meet in another world. Looking at Joe's smile, I thought that the "no regrets" at the end of the chapter not only included the moods of Luffy and Sabo, but also Joe's mood. She really... Has no regrets at all. The portrayal of Joe is very wonderful. In the many novels I have read, many authors like to shape the protagonist into a perfect positive character, with all advantages from a broad perspective. I admit that the perfection tendency of the protagonist's character reflects my (reader's) expectations of the protagonist to a certain extent. Who doesn't like nice things? However, the protagonist who tends to be perfect often makes me feel that he is very far away from me. Like mist, like a dream, almost like a god descending into the world. Are there really such perfect people in the world? Once I doubt the real existence of the protagonist, it is difficult for my emotions to be brought into the protagonist's emotions. After all, how can humans know the joys and sorrows of gods? However, Joe is not perfect. She has a weak side and a greedy side. Her revenge is reckless and her impulses are reckless. She is a contradictory being, both emotional and rational, both impulsive and cautious, both fanatical and cold. Positive and negative coexist in the body, positivity and negativity boil in the blood, and contradictions enrich her flesh and blood, encourage her heart, and light up her eyes. So, she appeared in front of us alive, with light blond hair and gray-blue eyes. The occasional glance she cast was like a bird's wings tapping the lake surface, revealing a bit of insouciance. Thus, our emotions resonate with hers. "The mud feet are trapped in a dilemma, and the rumbling rings of the sun and the moon are close to my ears; if I want to penetrate the turning point of opportunity in the flying clouds - I can only jump into the censure." Never give up in the face of difficulties, and fight against all criticism tenaciously and bravely to the end - this is a hymn unique to mankind, and it is also the war song played by Joe and Skylark in my heart. The skylark is the sun that never falls, Joe is the moon that never goes out. Skylark is the "look that we pursue" for Joe, so why isn't Joe the "look that we pursue"? I want to meet such a girl. I want to be such a girl. Joe is the sun that never falls——

Jieping, people who like themselves to be upward and willing to have a downward perspective.

Really amazing!! This is the first time I have read a JJ article so much. I feel that the so-called heroine is not all about love. Without love, there is nothing. This article satisfies all my fantasies about the heroine of One Piece fan fiction. I prefer to read sadistic articles. This article is really good.

Show me how depressed I am (tears) We are obviously reunited but I feel even more uncomfortable